I am dyslexic, I'd appreciate constructive comment not destructive comments. (not that I would read or take note of Destructive comment any way. You'd be wasting your time) I have spell checked and everything but if you do spot grammar or spelling that isn't correct ( as word is not god!) please PM do not write it on a comment as its very embarrassing having dyslexia!
Only a short one sorry :3
"Eragon must you go?" Aella asked worried. She chewed the inside of her cheek concerned. Yes she may have bonded with the dwarves and Bilbo, mostly the brothers and Bilbo but the fact Thorin had shouted at her about Zillas behaviour concerned her still.
"Yes Aella I have to go. Listen have this," He handed her a ring "I placed a spell on it to lead you home. Were ever Saphira and I are you will find us. Ware it when you feel like you have finished your task. Remember who and what you are. No one can stand in your way." He placed a kiss on her forehead.
Saphira did the same. Zilla grumbled, her head throbbed and she would miss her friend-dragon. Aella could feel the two talking in the back of her mind. Eragon soon mounted Saphira and bid his far well.
"I will see you soon. May the winds carry you far!" She waved him good bye and felt a lump grow in her throat. For 50 years she had never been apart from Saphira and Eragon. She loved them like family. Zilla nuzzled her head as dread set in her heart like a stone.
Fear not my rider. We are together and non can stop us
Aella placed a hand on her shoulder and walked with her to find food.
