Hey peoples! I'm back for chapter four! I've written a few more chapters too! Anyway, I've been writing the past few chapters with no idea about psychology, apart from what I've learnt watching crime shows and Criminal Minds. Well, I borrowed a book on psychology and hopefully, it might help me. If it doesn't, oh well.
When
Reid opened his eyes the second time, pain seared through his stomach
and head. He looked around the room. He was still in the same room,
this time he was just tied to the pole.
He wriggled his arms and
hands are little, trying to get the rope tying him to the pole loose
but it was useless.
Just then, the female and Cade entered the
room. She grinned at Reid, and then glanced at Cade.
"Go
ahead." She said, and then Reid saw the short, thin, metal pole
Cade had in his hand. Reid's eyes widened and the female laugh. She
walked toward him, and stopped within a centimetre of Reid's face.
She laughed again, obviously happy at Reid's discomfort. She kissed
him on the cheek. The male groaned.
"Ava. You'll get your
fun. It's my turn first." He groaned. 'Ava' glanced at him
and rolled her eyes. She curled a strand of Reid's hair around her
finger, before stepping back. Cade grinned and stepped forward,
before swinging the pipe back and slamming it into Reid's stomach.
Reid struggled to breath as Cade slammed the pole into his stomach,
again and again. Reid coughed, and he realised with a start that he
was coughing up blood.
Cade and Ava just laughed, as Cade swung
the pole up again. He slammed it into his stomach again, and then
started hitting Reid's legs with it.
Reid saw Ava step forward
and put a hand on Cade's shoulder. He saw her whisper something
into Cade's ear. Cade grinned. He handed the pole to Ava. She
grinned and Reid gasped as she slammed into his stomach. She hit him
a few times, before throwing the pole away. She gestured for Cade to
untie him.
Cade did so then pulled another needle out of his
pocket. He smirked as he injected it into Reid's arm. He pulled it
out, then stepped back.
"Have fun." He said, before leaving
the room. Reid looked up and realised with a start that Ava was
taking her jeans off. A shiver went down his spine as Ava reached
forward. Reid struggled as Ava tried to pull his shirt off but the
drugs were making him weak.
She grinned and as his eyes closed,
she started tugging at his jeans. She pulled them off.
As she
pinned him to the ground, he finally lost consciousness.
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When JJ
woke she was in the same room before, but the TV was off. She sighed
in relief. She didn't want to see any more pictures of dead babies.
She glanced around the room but it remained unchanged. She fought at
the ropes tying her to the chair, but they were still tied tight.
She looked behind her when she heard the door open. They were
back.
"Good news. You're coming with us." She said, and
gestured for the male to untie her.
"Where are the others?"
JJ asked, as the male pulled her up.
"You know we can't tell
you that." The female said, as the male retied JJ's hands and
feet. When he was done, he injected another needle into her arm. He
pulled her up and holstered her over his shoulder.
JJ's
consciousness was fading as she felt herself being thrown into the
back of a car.
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The
hour was nearly up when Hotch and Rossi pulled into the warehouse.
They were wearing GPS, microphones and hidden cameras so Garcia could
analyse the whole thing.
Rossi climbed out of the car first, as
soon as Hotch stopped the car. He pulled the duffle bag filled with
the money from the back seat.
Together, they walked over to the
door of the closest warehouse. There was a note stuck to the door.
Go Inside And Put The Bag On The Desk, it said. Hotch and
Rossi glanced at each other. Hotch made sure Garcia could see the
note, before walking inside with Rossi.
They found the desk. The
desk was dark brown and was in the middle of the large room. There
was a smaller room off to the side but there appeared to be no other
rooms in either direction. Rossi stepped forward and placed the
duffle bag on the desk.
As soon as the bag hit the desk the door
leading to the smaller room swung open. Both Hotch and Rossi pulled
their guns out and trained them to the door. Hotch moved forward and
Rossi followed. They walked inside the room, and the door swung
closed behind them. They spun around. As Hotch tried to open the door
Rossi looked around the room.
"Hotch." He said, his eyes
focused on one corner of the room. Hotch turned around and looked in
the direction Rossi was starring at.
In the corner, limp and
lifeless, was JJ. Rossi and Hotch ran over to her.
"JJ? Can you
hear me?" Hotch asked, sinking to his knees and holding JJ in his
arms. He tried to wake her up. Rossi pulled out his phone, standing
up. He immediately dialled 911.
"Hotch, there's no signal."
He said when the call didn't connect. He put the phone away in his
pocket.
"Come one JJ. Wake up." Hotch murmured, shaking JJ.
He put his ear to her chest. "Rossi, she's not breathing!" He
cried out. Rossi ran over to them, as Hotch laid her down. "You do
breaths, I'll do compressions." Hotch instructed. Rossi nodded.
Rossi blew into JJ's mouth twice and Hotch started pressing on her
chest.
"1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10." He counted as Hotch watched.
Hotch had gotten to twenty seven when JJ came around. He cleared
her airway, before hugging her tightly.
When he let her go, she
coughed and smiled. "Thanks." She murmured. Rossi glanced behind
them only to see the door was open again. Rossi helped Hotch pick up
JJ and they carried her out to the main warehouse.
The bag was
gone from the desk. Rossi pointed this out to Hotch without words as
they left the warehouse. As soon as they left the warehouse, Rossi
pulled his phone out again. He dialled 911 for the second time that
day. This time the call connected.
Rossi asked for an ambulance
as Hotch opened the back of the SUV and laid JJ down.
"Are you
ok?" He asked, handing her a water bottle. She nodded. "Do you
know how the others are? If you're not up to it, I understand."
He said, taking the water bottle when he finished. She shook her
head. "They separated us. Is it true? Do they have Morgan and
Reid?" She asked. Hotch nodded, glancing at Rossi.
"What
about Prentiss?" He asked, puzzled.
"She was with me when I
was taken. Hotch, we were in the BAU bathrooms. They got into the
BAU, Hotch." She replied, crying. He wrapped his arms around her
and pulled her into a hug.
"It's okay. You're safe now."
He whispered. She shook her head.
"But the others aren't.
God, Hotch it was horrible." She said into his chest. He stroked
her hair.
"Shh. Don't talk. Not yet." He murmured. She
nodded and gulped. Rossi appeared beside them.
"Ambulance will
be here in a second." He said, rubbing JJ's back. They pulled out
of their hug.
As JJ had another drink, Hotch and Rossi walked a
few metres away.
"She said they separated them all." Hotch
said, as Rossi kept an eye out for the ambulance.
"And she knew
Reid, Morgan and Prentiss were there too?" Rossi asked. Hotch
nodded.
"Prentiss was there when JJ was taken. I presume their
captors told her about Morgan and Reid." Hotch replied.
"But
we don't know for sure where they have Morgan or Reid?" Rossi
asked. Hotch shook his head.
"Or Prentiss." Hotch replied.
Rossi nodded as they hear the ambulance sirens. Hotch walked over to
JJ. Rossi directed the ambulance to where they were, and they soon
pulled up.
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Hotch
and Rossi were back at Rossi's office, and JJ at home resting, when
they got the next call.
"Agent Rossi." Rossi said, as he hit
the 'Speaker Phone' button.
"Hello Agent Rossi and
Hotchner. I trust you found the team member you choose earlier?"
The female from before asked.
"Yes, we got JJ back. What about
the others?" Rossi replied. She laughed.
"One thing at a
time, Agent Rossi." She replied. "Firstly the second payment
needs to be made in four hours. Then you will get the next agent
back." She said. Hotch and Rossi glanced at each other.
"Do
we get to pick the agent?" Rossi asked. Hotch and he had discussed
it and had decided on who would come back next. She laughed again.
"Nope. That was just politeness. You don't get to choose any
of the other agents." She replied.
"Our supervisor won't
let us give you any money. It's not FBI policy to negotiate with
criminals." Hotch tried, as his mobile vibrated in his pocket. He
pulled in out. Caller I.D told him it was Garcia. He silently opened
it and walked over to the door.
"Very well. Find a way around
your supervisor or your agents will pay. You'll get another video
as incentive." Hotch gulped as he listened to Garcia rattle
on. The dial tone filled the air as the team's captor hung up.
"Have you got anything concrete?" He asked Garcia as Rossi
checked his emails.
"I've narrowed it down sir. There have
been seven persons that died during arrests that have living family
members. But only four have a male and female." She said.
"I'll bring the cases up to you in a minute, sir." She replied.
Hotch glanced at Rossi as he closed his phone.
"Any new
emails?" He asked, walking around to Rossi. Rossi shook his head.
"No. I was just thinking about the videos." He said. "I
think there's an inside man." He said. Hotch frowned.
"Rossi,
them reading our files is on thing but having an inside man? That's
something entirely different." He said, shocked.
"The way
they torture the team. They tortured JJ mostly psychologically, using
pictures of murdered babies. So they must know she has a child, and
that that's her soft spot. And Morgan. They tortured him
physically. There's got to be an inside man." Hotch nodded,
thinking over what Rossi had said.
"Maybe. Then we've got the
task of finding who it is." He muttered. He pulled his phone out as
Garcia knocked on the door. He put the phone away and opened the
locked door for her.
"Sir. The case files." She said, holding
out a bunch of files. Hotch grabbed them and gestured for her to come
in.
"Did you tell anyone what you were doing?" Hotch asked.
Garcia shook her head. "Good."
"What's going on sir?"
She asked. Hotch glanced out of the window of Rossi's office.
"We
think there's an inside man. You can't tell anyone what you're
doing okay?" She nodded.
"Is JJ okay?" She asked. Hotch
nodded.
"She was sent home to get some rest. She said she'd
be back tomorrow." He replied. Garcia smiled.
"Thank god one
of them is okay!" She said. Hotch nodded. "Did she know anything
about the others?" Hotch shook her head.
"They were
separated, presumably so she couldn't tell us anything." He
replied. Garcia nodded.
"You'll tell me sir, straight away,
if anything happens won't you?" She asked, turning to leave.
"Of
course." Hotch and Rossi replied. Garcia smiled weakly before
leaving the office. Hotch locked the door behind her.
"Now
what?" Rossi asked.
"I honestly have no idea." Hotch
replied.
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