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The Golden Eye

Bella pov

It was getting dark and I was still swimming towards the land and was getting weaker by the second.

The rhythmic pounding of the waves hit me each time. It was painful on my cut yet the cold water was refreshing on my hot skin.

I was running out of air in my lungs I should take a breath. I finally decide on taking a breath and swam to the surface.

It was dark now but i could tell that i was reaching the land and the water was becoming shallower with each step...well more like each drag i took.

I was on my hands and knees crawling to get to land. I finally reached the beautiful ice land.

Yes I finally made it! Maybe i could really hunt for the first time ever! I never got to hunt at Volturi they would never trust me enough to let me go out so they always brought deer back to me, but they mostly let me starve, barley ever even getting me deer to suck them dry. They wanted me weak so i wouldn't be able to take over.

Oh the freedom it feels amaz- .

What was that. I snapped my head up and peered through the snowy forest. And saw several golden eyes stair back. WHAT NO no no noo this can't be happening. Not again, That stupid wolf must of called reinforcements.

What do i do!! I noticed they were walking slowly towards me with their hands up. As if that makes it better, theyll just use their powers, almost everyone with the volturi has some kind of power.

I can't out run them there's so many of them and im so weak i would probably make it only 5 steps.

I felt like i was about to start sobbing, to beg them to let me go free but they'd probably only laugh in my face.

They all stopped a couple of meters away from me. I tried to make out each of their faces to see if there was anyone I knew that i should be really fearful of. Like Jane, or Demetri because than I would never be able to run away.

Why do they have golden eyes? I was still on my hands and knees with my hand on my stomach covering the cut so the bad water didn't get in to it. I was half on the snow and half in the ice cold water.

It was dead quite except for the crashing waves.

Why don't they just punish me and lock me up already i can't stand the suspense or maybe they'll just kill me... I'd rather that then have to suffer that traumatizing experience again. I tried so hard to make out who the people were but everything was so blurry.

Than this gentle peaceful voice spoke "Bella we won't hurt you, we are here to help you"

Huh. Maybe I am already dead. And these are angles or something but why so many. Gosh am I that much trouble that god needs to send that many angles.

And why would he call me Bella?! I wanted to talk but it could all be trick.

(flash back) I sat hidden in the corner of my repulsive cell. I heard some of the guards talking outside my cell about me. " Hey Man, Demetri where you going?" A deep voice said "Im going to go have dinner. you're not coming?" The man with the deep voice laughed ."No I gotta stay with this pest, save me one though. Aro wants me to stay with her because he believes she's going to be 'strong' or something like that...he's doing all this strange experimenting stuff to her. Like today they took her memory she doesn't even know her own name. ..So pathetic." I crawled up to the cage bars and saw two of them standing by my cell. They were dressed in full black and had molten like fire eyes. The shorter man with blond hair named Demetri hissed at me."What do you want". I spoke so softly."I wanted to know if you knew... If you knew my name." All the sudden I was dragged out of my cell and the two of them beated me for what seemed like forever. Then he finally threw me back in. And the Felix crouched by my cell whispering in a creepy voice "You do not talk unless spoken too. Do you understand that little girl" I nodded so fast it hurt. "Good girl...next time you won't be so lucky with your next punishment "he licked his lips and walked off into the shadows. (End of flash back)

I gasped when it was over.

The man with the soft voice spoke again "Bella it's okay to speak to us if you want to. We won't hurt you" It's okay? I need to know this, what if it is my name. He wouldn't just say Bella randomly.

Does that mean he knows me and this is some rescue team? Or is this some allusion. I took my chance and said in such a quiet and shaky voice that I wasn't sure if they would be able to hear.

"Why do you say Bella?"

I looked down just waiting for a punch in the gut for talking without permission. I was surprised to hear a girls high joyful voice.

"Because that's your name silly" she tried to skip closer to me but I shoved myself farther into the water, the waves crashing against my back.

I could tell by her face she was hurt by my actions. I would not let anyone come near me.

She was in the moonlight and I could that she looked like a pixy or a fairy she had short black spiky hair and was inhumanly beautiful, with pale skin, shadows under her eyes...

I gasped she's a vampire all of them are I| hear no heart beat, inhumanly beautiful, pale skin WOW, but they have golden eyes.

Then one by one they stepped into the moon light.

The first was a blond lean man that had scars all over him I knew I should have felt terrified from those battle scars but I just felt calmer and calmer, he walked next to the pixy.

The next couple were holding hands the woman looked motherly smiling at me, she would be what I would want for a mother. She seemed so kind and caring.

The man had blond hair and looked like the perfect father ,I think he was the one talking to me before.

The next two were the man that seemed like an 8 year old trapped in 20 year old mans body he had a huge smile and was like a huge teddy bear. He was huge, really strong and muscular but he seemed like a good person.

The woman looked like a princess with wavy long blond hair I couldn't read the expression on her face but she seemed confused of her own thoughts, as if she doesn't know what to think or do herself.

Then there was there was this man all by himself, i gasped when i saw him clearly.

He was...beautiful his light brown hair falling over his eyes his eyes seemed darker than the others but he was still beautiful. He was tall and built just not as huge as the teddy bear but still muscular.

I gasped for air. He smiled a crocked smile that really didn't help with my breathing.

I felt like I was lava melting into the cold ocean.

He stepped closer to me. I growled at him agitated. I kind of wanted him to come closer, but I couldn't help the growl it was just a reaction I couldn't help, and this could be a trap.

He took another step, now I was just pleading. He was in the water now. With me he knelt in front of me.

He looked sad for some reason. Don't be sad I wanted to say but there was a permanent growl that rumbled through my chest.

"Bella I promise I won't hurt you but may I carry you to my house. My father. Carlisle is going to help you with your injuries."

His voice was like a song it matched the perfect melody with the crashing waves. Wow get a hold of yourself, Bella.

Hmm I could get used to that name, Bella does have a ring to it. I snorted at my horribly lame joke.

He had his arms held out, I just started at them.

"Please Bella" I swallowed and whispered "okay".

I don't think these people want to hurt me. If they did they would have killed me right now while I'm weak.

He put his arms around me and lifted me up as if i was a new born baby.

We were both soaking. I put my head in his shoulder and closed my eyes. Just praying this wasn't some sort of trap. He walked over to the other golden eyed vampires.

I could hear them talking but I just tuned them out and listing to the waves crashing.

I signed. It feels so right in his arms, I feel so safe and...Happy.

I soon drifted off and went limp in his arms with the mummer of their voices and the sounds of the crashing of the waves.


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