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Title: Into the Ocean
By: Insert-Sanity
Date: 12/08/09
Characters: Tenth Doctor (the best one ever) and Original Character
Word Count: 1116
Scene Four
There was a planet with two moons shining bright in the sky, one of the moons was green and the other was glowing a light blue, they were standing on a beach. It was midnight, and the water was still unmoving. They knew that this was way past their bed time, but the rumors had circulated so well, that these children were curious. One of them was 14, tall for his age, 4 feet 2 inched, the other was 3 feet one inch. They were a form of aliens known as Talphon, their head were shaped like bats, they had feathers running down each of their arms. As they watched the water their eyes were glowing blue, their feet were talons, they were not wearing clothing, as their feathers kept them quite warm.
The rumor was of a sight of a dragon, a majestic creature who had long been extinct from the world. Han-tu was the tallest and Han-ip was the shortest, they both believe this rumor. Though many Talphon had gone missing after trying to find the dragon, they had been standing there for a number of hours, in belief that they would never see it, Han-ip grabbed a hold onto Han-tu's hand and tried to drag him away.
"She's going to be angry if we stay out too long." Han-ip spoke in his native tung. He was referring to their mother who had scolded them about wanting to come. Han-ip was feeling dreadful for disobeying. It was Han-tu who had urged the Han-ip to come along.
Han-tu nodded to her younger brother, that they had indeed stayed too long and it was time to turn around. As they turned, a lude growl was heard, their heads whipped around, just as something large with claws took the younger one, and knocking the older one out of the way.
"Han-ip!!!" She shouted as her brother was taken and dragged by the claws underneath the water. She stood there shocking thinking. 'This is all my fault.' She jumped in the air and flapped her arms, flying toward the direction of home to tell of the bad news.
-Back at the TARDIS -
I walked down the hallway, wearing the most interesting outfit that I could put together. I was wearing a black tang top, a purple skinny jeans, and a long red over coat, much like the one that the doctor was already wearing only a red color. I had my long light brown hair in a pony-tail. As I walked out of the room with a smirk on my face the Doctor just stared.
"You're serious about wearing that?" He looked at me, obviously the colors would attract quite a bit of attention. I nodded, placing my hands in my pockets. "well, as long as you're careful with the coat because that's the only red one I have."
"Relax, if something should happen to it, I am sure we could replace it." I giggled, walking toward the Doctor. "After all, you could travel all time and space."
The doctor shook his head. "Of course, I can." He walked toward the TARDIS door, he pulled it open, holding it that way. It looked like it was time to go out there. "Oi, out we go."
I smirked as I followed the Doctor out of the TARDIS door, closing the door tightly behind me. When I turned around all I saw was two glowing moons, the ground felt loose under my feet the Doctor looked around like he was trying to figure out what planet this was.
" I know what this is, I have never been here before." Doctor laughed as he clapped his hands together . "It's Ronussk IV, it is." Doctor looked through his pockets, he pulled out a small vile and scooped some sand into it. "It's said that this sand here, contains some healing properties."
Amusing as it was I wondered why the TARDIS had brought us here of all places. The Doctor seemed far more into the sand than the overlooking land space, we were parked right under a large cliff. It was a mountain, the way it glinted in the moonlight you could imagine it was made of gold.
Doctor placed the vile in his pocket and walked toward the wall of the mountain. "This is the Ronussk mountains, they are mad of pure gold." He placed a hand on it, pulling his hand back slightly as it was a cold surface. "It's stood tall since Ronussk I."
"Well, what happened to the other ones?" I asked, spotting a rock to sit on. The doctor stopped in his tracks then turned to look at me.
"Well, the original inhabitances were consumed in a war with another planet." Doctor walked toward me. "The other times, their race was dying out, a great calamity due to some illness." He took my hand and we began walking. "There should be a town near here." I nodded, as we reached the tip or the side of the mountain you could see a large city, all the houses and things were made of a substance that shined bright silver in the moon. "That is the great city of Gavari. Made completely of moon stones."
I stared in amazement, this was so, well, alien. "Onward, Doctor." A bit adventure was just what I needed. He let go of my hand for a second.
He looked to the sky, I did the same, both of us saw a large flying creature head toward the city. "No, it can't be!" The Doctor began running toward the city, and much to my surprise and confusion I ran after him.
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