EVERYWHERE IS A GOOD PLACE
Chapter 2-a
Author Note:
First of all I want to say "Sankyu pipoool!! for the reviews. It feels alone and useless to write fics when no one reads you, reviews are my support to maintain myself here.
To Tyranno's girl: thanks for the support! My fav pairing is KisaIta because they are like me and my boyfriend (he is just like kisame but no blue skin) And yeah, I'm a guy, but thanks to advertise me, I won't search lovers here! Hahaha!
To Kyoshiro: you see, you were my first-of-all reviewer ;)
To Hikaru: yeah! You're right! It need more details :D I'm sorry for the rude of the fic, if you search something more fluff read only fics rated with low lvl (I rate my own fics at the introduction, and yes, I'm a crazy, perverted and dirty mind)
To Blak55: well, I don't want to get you out of this credits so :P THANK YOU FOR REVIEW! you like sex a bit painful didn't you? X3
To MyxCrimsonxTears: I agree! Sometimes I read "yaoi fic" and there are 10 chapters about plot and half page about sex no way! xD thanks you for the review!
I want to explain something about the chapter 2-A: My lover catch me writing it and then he reads it and then… At the end I had no time to finish the chap, and I was 14 days later at post a new chapter, so this one isn't revisited, or expanded, it's soo concentrated and I assure it have lots of mistakes and other things that happens when you don't revise the work… so I'm very very sorry about it .. I have few reviews still but I don't want to disappoint the 2 persons who fav my story and the others, anyways.
And now enjoy the second part! º3º
Itachi was between two hot bodies who fucked his ass together merciless. They rubbed his oversensitive body with every pound mixing the shinny drops of sweat. He could feel his hole all filled with the cum of some Kisame clones and with two long and thick dicks stretching his muscles, blocking it up from drain the white substance, and pressing hard to his prostate. He was feeling his ass like exploding. Just like his cock. It had something hard tied behind the head. And he cum some times before. So his own sperm was trapped, engorging his member and maintaining it erect. Then there was the third clone fucking his mouth, or better said his throat. Itachi swallowed a lot of his sweet cum from a lot of clones too, and he was feeling full (triple meaning – his stomach, ass and cock)
The one he had in front of him was moaning on his ear "aahh Itachi… mmmm… you are… so hot…" His hands pinched his nipples strongly making him to moan. All his body convulsed of pleasure and he could feel his next orgasm filling more his dick. The pleasure was so long. The cock he had between his lips could feel the vibration of his moans. That clone fisted his ebony hair to push faster the movements of the head on his erection. With each second it becomes more and more fast, more and more rude. And finally he cum on his throat, holding Itachi's head to not move, because he was blocking up his breath while the waves of pleasure went round his body. Meanwhile, Itachi, with the lack of oxygen, the intense pleasure was coming again. A hand fisted his engorged, soft member and started to stroke it slowly, pressing the thumb on the little hole and playing with the cord who stops the sperm to go out. And, again, Itachi cum inside his own dick making it more thick and erect than before. And increasing the feeling of being exploding.
The cock inside his mouth went away and he was able to breath. His head fell on Kisame's clone shoulder panting hard. They both were moving violently and now, the hand on his dick too. The clones were caressing his pale, creamy skin, pinching it, biting it, stimulating it. Itachi moved forth and backward instinctively at the same time as the two clones, with his little mouth wide opened and a trail of saliva dropping down his chin. "AAhhh fuck! Kisame please… let me… aaahh!!" His wet lips were closed by others in a deep dirty kiss. Kisame's tongue invaded Itachi's going deeper on his mouth. The hand that was playing with his abused dick, started to pull slowly the damned cord. The white substance started to flow out like a miniaturized thick waterfall as the member recovered his normal size. Itachi felt it comforting. At the same time, he received a hard pound from behind and the both Kisames cum scratching his belly and his back.
The last stroke poked hard his prostate pushing the second dick inside him. The wet feeling and the pain of the scratches, all mixed, makes him to cum intensively, this time feeling his cum spiting out between the stomachs. After a few minutes of deep breaths, the two dicks get out of him, and all the cum accumulated on his hole dripped down, at first abundantly, and then slowly. Kisame untied his hands and eyes, but he didn't move. He was so exhausted after the orgy. His member was on cherry red and covered with cum, just like his ass and mouth.
All the clones disappeared with a "pof" and Itachi fell on the floor still panting. The real Kisame saw all the show and he was turned on again. He moved near Itachi to hug him. The blue man forced him to a kiss, cleaning his lips. The semiconscious Uchiha was moaning quietly. Then Kisame moved down letting a trail of love bites and reaching his cock. He sucked it all viciously licking Itachi's cum like it was an expensive drug. The cord let a red mark on the member, now covered on saliva, which can relieve his pain.
Next chapter:
Well, I'm trying to do long chapters but I can't. It is so tired to translate every word on my mind. And now is too late. Tomorrow I will post the special chapter! I promise! I won't sleep, or eat or pee or anything before post the special chap! On my perverted mind I have more bad things for this pairing. And, to be sincere, I LOVE the reviews! The good, the bad, the fucking ones and the lovely others! I love all them! Even if they only say "hello" or "fuck off". Again, I'm sorry for this ridiculous chapter. I want to say "Is my first fanfic, is the first time I write yaoi instead of imagine it!" but I thing it's a poor apologize.
I didn't want to say it (because everyone who writes it never have what they want) but… PLEASE REVIEW THAT SHAME OF FANFIC!! T-T
