I liked the ending of chapter 3 better (hehe) here is more:
*****BRICK`S POV******
"Dang Blossom" I thought as I left the elevator "How do you do that. You always have the element of surprise on your side." I exited the hotel with stares of confusion following me. "Dang, man!" I turned around, my eyes completely bloody red. "Are you trying to stalk me? I bet you are. You know, I just hate you people, staring at me all the time." I reached over the counter and grabbed his throat. "I might as well put you out of your misery. You`re the only person here." I almost killed him when suddenly, instead of seeing that person, I imagined Blossom in my hand, choking, squealing like a pig for her life.
I dropped her, and immediately, she turned back into the man. I shook my head and left the retarded building. I never wanted to see him again.
*********Ceceliah`s pov**********
I walked into the house, Blossom following behind me. I turned around and she hand this smirk on her face. My idiotic smirk. Cursing under my breath, I turned around and my mom. I looked at the clock. It was 5 o`clock. It was that time already? Dang! I turned towards my dad. His lips moved but I couldn`t hear him. Was I going deaf? No I heard the door open and close.
"You're grounded"
I sprang up in bed. Beads of sweat were trickling down my face and all over my body. I grabbed my cup of water. Clutching it in my hands, I managed to gulp it down. I knew I couldn`t fall back to sleep when I just had that dream. I prayed again, hoping that I would never have that terrible dream again. Then I realized something.
"Blossom?"
******Blossom`s pov ***********
"Beep,beep,beep."
"WH-where am I? Is this some kind of joke?"
FLASHBACK-
I was panting, trying to hide from Brick. But he found me. He had totally cheated. He used his neni!
"Found you." He said. "You know that I don`t want to see you Brick, not right now."
"Yeah, right."
"Leave me alone!" I ran further down the street and into a dark alley. I used my neni to find my mom. It was starting to get dark. It was already 7.
"Dang it!" I sighed deeply "I missed dinner". There were footsteps. Using my extreme kei power, I jumped into the sky. I jumped across the tall buildings, leaping like a graceful ballet dancer, capturing the eyes of many people. I dropped down into the street. I was really fatigued then. "Mom, can you pick me up? I am really tired."
I zipped down into the world of unconscious.
FLASHBACK OVER-
I sprung up in the bed. I saw long orange hair and automatically knew who had saved me.
"Brick it is no use sneaking out like that" He walked over and stood next to my hospital bed.
"Looks like sleeping beauty finally woke up."
"Ummm….."
He blushed heavily. If his hair wasn`t already reddish orangish then it would have turned into that color.
"S-sorry, I`ll just go" He left the room, leaving me speechless and confused.
Why would he call me that?
