AN: I sed stup flaming ok wander's name is WANDO nut mary su OK! HATER IS SOO IN LUV wif him dat he is acting defrent! dey nu eechodder b4 ok!
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"HATER!" I shouted. "What the fuck do you think you are doing?"
HATER didn't answer but he stopped the flying car and he walked out of it. I walked out of it too, curiously.
"What the fucking hell?" I asked angrily.
"Wander?" he asked.
"What?" I snapped.
Hater leaned in extra-close and I looked into his gothic red eyes (he was wearing color contacts) which revealed so much depressing sorrow and evilness and then suddenly I didn't feel mad anymore.
And then… suddenly just as I Hater kissed me passionately. Hater climbed on top of me and we started to make out keenly against a tree. He took of my top and I took of his clothes. I even took of my bra. Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time.
"Oh! Oh! Oh! " I screamed. I was beginning to get an orgasm. We started to kiss everywhere and my orange body became all warm. And then….
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUKERS!"
It was….Commanda Peepers!
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review by Who'stheuniverse'sultimateevildoerHAteR:
"ONE, this is stupid! wander would NEVER be cool enough to wear any of that stuff! Or listen to any of that cool music! AND WHAT DID ME AND WANDER DO? WHAT IS YOU-KNOW-WHAT?"
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review by HaterxPeepers4ever
"Once again, I'm appalled by how low the standards of this site have fallen! Dominator, do you understand the basic concept of grammar, hmmm? And Hater and Wander would never get together! Nor would I ever use the the word "motherfukers"! It seems that someone here doesn't understand how to keep anyone in character. I'm reporting this, fic and I hope to see it taken down shortly! Your account is getting banned, you can count on that!
Anyway, if anyone wants to read QUALITY fanfiction, please read "Everlasting Love" by me. Chapter 104 should be up soon! Will Hater finally confess his love for the tall and ever handsome Commander Peepers?"
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review by neverhurtstohelp5000000
"Well, Dominator, it's,,,very creative as always! Uh…I like the imagination behind all of it! Considering a whole lot of it, is awful odd to say the least… but uh, you truly are a writer at heart, Dominator! Though if I had…a very very small suggestion, I think children go on this website, so maybe, leave the erotic fiction out of this particular story,,,,,,"
