Hi everyone! Thank you so much for reviewing! (By the way, this is Rachel speaking) We'll try and answer your reviews more. Answering the person who said to slow the story down: Sorry. Unfortunately Catlyn lives a long ways away from me (Rachel) and Egg, so most of the story is already written. We will try and slow it down in the later chapters that haven't already been made. I hope you enjoy Chapter Four (it's one of my favorites. That and Chapter Two. And Chapter Six.)! Keep reviewing!
Chapter Four
Holy shit. I think I'm starting to fall in love with James. This is not good. I mean, I promised myself I would never fall for a guy. After seeing my parents' marriage deteriorate after only a few years, and Julio –never mind, I'm not going to go into that. To sum it up….. It was messy. Being the control freak I am, I decided to make a list of reasons why I should and shouldn't love James.
Reasons not to love James
His ego seeps out of his ears
His room smells weird
He still tends to bully Snape.
He's immature
He has rather messy hair.
……..but it's cute…..
No! Negative things only.
He can't sing
…okay that is grasping at straws.
Reasons to love James
He's hot
He's really sweet
He's romantic
He's funny
He's smart
He's fun
He's a great kisser
He's charming
He's an Animagus –yes I know about that. I'm not stupid-
He's a great Quidditch player
He's honorable –sometimes-
He's loyal
He's concerned about my safety
He cares about me
Okay, let's face it: I'm in love with him….
Hmmm. Well. Didn't see that coming… I suppose it could be worse. I could be in love with Peter, or Malfoy, or Snape. It definitely could be worse. Now what to do, what to do. Should I tell him? Should I dump him? Okay, No. That would be stupid. I could take him out to a candle-lit dinner, tell him, and see how he reacts. I could wait until he says it to me. Oh wait, he says that every day. Oh, I suppose I could say it back to him. Hmmm, his birthday's coming up. I guess I could do the candle-lit dinner idea then. He might faint again, though. Oh well, it's worth it. Now where do you get candles……