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The Creeping In Eleanor's Soul

Chapter III: Destructive Learning


Eleanor made her way towards the entrance of the Little Wonders Educational Facility but stopped when she spotted a Gatherer's Garden to her right. She still had a great deal of ADAM left from saving her sisters and the only Plasmids she had at the moment were Telekinesis, Incinerate, and Teleport. Eleanor walked over to the Gatherer's Garden and cycled through the Plasmids that were available. Eleanor looked through the names in thought and finally decided to purchase the Electro Bolt and Winter Blast Plasmids. She also purchased the Sonic Boom and Cyclone Trap Plasmids.

Satisfied with her purchases, Eleanor turned away from the Gatherer's Garden Machine and began to make her way into the facility.

"Dr. Tenenbaum, where exactly are the Little Brothers kept?" Eleanor asked her, she had found another short wave radio and attached it to her suit so she wouldn't have to put her helmet on every single time she wanted to talk with someone. Tenenbaum sighed.

"Sofia use to keep them at the very center of the facility but since they failed in their purpose she paid little attention to their care. I am afraid that they have broken free of their containment chambers. There are a total of eight Little Brothers and they always stay in this facility…they never leave."

Eleanor sighed in aggravation but at least they were still in the facility. She should be able to sniff out the large amounts of ADAM that their bodies contained. Eleanor dodged to the right just as a frag grenade went sailing past her face, the grenade exploded just as she turned to look behind her and the left side of her face was engulfed in a shower of flame and shrapnel.

"AHHHHHH!" Eleanor let out a shrill scream and clutched her face in pure agony and rage. She quickly faced the damned soul who lobbed the explosive at her. The female Nitro Splicer, her face horribly disfigured and skin peeling off, was holding a Grenade Launcher assembled from spare parts and was currently backing away in fright.

The left side of Eleanor's face was practically obliterated. The inside of her mouth was exposed, teeth and all, and blood poured down her badly damaged face. Her jaw slightly drooped, due to the muscles holding her jaw in place being utterly incinerated but that's not what frightened the Nitro Splicer. What frightened the Splicer was the sheer amount of ADAM radiating off of the armored teen.

The cut and torn muscle tissue of Eleanor's damaged face quickly began to mend and attach themselves back into place. Her jaw righted itself back into position and pale unblemished flesh quickly covered the exposed muscle tissue of her face. Eleanor raised her left hand and sent out a continuous stream of flame towards the mutated woman. The woman gave out a scream of pain and terror as she was engulfed in Eleanor's hell fire. What little hair the woman had disintegrated from the intense heat of the flames and her flesh bubbled and melted off of her very bones. When Eleanor stopped the stream the only thing that remained was a charred black skeleton.

Eleanor's hand shot up to the left side of her face, the ADAM surging through her body had already completely healed her of the fatal wound. Eleanor cursed under her breath, she had to stay focused. If she were a normal person the wound that she had just sustained would have killed her.

"Got to stay focused, I can't let my guard down for even a second." Eleanor quickly extended her right hand towards the ceiling and let loose a bolt of lightning. The Spider Splicer that was crawling through the ceiling dropped to the ground, shaking in spasm. Eleanor then extended her left hand and instead of releasing a fireball or a continuous stream of flame, the splicer merely caught fire and burned to death. Eleanor could hear the pitter patter of metal hooks clanking against cement and the maniacal uncontrollable laughter of the Spider Splicers above her.

"Here comes the pack…"

A Spider Splicer burst from out of a vent on a nearby wall to her right, almost taking her completely by surprise. Almost.

The Splicer launched itself at Eleanor but instead of being rewarded to the sound of metal scraping against soft flesh, it received a kick to the left side of its face. Eleanor extended her right hand and released a hail of icicles that impaled the Splicer through its skull and chest cavity. Blood painted the hallways of the facility. A Spider dropped down from the ceiling and charged Eleanor, it jumped into the air to perform a drop kick but she grabbed its leg and slammed it into a nearby wall. Eleanor dug her right foot into the creatures chest and pulled on its leg until she ripped it clean off, blood splattered all over her face and the air was thick with the Splicer's screams of agony.

Eleanor cut the Splicer's head clean off with the ADAM needle that was mounted on her right arm, silencing it's cries and quickly extended her left hand and used Sonic Boom to blow away the Leadhead Splicer that was sneaking up on her.

'Wait…'

Five more Leadhead Splicers appeared from behind the hallway's far corner, Eleanor raised her right hand and sent out a wave of icicles. She then quickly extended her left hand and sent out a powerful blast of air. The blast of air increased the icicles' traveling speed and velocity and all the Splicers were impaled by the huge spears of ice. Their bodies were lifted off of the ground and nailed to the wall behind them. Eleanor was greatly pleased at her discovery, she might not be strong enough to dual wield weapons and plasmids at the same time like her father had done but she had enough ADAM in her body to do something else…

When Eleanor reached the end of the hall six Spider Splicers dropped down from the ceiling, completely surrounding her.

"Your going to give us that ADAM you god damned Succubus!" One of them screamed. Eleanor just kept a neutral look and extended both her arms outwards, fire erupted from her right hand and electricity surged from her left. She then started to spin around in circles, like an elegant dancer. The Splicers were charred, cooked, burnt, electrified, dead. Their fried corpses dropped to the ground, some of them were charred black skeletons, others…merely ashes. Eleanor brushed a strand of raven black hair out of her eyes.

"Now…where are those Little Brothers…"


AN: Don't forget to review! Oh and tell me if you like Eleanor's fighting style. Since Delta could dual wield his plasmids and weapons I considered this for Eleanor as well but decided against it. For one I think it would just be completely unoriginal and boring. Second, even though Eleanor is a Big Sister and Big Sisters are suppose to be equivalent in strength to Big Daddies while I was playing through Bioshock 2 I noticed that a Big Sister's melee attacks are a lot less damaging than a Big Daddy's. Plasmids is where they shine so why not give Eleanor the ability to dual wield her plasmids? Please I'm begging you, review and tell me what you think!