So, what did you think of chapter 3?
DragonMaster128- I regret to inform you that I have never seen it. I have been trying to but still looking for a website that has it available for free. But I will definitely have to check it out
Please R&R, I would love some more feedback to hear what people think about my story. Well, here goes
Tubolcain sat down at his work table, where several sliver of metal and shards of fine jewels littered his work space. In the middle of the mess laid a chain composed of 21 links. The links seemed to be dull in color with the exception of a bright gold cross in the center of every other one. The centers has rubies that were cut and polished smooth. Tsukune and Moka stopped at the door way of his make shift work shop and began to look around the poorly light shed seeing several intricate tools lining the walls. "Tsukune!" Tubolcain called out to the boy.
This snapped him out of his curiosity as he entered the shed, stopping merely inches to the right of the metal smith.
"Try this on. It isn't finished yet, I still need to make a few more additions, and bless the chain before it can be used. Let me know how it feels." He immediately wrapped the chain around Tsukune's left arm three times, the fourth making the chain taut, but still loose enough to no cut off circulation to his hand.
"That's odd" thought the young ghoul. A look of curiosity covered his face as he lifted his arm to inspect the chain upon a closer look. "Hey, what exactly is this made of?" he asked.
"The links are made of two percent thoriated Tungsten. Now, granted, your thoraited Tungstens are slightly radioactive, but don't worry. As I read the letter that Moka sent to me over and over again, I wanted to take every precaution as I could to make sure that the holy lock would be strong enough to withstand the bursts of your own monster energy. That is why I used such a strong and heavy metal. The inlays in every other link are made from the purest golds found on the earth. The center of each crucifix is the purest grade rubies available, just for extra protection from your ghoulish blood lust." Tubolcain explained.
Moka entered the shed as soon as Tubolcain finished explaining to Tsukune the composition of the holy lock. She soon began to spoke up. "So, Tubol, will this holy lock…" She was abruptly interrupted by Tubolcain
"Ohh, you have nothing to worry about Moka." As he stood up, taking the chain off of Tsukune's arm he walked over to the silver haired vampire, stopping just a few feet from her to another work bench. He reached over the charred work table and retrieved a large steel hammer in his left hand and a torch with in his right. He fired the torch, with a slight pop, it came to life. The fire burned a bright blue, hot enough that the three of them began to sweat immediately. He looked back to Moka and with a pleasing smile and said, "Observe."
He placed the torch on a random link with the gold inlay and ruby center and began heating it to a glowing red, which occurred in mere seconds. He then quickly grabbed a wide cold chisel, placing it in the center of the link and raised the hammer high above his head, striking the opposing end of the chisel with tremendous force. The link that took a blow that would cut even the strongest of steels absorbed the impact as if it was rubber. He shut the torch off, placing it and the hammer back on the peg board lined wall and grabbed the end of the chain. He quickly spun around to Tsukune tossing the small chain at his face. "Catch!" He yelled.
Tsukune grabbed the part of the chain that had just with stood the blow, still glowing under intense heat. It immediately cooled to the touch has his hand come in contact with it. Tsukune looked at the chain and glanced up at Tubolcain with a puzzled look on his face. Tubolcain looked back at him, crossed his arms and returned the look with a sly smile.
"You see Tsukune, the material that I used to create the link in the chain is known for its strength, as well as its ability to dissipate heat quickly, which you will be thankful for later" Tubolcain informed him. "The Gold is inlayed for its purification purposes. You see, too much gold will seal it away completely, but the right amount used will allow you to tap into and use your energy, just not to its fullest extent. If you ever do use it to its full ability, you will permanently change into a blood thirsty ghoul. The rubies are at the center of the crosses to provide extra strength to absorb any excess energy that the gold itself can-not handle. It would take damn near the power of Alucard himself to get one of these links to snap"
Moka smiled wide at this news and couldn't help but let a small chuckle escape her lips as she heard this. "Oh, Tubol, I knew that if anyone would be able to make him a holy lock worth a shit, it would be you"
"Why, thank you kindly Miss Akashiya" Tubolcain replied, giving a small bow.
"Get up you old fool" Moka laughed.
Tubolcain stood back upright and looked at the two love struck teenagers with an almost sinister smile. "But, you see, I still need another day or so to make the lock itself, and to bless this lock properly. I hate to inform you that it simply won't be ready in time to make it to your parents place tonight. However, you two may sleep in my room tonight. As long as nothing to kinky goes on" He began to laugh as Moka and Tsukune both began to blush intensely as their minds ran rampant
"But that means Tsukune will see me, in my night wear! Oh shit, hopefully the bed is large enough so I'm not forced to cuddle up next to him." As Moka was thinking, Tsukune was doing the same.
"Oh shit, I get to sleep, next to the most beautiful girl in the entire world? Am I dreaming or is this even real? It's too good to be true"
Tubolcain broke the silent moment between the two young teens with a boisterous laugh "Oh shit, this is great. I mean shit you all, come on!" He looked Moka in the face. "It's obvious that you are in love with this boy, enough to the fact that you would inject him with your own blood to keep him alive, knowing damn well that he would forever be marked as yours"
He then looked at Tsukune, still laughing. "And you. How damn dense can you get?" He walked passed Tsukune, giving him a hard slap to the back of his head then murmuring behind him, "fucking dumbass"
Tubolcain walked to the back door, just before entering his home, he shouted back at the two still laughing, "I call the couch." With that he slammed to door as he walked inside.
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"Ok Moka, I'm decent, are you finished getting ready?" Tsukune said through the door to the bedroom
"Yes Tsukune, you may enter"
As he walked into the door, he saw the stunning vampire, lying already in the bed, the covers pulled up tight around her neck. As his nose began to drip just a little blood, Moka looked at him with a sheepish grin.
"What is it Tsukune?"
"N..Nothing Mo…Moka" he stammered trying to regain his thoughts. As he climbed into bed, lying on top of the covers, Moka let an exasperated sigh.
"Get under the covers genius, you're going to get cold, and I can't let my self be the cause of that," she said as the pulled the comforter out from under him, to quickly cover him up.
"Are you serious? You have got to be kidding me" Moka thought. Is her seriously asleep, already? And of course, he is shivering. Damn stubborn boy." Moka leaned up to notice that both of his legs were hanging out from underneath the covers in an attempt to give Moka her space. She reached over and gently placed his legs back towards hers, as she snuggled close to him, wrapping her right arm over him, pulling her ghoul closer to her. She felt his body temperature slowly begin to rise back to normal as she held him close to her. "Good night Tsukune," she whispered in his ear. "I love you."
No sooner had she said that, he responded back, still sound asleep. "I love you too Moka, so much. Thank you." Moka's cheeks turned a bright intense red. She pulled him closer and whispered "Goodnight"
Tubolcain heard what was going on in the bedroom as he lied on the couch, with his hands behind his head, his shirt draped over the back of the stiff, rugged couch. A slight smile appeared on his face as he realized just how much this boy really did love and respect Moka. He hoped that the two would stay together for life. Besides, they would make a damn good looking couple.
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The sun shined bright through the window, shinning directly into Tsukune's eyes. He let a light moan as he began to wake, welcoming the new day. He felt a warm arm holding him close, and the contour of Moka's body, pressed tight against his back. "Oh, shit, I fell asleep without a single word. I hope she doesn't think ill of me. She is so warm," he thought.
Moka let a light moan as she pulled him tighter. "No Tsukune, please, please don't go" she said lazily.
"Don't worry Moka, I won't go anywhere without you"
"Promise babe?"
"Did she just…call me... babe?" Tsukune was in shock to say the least. "She really does love me doesn't she?"
Tubolcain walked past the door way, a large coffee mug in his hand, still steaming from the fresh morning brew. He peered into the door way and simply muttered "no shit Sherlock," before taking a sip of his hot coffee. "I wouldn't wake her if I were you, so you're better off just lying there till she does herself. If she is anything like Akasha, she is not a morning person," he said before continuing his journey down the hallway, heading out the back door to his work shed.
Moka opened her eyes as the back door shut, noticing how close she was holding Tsukune. "Good morning Tsukune," she said with a smile.
Tsukune rolled over to his other side looking Moka in the face. "Good morning Moka" he said with a smile. "Want some breakfast?"
"That sounds absolutely amazing right now," she replied with a yawn.
"Even her yawns are beautiful" Tsukune thought
"Chomp slurp?" he asked
"Chomp slurp." She replied as she opened her mouth wide. Tsukune saw her fangs and was a little nervous, but as she sunk her fangs into his neck, he relaxed. "It isn't that bad really, just felt like a little nip," he thought to himself.
Moka drank her fill, as she finished, she gently ran her tongue in a circular motion over the evidence of a feeding that she had left behind, but before breaking free, gently ran her tongue up to the bottom of his ear before pulling away and landing a gently kiss just behind his right ear. Tsukune let a soft moan escape as she did this.
Moka looked up at Tsukune as a little bit of blood was left on the corner of her mouth. "Umm, Moka? You got a little bit of…" Moka quickly blushed looking away, wiping the remainder of her young loves blood from the corner of her mouth licking her finger clean. "Oh shit. Smooth one Moka, he probably thinks you're a glutton," she thought with shame and a little bit of self-loathing
"She is so fucking adorable when she first wakes, AND right after her first feeding." Tsukune obviously thought differently than the young, silver haired vampire.
Moka slowly got up out of bed revealing what she had resorted to sleeping in to keep Tsukune warm. As Tsukune saw here in a black bra with white lace and matching panties, his nose began to bleed. The Love sick teen grabbed his nose to keep from showing the blood that began to flow. Moka turned around and look him in the eye with a sly grin. "Do you like what you see Tsukune?" She asked him with a cute little wink.
"Moka, you're…. absolutely, stunning" Tsukune replied. As he said this, he felt as if a massive weight had been lifted off his shoulders. Moka blushed a bright, crimson red. She began to look at the ground before doing what Tubolcain said, and pushed her pride aside. "You know Tsukune, you shouldn't be so afraid of me." Her tone changed as she looked him in the eye, slowly stepping closer to him. "I... I love you Tsukune"
Tsukune, in shock at what he had just heard the most bad ass, beautiful vampire tell him, he tried to respond, but was to slow. Moka then tackled him on the bed, her face merely inches away from his. "I have wanted to do this for a while now" She said with a sinister grin before biting her lip.
"Wha…What's that Moka?" he stammered.
Without any hesitation, Moka leaned in and kissed him deep. Tsukune met her with a kiss equaling her passion just before a loud blast came from the shed in the back yard. "HARD…ROCK…HALLELUJAH… HARD…ROCK…HALLELUJAH!"
"Holy shit," Tsukune screamed as him and Moka both shot upright like a rocket just before hitting the floor.
"Damn Him," the now irritated vampire thought. "Tsukune, what is today?" she asked her love
"Umm, It's Sunday I believe. Why?"
"We need to leave him be for today. I'm going to go check on him and see how much longer he has until your Holy lock is completed. Don't go anywhere, Okay?" Moka down at him with a genuine smile and a wink before helping him up to his feet, quickly throwing on a Kimono she had packed, and heading out the back door.
"Wow, everything about her is amazing, her smile, her eyes, the way she sleeps and wakes. Where the hell have you been my whole life?" The young, new ghoul asked himself before walking over to his suitcase, pulling out some clothes he had packed with a few towels and headed to the bathroom to take a shower.
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"The saints are crippled, on this sinners' night, lost are the lambs, with no guided light. The walls come down like thunder, the rock's about to roll, It's the Arockalypse, now bare your soul" Tubolcain sang loudly along with the music.
Moka entered his shed, looking immediately for the large stereo that the music was emitting from. She snapped her head to her left seeing it on full blast, right next to her. She quickly slapped the pause button before speaking up.
"Are you seriously listening to Lordi, this early in the morning?" She asked him before remembering why she was so pissed. "Do you have any fucking idea what you just interrupted?"
Tubolcain snapped his head around to see Moka, in a white and cherry blossom designed silk Kimono, before adverting his eyes quickly. He began to laugh.
"By the lack of your clothes, I have a pretty good idea!" He immediately hunched over and began laughing even harder. This only lasted a few seconds before the now extremely embarrassed and pissed off vampire grabbed the first heavy object she could find to throw at him. The large C-clamp slammed into the side of his head knocking him out of his chair a few feet. He instantly got back to his feet, rubbing his head.
"Fucking shit that hurt. It's a joke not a..." Tubolcain said before he was interrupted by Moka. She closed her eyes as he saw a vein pop up just above her right eye.
"May God himself help you if you continue that sentence, jackass," Moka said in a straight forward voice.
"Okay, shit, I'm sorry." Tubolcain bent over, turning his chair back upright and finding his seat again before reaching for what seemed to be an ancient stone knife made from marble
"What's up" He asked almost seeming like he forgot about having the living shit knocked out of him
"I just wanted to see how much longer you have until Tsukune's Holy lock is finished"
"Well, I was just about to bless it, right before you walked in. So, I say a few hours and it will be done." He replied before dragging the stone blade up the outer side of his fore-arm, letting the blood drench the chain he already had finished.
"If you would like, you can show Tsukune around the area a little bit, there is a nice coffee shop just around the block. And don't worry about either one of you being figured out that you two are monsters. The customers and employees are used to it." With these words, Moka abruptly turned around leaving the shed, slamming the door behind her.
"MUSIC!" Tubolcain screamed from inside his work shed.
"You have legs, I recommend you use them" Moka yelled back before returning inside.
Hope you all enjoyed this chapter as well. With the Holidays VERY near, it may take me a few days longer to update. So please stay with me here. I have great plans for this story (or so I feel) But I will update very soon. Until next time, please give me a review, tell me what you think. Oh, and sorry for a few of the errors in the past chapters, I get a little eager to post that I skim over a few of them by accident
Disclaimer: I do NOT own any rights to the band Lordi, or anything they have produced whether it be live or in studio.
