HEY PLZ REVIEW I NEED SOME ADVICE ON HOW TO MAKE THE STORY BETTER!

The way thay talk is written like this:

Bella

Edward

Emmet

Rosalie

Alice

Carlisle

Jasper

Charlie and any other cast member

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Edwards POV

As I watched her sleep I felt so embarrassed. I knew I shouldn't have looked but I was so curious. She was cuddling with me and I felt sweat I knew she was having a bad dream she kept screaming my name and Jacobs name. the Jacob part got me a little mad but he isn't around so there isn't much she can do. I was petting her arm trying to cool her of with my cold skin. She jumped and woke up.

Sorry to wake you.

Its ok.

Bella's POV

I didn't want to sleep after having that dream it was so weird and scarry. The dream was about me and Jacob running from something and Edward was trying to it but it killed him. I think I must have screamed his name. then Jacob tried to defend me but it killed him too. I ran as fast as I could and the thing was after me now I hid in the corner of the bush and then it found I think it was about to kill me but that's when Edward woke my up thank god!

Try to go back to sleep.

I can't I'm wide awake now.

Ok

I sat up and laid on his chest then I turned my head and kissed him on the nose and he smiled then I went for his lips but he got so fast I didn't know what happened then he said mother and winked at me and ran to his room. He was right my mom came in and checked on me. She just took a peek and I pretended I was sleeping then she went out and I guess to check on Edward. Then I heard her go to her room. In a sec Edward was there.

Miss me

Of course

Then he took my head in his hands and gave me a long passionate kiss.

Does that get me off the hook for leaving so fast.

Not really. I said teasing him

Then he laid down beside me and I moved to lean on him. His cold skin felt good after the bad dream and the sweat I had from it. I felt a little embarrassed but if he told anyone I still have that funny story to tell them that happened tonight.

What are you thinking about?

Just what happened tonight.

His cheeks turned light red again… he looked so cute when that happens. I kissed him on the cheek then on the head and then on his lips. He smiled.

Don't worry about it its not like the only guy its happened to you have no control over it.

Your not going to tell the girls are you?

No *giggle* well maybe.

Plz don't they will make fun of me for the rest of my life which forever.

Ok I wont if that makes you happy.

Yes and Isabella swan what makes you happy?

The way he says my name is so hot. It makes me want to melt. I didn't realize I wasn't breathing until he kissed me. Breathe Bella, I thought to myself. Good thing he cant hear what I think.

You of course.

Besides that!

Your family

I mean the way I can make you happy.

I thought about that for a minute I mean I want to get married but not now. I also wanted to know what it felt like to make love with a vampire or with a human but I knew that was out of the question so I decided to say:

When you kiss me passionate and romantic like.

That's what he did and he tough wrestled with mine his breathe was sweet and so was his tough. I lost the wrestling match so I bit his lip and sucked on it then I was on top of him stopped kissing me to move me to the side then started to kiss me again. I don't even realize what im doing when I kiss Edward.

We should stop before something we regret happens

When he said that I got a little sad but he open his arms and cuddle with him which also made me happy.

Ok

Edward's POV

When I said regret she looked a little sad but I don't want to make love with her until were married I mean I can see her naked but I would never do that. I'm also afraid that I might kill her…when we get married she will be a vampire and that5 would help a lot more.