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Chapter 4
The surge of concern filled Leafkit when Amberkit awoke with awe, because she never woke up like that. She noticed that a fit or coughing made her mode of sour, there was churching emotions hitting her like a wave. It was the same feeling from yesterday. She even started coughing which announced her awaking. "good morning Leafkit" Amberkit said with a purr. "good morning" she murmured back. She closely examined her sister watching her carefully glossing up her beautiful amber coat. Then she realized she should give her coat a cleaning to. Then when she finished she also noticed that Amberkit was staring intently at her as if she held a grudge. "Leafkit come here now so I can properly clean your fur" she calmly meowed with a look of concern. Leafkit took a step forward then hesitated then continued when she was at her sister's side. She gasped at how shinny and glossy her pelt looked, "surprised eh" grunted my sister with a snort.
"what am I to be surprised" murmured Squirrelkit.
"nothing Squirrelkit, go back to sleep" Leafkit said in a soothing whisper. Then she scolded Leafkit for waking up their sister, then she realized that Sandstorm saw and heard everything. Sandstorm purred at the fact that my fur bristled.
"it's not funny, you scared the heck out of us" murmured Amberkit through the nest she 'hid' in. Mother purred even harder and said that she was going to get fresh-kill and if we wanted anything. "squirrel" they both said in laughter then quickly recovered and groomed their fur even more.
Amberkit's point of view
She wanted to tell her sisters what happened in her dreams but they were really busy since Leafkit was helping Cinderpelt EVERY DAY!
And Squirrelkit was too caught up in becoming the second most skillful hunter, and every opportunity there was no one at camp entrance she sunk out. I was tired of being inactive, yes there was play fights with Shrewkit but nothing else. She just wanted to let go and be free but she couldn't seem to speak but run away. She was a coward who just couldn't face her fears and tell secrets and get close to anyone. Well there was Brambleclaw a handsome lovely dark tabby tom, but he had gotten distant. She gazed at the can and how active and lively everyone was, and cheerful with their eyes glimmering with hope. Suddenly she felt dizzy and unsure and then she collapsed in the middle of the clearing.
"is she okay" a soft voice murmured with uneasiness.
"ok course she is now let her rest she's in good hands. She does not seem to have a fever or anything alright now leave" a voice with determination meowed. Then I felt like I was falling asleep again…
Flashback
I was back where I left off chasing father and mother, then they appeared and dashed off. I quickly scrambled after them not to lose them. They were fast as …. um …oh yes rabbits, and very swift until they slowed down, I came up beside them to see the ravine.
"welcome Amberkit this was the past after your former self Amber choose to live in Starclan" meowed a voice she tried to see who it was but saw no one.
"now you got what you wised for" said anther voice.
Then she felt the her world fall beneath her.
