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Tris POV

I get into his Jeep. We start driving away from my house in silence. After the first sixty seconds I'm already bored out of my mind so I turn on the radio. But because it's not on radio and on CD instead the beginning of the song comes on straight away.

To my surprise, it's Linkin Park. One Step Closer. I love this song! We both stay silent for a bit but when we get further into the song we start jammin out.

"I cannot take this anymore

Saying everything I've said before

All these words they make no sense

I find bliss in ignorance

Less I hear the less you'll say

You'll find that out anyway

Just like before...

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

I'm about to break

I find the answers aren't so clear

Wish I could find a way to disappear

All these thoughts they make no sense

I find bliss in ignorance

Nothing seems to go away

Over and over again

Just like before...

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

Shut up when I'm talking to you

Shut up, shut up, shut up

Shut up when I'm talking to you

Shut up, shut up, shut up, shut up

I'm about to BREAK

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break"

When's the song's over we both stare at each other in complete awkwardness. Meh. Who cares! I just wanna get this date over with all ready.

"You like Linkin Park?" he asks me.

"Yes!" I say. "I love them! They're my third favourite band!"

"Who are your first two?"

"Number two: Skillet, number one: Evanescence." I smile. "What 'bout you? The mysterious Four. What are your top three?"

He pretends to think. "One: Linkin Park, two: Skillet, three: Five Finger Death Punch."

"I'm very offended that Evanescence isn't in your top three," I say.

"Well, yeah. That's because Evanescence sucks. Do you know how girly that it?"

I laugh. "Evanescence? Girly? You have got to be kidding!"

"I'm not."

"Just because a girl sings it, it doesn't mean it's girly," I say. "Have you even listened to the lyrics?"

"Whatever. We're here." He pulls up in the McDonalds parking lot. Wow. He sure is fancy.

We opens the door for me to enter and I give him a stare. He laughs. We line up.

When it's our turn he orders a large McFeast meal and I get a small Big Mac meal.

We sit at a table next to a window so we have a great view of the parking lot. Whoopie!

"So...how was your day?" he asks me.

"It was kind of crap. I lost a bet and now I have to go on a date with some guy I don't even know," I say. "What about you?"

"Well," he starts, "it was actually pretty great. I won a bet and now I get to go on a date with this really hot chick!"

I smile. "Hmm, we've had some very similar days."

"Yeah," he mumbles and we both take a bite of our burgers.

When we finish we decide to walk around the streets. At eight at night. Yay!

"Rate me!" he says.

"What?" I say.

"Rate me, one to ten. Do it."

"Okay, wow you're weird. Uh...five and a half."

"Wow! I've never been rated so bad before. I mean, the lowest anyone has ever given me, one to ten, is eleven. You halved that. I feel so ashamed."

"What would you rate me?" I ask.

"Out of ten?" I nod. "Eleven and a half." I smile.

We pause halfway through the foot path and stare at each other. We both smile. I stare deep into his eyes and he does mine. They are so beautiful and blue and gorgeous. I had never noticed how handsome he is.

I feel a sharp pain in my head and I fall to the ground. I'm about to get up when I get pulls to my feet and I feel something metal near my throat.

I look down. It's a knife. I start to struggle against the person but then I feel the knife disappear and feel an excruciating pain in my side.

I'm about to scream but my screams get muffled by a hand. The knife is held back to my throat and I feel a drop of my blood drip down my neck. A tear slips and rolls down my cheek.

I look up at Four and he looks pissed off.

"Money, now," the person behind me says.

Four goes to give him his wallet and the guy takes his hand from my mouth. When the guy puts his hand closer to Fours, Four drops his wallet and punches the guy in the face.

The guy, obviously pissed, stabs me in the arm and I scream. Four kicks the guy this time and the guy drops me. I fall to the ground and hit my head on the concrete.

I hear screaming and thrashing behind me along with grunts and whimpers.

After a couple of minutes Four is by my side whispering things into my ear. "Tris, are you okay? I'm sorry. Don't worry, he won't be back. Can you get up? Tris? Can you hear me?"

And that's when I black out.

Ooh. That was a major twist in the chapter. It was all like "I like your eyes, kiss me" and then it was like "Hey dat bitch just stabbed me, kill him!" Wow. I love myself, I'm sorry. Anyway, please follow, favourite, review, review, and review.

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