Chapter 3 as the revised version of the battle language It's in a more of a poetic form, only because I really love poetry and it makes things clearer. Reviews would really help... i don't care if you're a member... leave a review PLZ!!!
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Chapter 3-
Three Tails and Green Eyes
Rasengan- spinning at a great velocity it turns into shuriken-Rasengan.
Chidori- air crackling, ground churning, a chirping sound emits from chidori.
Kakashi and Naruto's attacks collide.
Pushing, chakra draining, Rasengan and Chidori inseparable, the air surrounding them begins to darken.
Naruto, chakra boiling, a tail emerges from the depths. Kakashi, struggling, he activates his Sharingan.
Stronger, yet weak, the power of the Kyubi somewhat weakens due to the effect of the Sharingan.
Wind, surging like the ferocity of a typhoon, Rasengan's power quickly overpowers Kakashi, but the chirping
of the Chidori grows louder. Minutes passing, but the two seem unmoved by the passage of time, they struggle
to remain on the pushing side and not the side that shall take the brute force of the combined power.
Loosing his grip on the ideal way of forcing the two jutsu to exhaust each others power until they are no more.
Kakashi at the end of his game uses his Mangekyo Sharingan to move Rasengan into another dimension, in which time
stands still.
Two more tails appear and Kakashi faints under the exhaustion of almost all his chakra.
Hikari: (to Jiraiya) So what are you going to do about these turn of events.
Jiraiya: Huh... Who are you?
Hikari: Not important. Now tell me... What are you going to do about the Nine-Tailed Fox's chakra forming two tails?
Jiraiya: H-how do you know of the Kyubi bei...
Hikari: interrupting Why do you call it by its name? Do you have a demon in you as well? if not then you have no right to call it Kyubi.
Jiraiya: temper Is there a demon in you... Hikari?
Hikari: How do you know my name?
Jiraiya: Because, you were born in this village, were you not? Also, I over heard you talking to your friend, Junko.
Hikari: Never the less, what are you going to do about Kyubi? His power is great, and yours is pale and insignificant. While I myself could easily take him on. Unfortunately, I'm not affiliated to this village anymore, and I might kill him because I don't care if he lives.
Jiraiya: So you'd kill your own...
Hikari: anger, flustered, temper reaching its peakPlease, Jiraiya, don't go there, I'm not going to care. I've grown up since last time and I removed all of my sympathy for his pain of having no parents and friends.
Jiraiya: his temper also risingYou better do something about his chakra, the last I recall, it is you of the two brothers that posses the eyes to make even the mightiest of the demons fall to their knees and beg for their lives. Now why don't you prove that you aren't weak and use those eyes of yours to push the Kyubi back into its cage. Use your Renegade eyes (like the Rinnegan, but it is more of a combination of Sharingan and Rinnegan. The eyes are green and surrounded by other circles and three tomoes) and you might just be able to spare his life. Wouldn't that be a good thing.
Hikari: understandingly I always hated you for always knowing how to make someone want to try harder and to always try and prove others wrong by putting in a little bit of effort and trying. And that shall be your answer. I will prove to you that I can make this demon beg. All my it beg that the I was as nice as Minato.