Please review I want to know if these lemons are too hot to be allowed on fanfiction site or should I make them more child appropriate

Part four Hermione and Nick
Hermione was in the Griffindor common room and she was doing stuff when all of a sudden.. "NEARLY HEEDLESS NICK!" screamed a voice. Hermione couldnt see who it was because it was invisible and it was invisible. "I WANT TO SEX WITH YOU" Okay said Hermione then she took of her clothes. Nick pit his invisible thingy in her thingy. Except it was like they werent really doing it because he was a ghost so his thingy didnt really exist. So I was just sorta like phone sex.