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Chapter 4 final assessments and warrior ceremonies
I was out hunting with fishclaw and I had caught lots of fresh kill it had been moons since my injury in battle and I had trained hard. On the way back to camp fishclaw asked if I was ready for my final assessments and I said "yeah I guess why", he paused for a moment and purred when we started moving again he answered "because they are tomorrow". When we got back to camp I saw aquapaw, swiftpaw, stonepaw, rockpaw, Moonpaw, and rosepaw looking excited so I guessed they got the same news I had gotten and might become warriors tomorrow. The next sunrise when fishclaw was ready to go we left camp to start my final assessments. First up was hunting I passed with flying colors. Next up was tracking and again I passed. Last up was fighting I was nervous because I wasn't as good at fighting as I was at hunting and tracking but I passed. When we got back to camp I saw the others there with huge smiles on their faces so I assumed they had passed too. I was about to walk over to them when I heard dark star's call "all cats old enough to swim gather to hear my words". As soon as everyone was gathered darkstar started to speak I think it's time to make some apprentices warriors, amberpaw please step forward, Fishclaw is your apprentice ready for her warrior name. Yes he replied I have no more to teach her she is a fantastic huntress and a worthy fighter. Amberpaw do you promise to uphold and protect the warrior code even at the cost of your life. I do. Then hence forth you will be called Amberleaf. Aquapaw step forward, roseflower is aquapaw ready to become a warrior. Ready and more. Aquapaw do you promise to uphold and protect the warrior code even at the cost of your life. I do. Then from this moment on you will be known as Aquafeather. Stonepaw step forward, Badgerclaw is Stonepaw ready to become a warrior. He is. Stonepaw do you promise to uphold and protect the warrior code even at the cost of your life. I do. Then I give you your warrior name you will be called Stoneclaw. Swiftpaw step forward, Amberfrost is Swiftpaw ready to become a warrior. Yes she is. Swiftpaw do you promise to uphold and protect the warrior code even at the cost of your life. I do. Then I give you your warrior name you will be called Swiftfire. Moonpaw step forward Ashflower is Moonpaw ready to become a warrior. She is. Moonpaw do you promise to protect and uphold the warrior code even at the cost of your life. I do. Then I give you your warrior name from this day on you will be called Moonsong. Rosepaw step forward. Blacktail is rosepaw ready to become a warrior. She is. Rosepaw do you promise to protect and uphold the warrior code even at the cost of your life. I do. Then I give you your warrior name from this day forward you will be known as Rosecloud. After their warrior ceremonies everyone chanted their names, Amberleaf, Aquafeather, Stoneclaw, Swiftfire, Moonsong, Rosecloud, and Rockpelt. Then that moonhigh we sat vigil. After our vigil we went to bed, as we were heading to our old nests I then reminded my sister brother and friends that we were warriors now so we slept in the warriors den.