NARUTO UZUNAMI THE FIRST SHINOBI
Chapter 4 : The Shinobi and Elemental Nations
Author Notes :
For those who don't like this fanfiction, please don't read it. Because this fanfiction will be much different from the original storyline, because that is what we called fanfiction, must have differences from the original manga and anime.
Thanks to all the reviewers for their encouraging and suggestions. Also thanks to all readers who put me or this story to their povorites, and all of the followers
Hope all of Senpais or seniors author understand with the poor of story plot. English is not my native language so there will be many grammer mistakes.
In this fanfiction, there will be overpower Naruto or godlike Naruto with multi kekei genkais. The pairing will be Naruto/MassHarem with M rate just for safety.
This story is inspired by many of my favourites stories, so there may a few similarities there.
Naruto's girls currently : Kaguya O, Mito U, Toka S, Temari, Sakura H and Hinata H.
Disclaimer : Naruto is the property of Masashi Kishimoto-san, I only borrowing the characters for fun sake.
"Uzu Nami" : Human speaking
'Uzu Nami' : Human thinking
"Uzu Nami" : Deity or Summon speaking
'Uzu Nami' : Deity or Summon thinking
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It has been one week since the end of the second great ninja world war, all ninja troops had returned to their respective villages. Now all the villages was counting the damages resulted by the great war that has lasted this long.
xxx Amegakure no Sato xxx
Amegakure no Sato now has been deserted from battle cries and the sound of explosions. The village of the Shonsuou no Hanzu indeed the most severely damaged, as it has become the main battleground of all the hidden villages.
Right now, Hanzu the village leaders were standing watch her kunoichis who working to fix the state of their village. The masked kunoichi actually just recovered from her wound and running out of chakra in her final battle. Behind this masked kunoichi standing Mayu and two of her trusted kunoichi to report on the their final battle and the the state of village. "Start talking, Mayu-san" said the Amegakure's leader.
Hearing that, the black haired kunoichi said "Iwagakure forces has left the village, Hanzu-sama. Our alliance to destroy Konoha forces has ended". See Hanzu just nodded her head, Mayu said again "Forgive us, Hanzu-sama. Me and Fuku-san and the Iwagakure kunoichis could not hold Sukino Hatake and her ninja"
Turn around and looked at the three kunoichis infront of her, her gaze stopped at the blue haired kunoichi with katana on her back, Hanzu then asked "Tell me what happened, Fuku-san?". Hearing that question, Fuku who is none other than Mayu's friend in battle against Sukino, tell her leader what happened.
"Hearing the story, Fuku-san and Nee-san. That mean the kunoichis who broke into prison tower at that time was friends of that person who claimed to be a 'shinobi', Hanzu-sama" said the dark haired kunoichi turned out to be Mayu's sister.
Seeing her leader was silent after hearing the explanation, Fuku encouraging herself to ask "Are we going to looking for information about those people, Hanzu-sama?"
"Of course, Fuku-san. But now we will focus on revamping the village beforehand". Hanzu paused and then added the word "Accelerate the new ninja training program, Mayu-san. We have to get the power of our troops back as soon as possible, Amegakure must not look weak"
Hearing the order from their leader, with the answer of "Yes, Hanzu-sama". The three kunoichi was immediately went to do the task.
'If this 'Shinobi' is not from one of the hidden villages, that mean all the villages will search for him. But it seem that blond man was so defending on Konoha, could he one of that village ninja?', Hanzu thought without knowing the exact answer.
xxx Kirigakure no Sato xxx
"That man called himself a 'Shinobi' and claimed not belong to any village, Mizukage-sama" said the brown haired kunoichi who stood facing the mist village leader finishing her report.
"So that man was very strong?" asked a beautiful woman with black hair decorated with bead like pearls, wearing Kirigakure standard clothes under her black cape with ragged sleeves. This woman is none other than Sandaime Mizukage, kunoichi who just took the office after her predecessor was killed during the fight of life and death with Nidaime Tsucikage of Iwagakure no Sato.
"Correct, Mizukage-sama" said the brown haired kunoichi quickly without the slightest doubt in her word.
"Then continue the investigation of this stranger, but do not get involved in direct conflict with the other villages. The death of Nidaime-sama and many of our kunoichis who died in this war has been troubling us greatly"
"Right, Mizukage-sama^ answer her subordinate who then immediately left Kirigakure village leader room to carry out the task.
'The other villages must have known about this 'Shinobi' thing and will soon send their ninja to search for him. Then Kirigakure must also make it move immediately', thought the Mizukage while continue her work.
xxx Kumogakure no Sato xxx
"What.." cried the blonde woman with the typical Kumogakure ninja vest clothing, after hearing a report from one of the kunoichi in charge for collecting information on the progress of the ninja world war.
"Ri.. right, Raikage-sama. Hanzu was defeated by that man who called himself a 'Shinobi' in that short battle" said the gray haired kunoichi with Kumogakure jonin standard uniform who was standing in front of the Sandaime Raikage, repeating her statement, even though she felt a little scared because her leader's scream.
'Could it be, Konoha has managed to find a way to make the men could have a strong chakra core' thought the Raikage. "We have to figure out what villages this 'shinobi' came from. If necessary, we have to catch him. Form a team to carry out this mission quickly"
"Right, Raikage-sama" said the gray haired kunoichi which then disappeared behind the smoke of shunshin no jutsu.
'A lot of unexpected thing happen in this second ninja world war. How strong Konoha under your leadership Hiruko-teme' thought the blond woman as she sat and watch over at her village.
xxx Iwagakure no Sato xxx
The tiny woman with black hair was seen pacing back and forth in front of a black haired kunoichi. Right in front of the black haired kunoichi who none other than Aika, the tiny woman stopped and said "Are you sure about that information, Aika-san?"
"Yes, Onoka-sama" said the Iwagakure kunoichi quickly. "We don't get much information, because it was so unexpected event and occur very quickly, and when we were free from that genjutsu the 'shinobi', that three kunoichi and the kunoichis of Konoha has long gone, Sandaime-sama" said Aika after seeing the Sandaime Tsucikage was silent.
After thinking for a moment, the Tsucikage then said "You're the most familiar with this 'Shinobi' and his friends, Aika-san. So you are in charge to investigate it, if necessary you have to catch them, take the best of our information searching team with you"
"Right, Tsucikage-sama" said Aika who immediately walked out of the Iwagakure leader office.
Onoka the Sandaime Tsucikage herself just standing there while thinking 'Iwagakure strength has been greatly reduced since the death of Nidaime Tsucikage, so Iwa should get that great ninjas to make the village force recover quickly'.
xxx Sunagakure no Sato xxx
Sandaime Kazekage was a beautiful woman with shoulder length black hair that tied in two ponytail and was wearing black and white shirt, fitted with blue pant.
Currently the Kazekage was sitting behind her desk listening to the report from her subordinates. "Finally the war come to an end. What about the battle in the Amegakure, Ibiza-san?"
"Konoha won this war, Kazekage-sama" said a black haired kunoichi stood in front of the Kazekage, then the kunoichi explain the result of her investigation in the village of rain.
After hearing the report from Ibiza, the Kazekage then said "That mean we must immediately carry out further investigation, because other villages must have gotten the news about this 'Shinobi' thing". After a pause for a second, the Sunagakure leader give her order "I leave this information searching task in your hand, Ibiza-san. You may choose the members of this team yourself"
"Okey, Kazekage-sama. But what if we facing them directly?" asked the black haired jonin.
"You must try to convince them to join our village!" replied the Kazekage.
"Then I'll prepare the team and departed, Kazekage-sama". After seeing her leader nodded, Ibiza immediately leave the office of Sunagakure's leader.
Stayed alone in her room Sandaime Kazekage start to continue her work while thinking 'Actually, wich one of the village behind the emergence of this 'shinobi'?. Hopefully Ibiza successfully in her mission'.
xxx Konohagakure no Sato xxx
In the office of Konohagakure leader, we could seen a woman who was sitting behind her desk. This woman dressed in a form of white robe above her red shirt, she wore a red and white hat with kanji for 'Fire' writing on it. This woman is none other than Hiruko Sarutobi the Sandaime Hokage. Standing in front of Hiruko four kunoichis that wearing standard Konoha gray vest, the four of them none other than Sukino Hatake, Tsunade Senju, Miraiya and Orika.
"It's look like your mission goes well, Sukino-san?" Hiruko asked while exhaling smoke from her mouth after sucking her favorite pipe.
"Actually, this prisoners saving mission almost failed, Sandaime-sama" said Sukino is justified by the three students of Sandaime Hokage. Furthermore, almost one hour the four kunoichis who recently home, start tell and explain all that they have experienced during their mission in Amegakure.
"So that was it. That mean this 'shinobi' is the one that break through the village four days ago" said Hiruko then immediately sucked Her pipe a few times to calm herself. After blowing the tobacco smoke, she then shouted "ANBU, bring her here now!"
Sandaime Hokage words about someone break through the village make the four kunoichis get surprised to only looked at one another. Sukino had just wanted to say, when swirl of leaves appeared in the room, typical shunshin of Konoha. When the swirl of leaves gone, in front of the Hokage, or to the left of the four kunoichis stood a bird masked ANBU holding a brown haired little girl, in the age around thirteen years old.
The four kunoichis can only be staring at the two people who had just arrived, until the little girl said, "Tsunade nee-chan, Orika sensei"
The words from that little girl made the blond and dark haired sannin back to their senses and looked at the Sandaime Hokage with narrowed eyes then followed by angry shout from Tsunade Senju "This joke is not funny, Hiruko sensei!". While Orika herself immediately drew her sword with anger ready to attack the teacher.
The anger of Hiruko's two students is very understandable, because now standing in front of them, in the room was none other than Niwako Senju, sister of Tsunade Senju and favorite pupil of Orika. While everyone know that the little girl had died almost a year ago, was killed on her first mission outside the village.
Feeling the killing aura from the slug and snake sannin, the teacher immediately said "Calm down, Tsunade, Orika. This is not a joke Niwako-chan is real and she's really alive". Tsunade or Orika not had the time to ask what the meaning of their teacher words, Tsunade Senju has been embraced by the young Senju. Feeling the hug so warm make the slug princess inevitably respond with tears of joys.
After both Senju sibling releasing each others embrace, they heard the Hokage said, "As I said, on the day of Niwako-chan resurrection, someone with traits like that 'shinobi' is break through our village and got away from a team of ANBU". Pausing to sucking her pipe and exhale the smoke, Hiruko then said "Now it's your time to tell us what exactly happened at that time, Niwako-chan"
Hiruko's words make all eyes are now fixed on the young Senju, while the brown haired little girl just nodded and began to talk.
- Flashback Start -
Red shadow moving rapidly through the village of Konoha from the west side. This shadow moves so quickly and headed toward the ninja graveyard of this village.
When this figure set his foot in the area of the graveyard, saw the figure clearly none other than Naruto Uzunami whit his hooded on. Moving fast in the area of the cemetery, Naruto stopped in front of a tombstone with the inscription name Niwako Senju on it. Looked around and did not see any patrolling ANBU, without performing hand seals Naruto stomping his right foot to the ground and the grave of the younger sister of Tsunade is open showing a wood coffin.
With a gust of wind element jutsu the coffin lid open to reveal a human body that is no longer intact. By activating his doujutsu 'Tengan' Naruto looked to the right with his right hand raised, then comes out of the ground a giant head surrounded by purple flames with same eyes as Naruto and on it forehead has a kanji for 'King'. When the Uzunami look on the body inside the coffin with his doujutsu, then the giant head opened it mouth and stuck out it tongue that has fingers on it, the giant head tongue then draw the body of Shodaime Hokage's grand daughter and chewed it. When the chewing finished and mouth were open, the fingered tongue let down the body of a brown haired little girl dressed in black clothes and green pant.
Once the brown haired little girl's body was laid on the ground, and the giant head close it's mouth. By doing hand seals sheep and snake, Naruto said "Gedo : Rinne Tensei no Jutsu (Gedo : Rinne Rebirth Technique). With the completion of Naruto words the king of hell again opened it's mouth and a beam of green light shot out and came rushing into the body Niwako, when the green light enter the little girl's body, the king of hell giant head close it's mouth then disappeared.
xxx Unknown Realm xxx
Six people were sitting around a campfire when suddenly a beam of green light grabbed the back of one of them wich none other than Niwako Senju. The emergence of the green light that wrapped around her make the young Senju panic and scream "What happened to me, Oba-chan?"
Seeing the green light that wrap the body of her grand daughter, black haired woman said, "It seem like there are forces that pull you back into the world of living, Niwako-chan"
"Is this the Edo Tensei no Jutsu, Nee-san?" the shoulder length white haired woman said with a tone of panic.
"Hopefully not, Tobiko-chan" said the black haired woman who turned out to be Hashiko Senju.
"Whatever this technique is and whoever the user of this power certainly very powerful. You have to be careful, Niwako-chan" said the red haired woman sitting next to Hashiko facing the young Senju directly.
Seeing the green light was getting wrapped around her, Niwako say "See you again, Oka-chan, Oba-chan". And the green light was radiating brightly and pulling Niwako's from the presence of the five other woman, but before she disappear the sister of Tsunade still had time to hear the cry of "Take care of yourself, Musume-chan" from the black and the white haired woman who recently out of their socked state.
xxx Konoha Graveyard xxx
After the green light enter the body if Shodaime Hokage grand daughter, the body began to move and opened her eyes. Seeing the little girl began trying to sit down with her still weak state, Naruto immediately crouched down and helped her while saying "Welcome back, Niwako-chan"
Staring at the person who have helped her the little girl immediately said with her still hoarse voice "Who are you? What happened to me?"
"I'm Naruto. Friend of Tsunade-san, Niwako-chan" said the shinobi while taking out a bottle of water and gave it to the little girl, Naruto then said "Drink it, Niwako-chan!"
When Niwako finished drinking, she immediately asked "My grandmother said there are force that reviving me. Are you using the Edo Tensei no Jutsu?"
Hearing Niwako question and understand her concern, the shinobi immediately said "Don't worry, Niwako-chan. You have been revived with a completely rebirth technique so no one will controlling you"
"Apparently they have arrived" Naruto muttered loud enough so Niwako could hear it. When the little girl dressed in black and green about to ask, appeared before them four ANBU who each wore a mask with bird, lion, turtle and cat pattern.
The ANBU who had just arrived was made silent for a moment when they recognize who's in front of them, but because the training they have lived made them quickly master their shock. The black haired and lion masked ANBU quickly said, "You have entered the village of Konoha without permission, stranger. You have to come with us"
"Maybe another time, ANBU-san. I still have business elsewhere" said Naruto. Turning toward Niwako the shinobi then said "See you again, Niwako-chan. Be careful". After finishing his words, Naruto's body slowly burning gradually and disappeared leaving the young Senju and the ANBU who had not done anything to prevent the departure of the shinobi.
After a silent for some time the ANBU captain then said "Is this really you, Niwako-sama?". Receiving a question like that, the little brown haired girl replied by nodding her head.
"Then you must come with us to meet the Sandaime Hokage, Niwako-sama" said the captain. Then without waiting for an answer from the little girl the captain give her signal and the bird masked ANBU with brown hair has holding Niwako's arm, and then they all disappeared with typical shunshin of Konoha.
- Flashback End -
When Niwako finishing her story, Hiruko then said "Niwako have been examined in physical and mental, and whatever technique used by this 'shinobi' person, it's completely bring back your sister to live, Tsunade-chan"
After hearing her sister stories and her teacher words make Tsunade muttered to herself "A gift waiting in Konoha, Is this what he mean?"
"If we meet him again it seem we have to thank him. Right captain Hatake, Tsunade-chan, Orika-chan?. He not only help us but also reviving Niwako-chan" Miraiya word was answered with a nod from her three friends.
"Whatever happen we have to get the information about this person. Miraiya use your spies network to find that information, if possible, we would ask him to join Konoha". After hearing the answer "Yes, Sensei" from Miraiya the Sandaime Hokage let them go.
Miraiya is the last one go out of the room, but before she close the door, she still had time to say "I think this person has relation to the toad elder prophecy about the changes in the ninja world. So I certainly will investigate it, Sensei"
Once the door has been closed by her white haired student, Hiruko immediately suck on her pipe, while thinking 'Hope its the good change, not a destruction'
xxx Uzushiogakure no Sato xxx
Naruto and his family have arrived at Uzushiogakure, the Uzumaki clan residence. Naruto was originally intended to join the Uzumaki clan on this island and prevent the destruction of Uzushio, but when they arrive on the island, its condition has been in ruins.
This condition that make these ten people could only be staring at the ruins of the whirlpool village with a deep sense of sadness. Naruto himself involuntarily shed tears, because Nagisa should be together with her own clan, more so in his heart he had promised himself tha he will save this clan. The promise that he could not fulfill.
"I'm sorry, Mito-chan, Nagisa-chan. We're too late to save them all" Naruto said, staring at Mito who sat on his left side while hugging Nagisa, who was crying.
Seeing her husband in such a sad state, Sakura then said "It's not your fault, Naruto-kun. Its seem that this attack happen more early"
"Sakura-chan right, Naruto-kun. Now what shall we do?" asked Hinata who also tried to restrain her sadness.
"We will build this island again, Himes" Naruto said while continuing to observe the ruins of the village. Walk a few steps and looked toward the west where the sun began to sink, Naruto then taping his hand to the ground while saying "Mokuton : Shichuka no Jutsu (Wood Release : Four Pillar House Technique)" and woods start to rise from the ground then immediately formed a small two story castle.
Back to the place where this family is, Naruto then said "Bring Nagisa and the others in to rest, Mito-chan". Hearing that, Mito Uzunami immediately take the three little girl into the small castle to rest.
Soon Naruto invites his other wives into the new building by saying "Let's go, Hime. We will do the mating ritual tonight". Hearing the words from the shinobi, the five woman soon followed him into the small castle.
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Naruto Uzunami The First Shinobi fourth chapter is done. Critics and good suggestions always welcome. It will make the next and future chapter better.
Now this fanfiction has been installed with fire prooping, so flames will have no effect on it.
By the way, I still need your suggestions for the names of gender bend characters.
Sayonara...