Pokemon PurpleTurquoise and Pokemon GreyMagenta
Me: Why is there only one review…? (Sulks in corner)
?: It can't be that bad
Rose: Well that can't explain why she's upset
Daffodil: Well is have almost no reviews means no story, that means we have to made the readers review somehow
Topaz: Hey guys! What's up? Oh, why is the authoress sulking in the corner?
?: Because she only had one review in 3 chapters
Topaz: That not really a lot is it?
Daffodil: No but we're are trying to think of a way to do it
Rose: Yeah so the readers get to read more. It's like for every 5 reviews you get 3 chapters or something…
…
Daffodil: That's a brilliant idea! How did you think of that!
Rose: Uh, I just did random thoughts in my head
Topaz: That sounds very useful! Maybe we can start using that system from chapter 5 onwards!
Rose: Yeah! Also the authoress would like to thank the person who took their time to type their review. That was very thoughtful of you!
Daffodil: Didya hear that readers? The authoress will thank you for your review in one of the chapters so start review to make her happy! Say the disclaimer, Boss!
?: Urgh fine, Clefairy7677 does not own Pokemon, and she wants you to review her before I hunt you down, when your sleeping (evilly laughs)
Chapter 4: Oops, my mistake but it looks like you're in denial
Somewhere in Sinnoh
Platinum woke up from her deep sleep and groaned as she lifted her back up "W-where am I?" she asked herself and was still hazy due to being knocked out earlier. She reached down to see if her pokeballs were there but obviously they weren't since Daffodil took them. "Oh right, that sneaky blonde girl took it, I hope my Pokemon are alright" Platinum told herself. She looked around to see if there was any place to escape from but the room was small with a tiny window that even a Pikachu might not fit through. "Maybe if I could see through that window, I could tell where I am" Platinum thought but had no luck because the furniture was too short.
"Like your new room missy?" a voice spoke behind her. Platinum was surprised and spun around and noticed who it was. "You're that pink hair lady that knocked me out earlier!" Platinum shouted angrily and grabbed onto the bars of the other side of the room where Rose was. "Oh sorry, I forgot to introduce myself properly earlier. How rude of me. My name's Rose and that blonde that was with me was Daffodil." "Scoundrels like you don't need an introduction" Platinum responded. "Well, people like you don't need to hide their name from commoners? Am I right? I remember you calling me one earlier but look who's the poor one now. Guess what! It's you!" Rose sneered and cackled afterwards. "That's enough you two, you guys are going to turn in Purple and Grey if you guys keep on arguing" a new voice complained and was at the corridor. "O-oh, sorry Miss Magenta, it's just…" Rose apologised to a girl who was about the same age as her but she was a brunette with short hair that went just below the shoulders a bit and was wearing a peculiar blackish suit. "It's okay, I'm usually the one breaking up the fights between them anyway" Magenta replied and turned to Platinum, "Now, and who might you be?" "M-me? M-my name i-is Platinum Berlitz" Platinum shakily answered and stepped back. "There's no need to be afraid little girl, I'm not the violent type" Magenta said and cheerfully smiled.
"I'm not scared of you, I'm scared of her" Platinum responded and pointed at Rose. "Rose…what did you do? Magenta asked sternly. "W-well I did the task that Grey told me to do a-and I did it, so yeah" Rose replied innocently while stuttering. "Well that doesn't excuse you for scarring her for life! Now, apologise!" Magenta told Rose, "I'm going to speak with Grey now so be on your best behaviour or else I will not hesitate to order my Fearow to attack you" "Y-yes Miss!" Rose replied and saluted her as Magenta walked away. "You got lucky this time Princess" growled Rose and slowly walked away. "I wonder how I ever got into this mess!" Platinum thought.
Somewhere in Sandgem town
"Okay, that's it! Lady is missing!" Diamond yelled in Pearl's face. "Okay, okay I agree with you! Lady's missing! Gosh, you need to take a chill pill sometimes!" Pearl replied with rubbing his ears, "So where should we start?" "Maybe in Hearthome city, 'cause the Super Contest hall is there so…" Diamond suggested but trailed off because Pearl had already started to drag him and he sent out an Unfezant that his Dad gave to him when he took a holiday to Unova and he had also given Diamond a Bisharp and Pearl ordered it to fly to Hearthome city with Diamond, so the Unfezant had Pearl on its bac and carried Diamond by its talons.
"Are you sure this is safe Pearl, it's so scary up hear" Diamond asked and looked at the ground below which was 600 metres below him. "Don't worry Diamond! Don't you trust me?" Pearl remarked, "And besides, what could possibly go wrong?"
Hoenn
Littleroot town
"I can't believe Ruby just ran off like dat" Sapphire told herself that in a slightly sad tone, "Why does that prissy boy keep running away from me? Most importantly, why does he keep on dodging the topic?" Somewhere in the bushes where Sapphire didn't check on, was a person who was listening to what Sapphire had just said. "I'm sorry Sapphire for the pain you have carried for 6 years, it's just… I'm not ready to tell you the reason why I keep avoiding the topic" the figure thought and buried his head into his knees and let a tear out.
At Ruby's House
A green haired boy walked up to the front door of the house and knocked on the door. "I hope this is the right place otherwise it will be awkward is this isn't Ruby' house" the boy thought. "Hello, who might you be? Another one of Ruby's friends? I'm sorry, he's not he now. He got chased by his girlfriend out of the house and she managed to destroyed half of the rooms" Ruby mum mentioned after she opened the door. "Oh okay, my name is Wally miss and I was planning to show Ruby my new pokemon that I got when I was visiting my cousin" Wally replied. "Oh really! I'm so lucky that Ruby has such great friends, well almost all of his friends that is… oh never mind! I'm pretty sure Ruby isn't that far and now if you excuse me, I have some cleaning to do" Ruby's mum told him and closed the door gently. "That sounds like a crazy girlfriend Ruby has…I wonder why he didn't tell me he had a girlfriend." Wally wondered aloud and walked away to find Ruby.
10 minutes later
"Ruby I finally found you!"
Ruby spun around quickly and hoped it wasn't Sapphire but in fact, it was Wally. "Oh hi Wally, how's life?" Ruby asked as he dusted off the dirt off his clothes. "It's going great! Why were you hiding behind that bush?" Wally asked curiously even though he already knew the answer. "I was just hiding from Sapphire, who has been trying to hunt me down in the last 45 minutes or so" Ruby replied and looked around to see if Sapphire was near. "Oh? You mean the girlfriend that your mum was talking about earlier?" Wally asked and smirked. "What?! She's not my girlfriend! I don't like her that way!" Ruby shouted and blush immensely. "Looks like you're in denial Ruby" Wally retorted and laughed afterwards. "Shut up Wally" Ruby answered and was still blushing.
"Anyway, I was here to show you my new Pokemon!" Wally said excitedly. "Oh really? What is it?" Ruby eagerly asked. Then Wally sent out a Duosion and it hugged Ruby because it took a liking to Ruby. "Woah easy there little fella" Wally said and chuckled a little, "He is very affectionate" "OMG Wally" Ruby fangirled, "This Pokemon is…fabulous! It has so much potential in contests! Maybe she can enter a smart contest, oh no, maybe a cute contest or…" Wally sweat-dropped as Ruby continued he fangirl rant about contest. "Umm Ruby? Can you stop talking about contests? It's getting slightly annoying" Wally asked and retrieved Duosion back into its pokeball. "Oh sorry about that, I always react to Pokemon who look beautiful or cute like that." Ruby apologised. "It's okay, just don't do that ever again, promise?" Wally asked. "Fine, but I don't keep promises though, I always managed to break them anyway" Ruby told him.
Johto
"Crystal, you definitely need a new clothes" Soul said sternly. "E-excuse me? I didn't get that" Crystal replied as she was half-listening to Soul and half-listening to Gold's and Silver's agreement downstairs.
"She definitely like you Silver! She called you 'Silvy'"
"That doesn't mean she likes me! Green calls Blue 'Pesky girl' all the time and he doesn't like her!"
"I wouldn't be so sure of that"
"What?!"
"Never mind anyway the topic of this argument is that Soul likes you and that's that"
"No she doesn't!"
"Crystal, are you even listening to me? I said that you need new clothes!" Soul practically shouted in her face. "What's so wrong about my clothes?" Crystal asked while irritated that Soul hurt her ears. "You always wear the same stuff all the time! Come on, let's go shopping!" Soul excitedly shouted and dragged Crystal downstairs and out of Gold's house while Crystal was struggling and protesting. Gold and Silver were watching both of them slip out of the door and Soul said, "We'll be back soon!" and winked at Silver and she left. "What just happened?" Gold asked Silver. "Does it look like I know?" Silver replied and shrugged. "No… Soul is totally into you admit it Silver" Gold shouted and laughed. "No she isn't" he retorted.
Me: So guys how did you like the slightly longer chapter? If you liked it please review! Plus if you read the top earlier, Topaz mentioned about starting the new review system starting from chapter 5 onwards and I'm seriously considering that idea if you guys don't start review. I'M VERY SERIOUS.
Daffodil: So if you want more of the story, you gotta review more
Topaz: So click the review box now and start typing your review!
?: Before she starts crying like a wuss again
Me: Hey! I wasn't crying! I was just in the corner acting like an emo!
?: Same thing… you readers better review otherwise…you'll never see tomorrow, I guarantee you
Rose: There's also a new poll up on the authoress's profile page, go check it out!