Hey People!

I'm still in a pissed off mood. This damn laptop is about to be thrown against a wall.*takes deep breath*

I've got some news. I read the first Maximum Ride manga… and it sucked. Totally completely sucked. That manga was such an epic fail. Sorry if ya disagree but it's just my opinion.

THANKS TO ALL THE REVIEWER'S!

Even if I had to read one more than once *snicker*

So without further ado,

Chapter 4

Camp Breeze

Max P.O.V.

So after the big mess in the Mess hall, ignore the bad pun, I followed Fang and Angel to the place marked as the "swimming lanes". Yea I bet that took a longgg time to figure out. We stood behind a group of about eight kids, when the leader started talking.

"Okay everyone go back to your cabins, grab your swim gear, change and meet back here in five minutes" He shouted over the chatter. The group started to move along, except for me. Angel looked up at me and snickered. I slipped off my shoes and stuffed my socks down in my shoes. I walked up to the guy and he gave me a dirty look.

"Go change Mrs. Ride" he said and changed from dirty look to perverted wink. I heard Fang growl but I held up a hand.

"No perv. I'm swimming in my clothes and not in a suit" I said through clenched teeth. Mr. swim dude sighed and nodded. I felt breath on my neck and I froze.

"What Sam?" he chuckled.

"Go put your cute ass in a suit" I growled and turned to him.

"Hell no" I waved as Angel came back up to us in a cute pink one piece and a bright green and orange towel's over her shoulder. She tossed me the green one and I put it by my shoes.

"Okay everyone just free style today!" Mr. swim dude shouted and I grabbed Angel's hand.

"On three" she giggled and nodded.

"One"

"Two"

"Three" we jumped into the water with a big splash, and we both resurfaced. I laughed and brushed her wet golden curls out of her face.

"Just be careful" she nodded, gave me a quick hug and started swimming around. I took a deep breath and dived back under the water. I started kicking my feet, making myself go faster. I reached the edge of the pond/lake thingies and pushed off the wall. As I resurfaced again I came face to face with Sam.

He gave me a smiled and patted the top of my head. Without warning he pushed my head under water, I let out a blood curdling scream as I went under water. He pushed me deeper and deeper. I started kicking, trying to get to air. Being me I did the stupid thing and opened my mouth for air, letting water in.

Looking up one last time, I saw a black shadow and Angel looked down at me, frightened and concerned. I saw her lips form the word Fang, as everything went black.

Fang P.O.V.

"Fang!" I heard Angel scream and I saw Sam, with his hand under water and dirty blonde hair floating around his fingers. I also saw Angel trying to pull his hand off.

"FANG!" she screamed louder and that's when I saw her, by her I mean Max. Her eyes flickered closed as she floated up. I swam over and tackled Sam, causing him to lose his grip and swim away.

"Go get help Angel" I shouted and she nodded and swam away. I kinda sorta scoped up Max and carried Max over to shore. Angel came running back with Jason (aka Mr. Swim dude). Angel skidded on her knees beside Max. Jason knelt next to me and started saying instructions, which were basically, do CPR.

So I started doing what he said and I heard someone crying and Jason looked down at me, shrugged and walked away. Angel grabbed Max hand and started whispering to her. Pretty soon Max sat bolt upright and starting coughing up half up of the lake. I held her hair away from her face as she basically up chucked what she had for breakfast.

I motioned for Angel to give me her towel, which she handed over. I wiped Max face off as she groaned and fell against my shoulder and started to shiver. I mentally cursed and looked up at Angel.

"Tell Ella and Nudge to get Max dry clothes." She nodded and picked up Max shoes and towel and raced back to the cabin, as I picked up Max again. She groaned as she became weightless and we started to walk back to cabin six.

I walked up to the cabin and saw Iggy sitting on the steps. He gasped and opened the screen door. I walked into the cabin to find Nudge and Ella standing at the ready.

"We got her" the said together and Max mumbled something that sounded like I can walk. I looked down at her and sat her on her feet. She stumbled my soon found her ground and walked into the bathroom with Ella and Nudge. I heard Max mumbled loudly again and step out of the bathroom with dry clothes and semi-dry hair. She shivered and I grabbed her arm and sat her down on her bed. She shivered for the thousandth time. I grabbed her comforter and wrapped her up like a hot dog and laid her back down in her bed.

"Thanks Fang" she mumbled and looked up at me. I nodded as she let go of my hand and fall into a deep sleep.

"I'm not going to the rest of the stuff today" I said and Iggy nodded.

"I'll tell them" I nodded my thanks and settled down against the head board of my bed. I picked up some paper and started to draw.

Max P.O.V

I sat bolt upright and jumped out of bed. The stupid rhyme I learned when I was younger came rushing back to my head. "Watch out tongue here it comes". I tripped and ran into the girl's bathroom, found the toilet and promptly upchucked the rest of my breakfast. I heard someone sighed and kneel next to me. I felt someone hold my hair back from my face as I threw up again. I groaned and looked up… at Fang. I groaned and fell backwards against Fang' shoulder.

"Sorry Fang" I felt him nod and put a cool wet cloth against my burning forehead. He patted my head and flushed the nasty toilet. He picked me up again once more and carried me back into the room and lay me in a bed with a big black comforter. I looked up at him. He pointed over to my bed, to see I knocked over a class of water and it was soaking my blankets.

I sighed, moved over and patted the side next to me. He sighed and sat against the headboard next to me. I sighed and curled up against Fang and used his chest as a pillow. His arm went around me as I fell into a dead like sleep.

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