Every13579: Okay, I just had to re-write this because it kept getting readers (and me) confused so here is Chapter 1 on "Who Do I Choose" revised and un-edited.
Sasuke: You wouldn't have to re-write it you did it right the first time.
Every13579: I didn't ask for your opinion.
Sasuke: That's why I spoke up.
Every13579: It's hot and my fingers hurt so I'll show mercy for you today. :. drops a buckect of raw meat over Sasuke's head.:
Sasuke: What the hell?!
Every13579: :.whistles.: Here Fifi!
:. a gaint white tiger enters the room.:
Hinata: Is that... is that safe?
Every13579: Of course, Hina-chan. Emo-kun is going to die.
Sasuke: Emo-kun sure as hell better not be me!
Ever13579: And if it is...?
Sasuke: Why you mean ass-
:. Fifi growls and licks her lips.:
Sasuke: Where the hell did you get a tiger?!
:. Fifi begins to chase Sasuke.:
Every13579: Ahem...! Moving on, tell me what you think! old story or new story? Vote in my poll on my account. Hina!
Hinata: Hai! Every13579 does not own Naruto. Quote :. sweatdrops.: "Me no ownine. I only want Emo-kun for torture"
Every13579: Let the games begins! (I always wanted to say that)
Who do I Choose.
The New Summary:
What would change if Itachi never murdered his family? What if they died on a mission and the rest of the clan died to some disease? So take the rookie nine, plus Gai's team, and of course Itachi. Did I metion Itachi is in the hospital and... guess who his doctor is? Does sibling rivalry go so far that they'll not only hurt each other, but hurt the one they love the most?
Chapter 1: Awakening
Click! Clack! Click! Clack!
That's the sound... the sound that I heard when I was first brought here. When my back first touched the cool metal of this table. When the loud beeping of objects and flickering of lights was an uneven melody. When Iall I can remember is being brought here. Where here is, I do not know. How I was brought here, I do not know. The sound that I've heard only once before, I do not know. All I know is that I'm here, lying on a cold steel table. I can hardly feel my legs and arms, and my head is pounding,
Click! Clack! Click! Clack!
That sound... that I remember so vividly in my dreams. What is it? It comes closer. It nears me. It keeps rhythm, and never misses a beat. Everytime I feel great pain, it's that sound that's there to comfort me. It's like a mother deer to a young calf. It's like a lioness to a cub. It's always there. What is it? How does it always come to me when I never call it? Is it my imagination? Is it living? Is it human?What is it? What is it...? What is it...
Click! Clack! Click! Clack!
"U-Uchiha-san... Uchiha-san... U-Uchiha-san, can you open your eyes?"
Sweet. A soft, sweet voice... Wait, when was the last time that I heard a voice? And such a perfect one at that? Open my eyes? Why? So I can see more darkness? That's all I see. Go away. I can't open my eyes. Go away!
"U-Uchiha-san? C-Can you open your eyes?"
Didn't I say go away? Wait, my voice! Why can't I speak? What's wrong with me? What's going on? I've been here for a long time and never heard this voice before. Why is it speaking to me now? And why can't I speak back?
Clack! Clack! Clack! Clack!
That's not the sound that I've heard ealier. It sounds like a rhino, not like a steady beat. What is that?
Clack! Clack! Clack! Clack!
"Isha-san. Tsunade-sama would like to see you now"
A rough, corse voice. Not the sweet one from before.
"H-hai. U-Uchiha-san, I'll be back later"
Click! Clack! Click! Clack!
That sound... the sound that's always been there for me... is leaving me.
"Now, Uchiha-san, let's get you cleaned up"
That voice. it's corse, like concrete. It's rough, like sandpaper. It's... not the one that I want to hear. What's this cold thing? Liquidy... water?
"Hope you like the water"
Like this? It's too damn cold! That better be a sponge that this... this... this thing is using to clean me. Torture. That's what this is. Torture.
Click! Clack! Click! Clack!
"N-Nezumi, thank you for taking care of Uchiha-san w-while I was gone. Y-You can go now"
Finally! 20 minutes with this Nezumi girl has already drove me crazy.
"Aww.. are you sure"
"Y-yes, I'm sure"
"Alright then. See you later Isha-san"
Clack! Clack! Clack! Clack!
Warmth? What's on my shoulder? Everything was cold and now it's warm. What is this?
"U-Uchiha-san, if you can feel me, o-open your eyes."
Open my eyes? I'm only going to see darkness, why should I open them? It's a waste of time.
sigh "P-please open your eyes. It's been 2 weeks"
2 weeks? What's she talking about?
"Please..."
Ugh! Fine, but if I see darkness, I'm killing you. It's way to damn bright, I should have kept my eyes closed.
"U-Uchiha-san!"
That's my name da- wow... beautiful... When I opened my eyes, I thought that I'd see the same darkness that I've seen for a while now, not a blue-headed beauty. Especially not one that smiles such a sweet smile. With midnight blue hair that cascades over her shoulders. And those beautiful pale violet eyes. Perfection.
"U-Uchiha-san, hello, I'm Hyuuga Hinata."
Every13579: So, how was it? Like it, hate it, neutral? Tell me in the poll on my page.
Sasuke: Don't do it. She didn't even update for you guys. Don't do it.
Every13579: Oh, Fifi.
Sasuke: Aww crap! :. runs like shit.:
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