DBZ High School
So now we meet the enemies, and I mean the boys! It may be boring, but some things you have to know! Tell me how much you like it, ok? I hope you really do like it! Oh! and i 4got 2 tell u wut the characters look like! ChiChi wears a white shirt with tweety bird on it! on the front, it says stop staring at me, but on the back it says stop following me! her pants are so blue, that wen u look at it from an angle, they look black! ChiChi's hair is always up, no matter what. she has sneakers, but im not so sure of the color yet. Bulma wears a shirt that has a bunny on it. it reads, theres nothing lucky about a bunny with no feet. get it? her moms called bunny. ok im stupid her shirt is also white. Her pants are red, with a white stripe goin down the sides of her legs. she has red shoes. her hair is a little past her shoulders, and it looks stringy like on the show. Goku wears his orange Ki pants, its the only kinds of pants he'll wear! He wears a black shirt that Izume made, it covers most of his muscles! of course, his hairs a mess. replace his normal boots with black shoes. Vegeta wears those blue pants, with the white boots. he wears his gloves. He wears a blues shirt with stick people running from a police car. it reads its all fun and games till the cops get called. Now, if u want them 2 wear somthin else, then imagine them like that! I dont care, it'll make u guys happy, so go for it! o yea, Angel has long blonde hair, a little longer than Bulmas. she wears brown capries, with a red V-shirt. her shoes are a lighter brown than her shirt. Becky wears a pink shirt. it shows som of her stomache. her skirt is extremely short, and its purple. her shoes are pink at the bottom, and at the top they're purple. her hair is brown, and its long. goes down to the middle of her back.
WARNING: extremely long chpt... oooooopppppsssss 0o i just LOVE that face! lol
Chapter 4- Male Enemy Backround
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ... does that really matter?
Vegeta couldn't concentrate. His mind was on Bulma. 'What's going on? Why was Bulma more scared of Mark than she was of me?' Any thing that had to do with Bulma was in Vegeta's head. After the next bell, Vegeta went to science. He was very skilled in science, and he actually liked this teacher. The door opened, and it revealed Bulma. She sat down. The door opened again. This time, Mark stepped in.
"Class, we have a late arrival. His name is Mark, and he is the newest student. Please be nice. Mark, take a seat." The only problem was, there were no open seats. Mark looked around, waiting for some one to give him a seat.
"Here," Bulma said, "You can have my seat. I'll pull up a chair." Mark gave her a smile, one she did not like. He took her seat, and Bulma grabbed a chair. As you can guess, Bulma pulled up next to Vegeta. He actually let her share the same desk with him, but that didn't last long.
"Why on earth would you want to sit by me? You don't like me, and I don't like you either. Go away, before I get Goku on you." He smirked. Bulma looked up at him. Her face showed that she was sad, scared, that something was wrong. Vegeta was amazed. What could Mark have done to make Bulma truthfully scared of him?
"Sorry," Vegeta mumbled. He let her stay.
ChiChi was late to class. She ran through the hallway, strait to Language Arts. She shared this class with Goku. The teacher was very 'upset' with ChiChi's late appearance.
"ChiChi, you are LATE! Take a seat! If it happens again, I'll make sure you'll regret it!" All the students laughed. The teacher was laughing too. ChiChi was so embarrassed!
She noticed all the seats were in rows of 2. She saw Goku, sitting by himself, and not laughing. She sat next to him. "It's ok." He said. ChiChi looked at him like he was stupid. "No, really. The teacher, she's really nice. She told us she only gets mad for good reasons. We didn't believe her, so she said she would show us. You were just in the wrong place, at the wrong time. They laughed because we all know she will never have to be mean like that, and we won't have to take her seriously." With that, Goku smiled at Chichi. She couldn't help but smile back. How was he so nice to her? She was mean to him and not for a good reason either. Yesterday, "ChiChi, did Goku explain?" Mrs. Demps asked. ChiChi nodded. "Well, I hope you all know that your seat is now where you will sit for the rest of the year." Everyone looked at their partner, and smiled. There was always a boy with a girl. ChiChi gave Goku a friendly smile, and Goku did the same. Both blushed when they stopped smiling, and they each looked a different way when they were done. "Well, I still have no work for you, so just talk quietly. You now know what will happen if you don't listen to me."
The class laughed, and started talking amongst themselves.
"Hey, Goku" ChiChi started. Goku looked at her. "I'm sorry that I was mean to you yesterday... My first day is always the second-worst day." Goku only smiled. So, she really was a nice girl. He needed to be her friend now, more then ever. He thought of what to say, then started.
"It's ok. Believe me, when Angel starts talking, anyone could go off on her. Once you go off, it's really hard to control who you're nice to. Besides, you had a point. Your last year at high school should be focused on school work, not boys." ChiChi quickly cut in.
"Yeah, but that doesn't mean we could'nt be just friends, ya know? The last thing I need is a friend like Vegeta, one who only wants to piss me off." ChiChi laughed, and Goku did the same. Wait... 'just frineds' Wha... di... huh?' Goku thought. 'Oh my god... does that mean we're frineds now?' He had to ask.
"Wait... so you accept me as a friend? You won't get all angry with me again?" ChiChi couldn't help but laugh. For a guy who's good with girls, he sure was bad. Goku liked that laugh. 'PLEASE, PLEASE! LET US BE FRINEDS!' Goku was thinking.
"Gosh. Do I really mean that much to you? Of course we're frineds! What? Are you trying to get more 'girlfriends' this year? It's ok. You got me. And I still get angry with friends, so your not safe from my wrath!" Goku had to blush. He looked away so she wouldn't have to see him blush. He thought he should start a conversation before she'd get bored.
"Why is your first day your second-worst day?" He was so lost to why this was so.
"On the first day, everyone knows summer is gone. But on the last day, which is my worst day, you cry not knowing if you'd see your friends again. Since this is my last year in school, I don't know if I'd see my friends ever again. Plus, I hate cryin in public."
Goku never really thought like that. He never cried before in his life, but he always hated seeing his friends cry over him.
"So, why were you late? You didn't get lost, did you?" ChiChi gave him a look. She had a serious look now. 'Was it something I said' Goku thought. 'Wait... DUH! I did say somethin to her...'
"I don't really wanna talk about it Goku. No offense." Goku got sad. He really wanted to know. He couldn't just let her get away with that. He pushed his luck.
"Come on ChiChi. P...L...E...A...S...E...? I promise I won't tell anyone!" Now ChiChi got annoyed. He put on his teademark smile. She almost gave up.
"I don't care if you tell anyone, but I don't wanna talk about it." 'One more try... Maybe this time it'll work.' Goku tried again.
"ChiChi! How much do I have to beg? PLEASE!" ChiChi gave up. As much as she didn't want to, she did.
"Fine... I ran into Derek. Is that what you wanted to hear?" Derek? 'Oh my god!' Goku thought. Derek was the other boy with Mark, the one ChiChi was so scared of. Goku already had a reason to be angry with him, but now he had another. As much as he wanted to know the details, he didn't ask. He just made sure ChiChi was ok.
"Did he do anything to you? I just wanna know if he hurt you." ChiChi's eyes started to water. Goku, some how, felt her pain.
"You don't need details. All I will say is that I'm scared of him, and that he wouldn't leave me alone. I was so busy trying to get away from him, that I was late. Now, is that enough?" 'Gosh... Goku needs to stop asking so many questions.'
"Well... I want to know why you fear him so much, but I'll ask some other time. For now, I'm just glad you're safe." ChiChi smiled now. 'Why do I have to be so frekin scared? I can't bring myslef to just put my arm around her and comfort her! Man, Vegeta's right, I am pathetic'. Before she and Bulma went to class, Bulma said Goku had a past with Derek. Goku would easily jump to 'rescue' ChiChi if he was ever needed. She had no reason to fear Derek if Goku was with her. For once, she felt safe. But now it was her turn to ask some questions. She had to return the favor. It was only the right thing to do!
"So, Bulma told me you have a past with Derek. Is she right?" ChiChi got his attention, but no where near the answer that she wanted.
"How wold Bulma know? She had a hard time remembering me, and she went to a different school last year." He had a point. 'Darn! Now this has to take longer than I want to.' She thought.
"Well, I noticed you were eyeing him down, and that he did the same thing to you. And Bulma asked some girl and all that girl would say is that you two had a past. Now I want to know what that past is." Goku made a weird face. ChiChi needed to know some things, so she made it easier on him. "Ok, you don't have to give details like me, but I still wanna know some stuff!" He was looking a little more relaxed now. 'This isn't working! But this will' She thought. "Come on Goku P...L...E...A...S...E...?"
Goku could'nt help but smile. She was so bad, but he liked it. 'I guess I don't have a choice anymore...' He thought. 'She just HAD to copy me'
"Well... How about this. I'll tell you, anything you want to know, but later. How does that sound?" He was so easy! ChiChi didn't have to use details, and yet he will give her the whole story! 'Man, am I good or what?' She thought.
"Ok. But, if you back down, hm... I'll stop talking to you." Goku's heart stopped. His jaw went strait down. Did she just say that? Man, those words really hurt him! 'Now I can't wait 'til I'm dating her' he said sarcastically. He didn't have much of a choice for sure now.
"Ok. Just don't threaten me like that! Those words really hurt!" Playing around, Goku put his lower lip down, and made the cutest sad face anyone could make. He also crossed his arms on his chest. ChiChi laughed, then she played along.
"Aw! Did I mawke the bawby upswet?" Goku had his eyes on the desk. He only nodded. ChiChi took her left hand, and she grabbed his chin. (not hard, softly) Goku's heart skipped a beat. She touched him, already! For that moment, he was in heaven, so to speak. Then ChiChi rubbed his cheek in a soothing way. His frown turned into a smile. "Wewll, I'm SWO sowy! I won't let it hawppen agawin. Dowes thwat mawke yew feewl bettwer?" She said all this in a baby voice. Goku started laughing. ChiChi did the same thing. 'She is so cool!' Goku thought.
That's when the bell rang. For a moment, Goku and ChiChi only looked at each other. Then, out of no where, ChiChi got up very quickly. After a few moments, Goku noticed why. It finally hit him, she was blushing! Now Goku knew there was a chance that she liked him. After all, he practically just flirted with her, in his own way. To know that she liked his flirting technique, he couldn't wait until P.E. now. Even though Vegeta and Bulma would be there, he didn't care. He was her friend! He had every right to 'hit on her'.
Soon after, the lunch bell rang. Vegeta and Goku were the first ones in line. The lunch food wasn't all that good, but it also wasn't all that bad. With all the girls that Goku had as friends, he usually had a huge lunch. On a rare occasion, Goku would share with Vegeta. Goku really wanted to eat with ChiChi, but she was no where to be seen.
Was she ok? Did Derek get to her? Goku relaxed when he saw ChiChi with Bulma. Bulma went through the line, and ChiChi waited for her. When ChiChi noticed Goku, he waved her over. She did the 'one sec' thing so she could bring Bulma as well. Vegeta snorted at what Goku just did. He had to spend Science with Bulma, and he was sick of being nice to her.
"Why do you have to be so fucking nice all the god damn time? I don't want what's-her-face sitting here!" Goku just gave him a look, before he smacked Vegeta like he did in the morning.
"Shut it! I'm the one who sat here first, you followed me. In a way, this is my table, not yours. If you don't wanna sit with her, then go sit some where else. Besides, I have to ask ChiChi something." Vegeta smirked.
"So, I take it you're gonna ask the girl out huh?" Goku knew Vegeta wanted a response. 'Why not burst his bubble?' Goku thought. Goku smirked at Vegeta. 'Since when does he smirk? Did I miss somethin?' Vegeta thought.
"Well, Ima ask her out and all, but not now. We just became official friends, so I guess she needs some time before I can ask her." Wait! wasn't he supposed to try to hide the fact that he liked her? Why was he playing along with Vegeta's little game? 'Great! Now my only entertainment is gone! Perfect time for him to grow up! Damnit!' Vegeta thought. Goku only laughed. "But for real, it's somthin important. Don't think about it too much." At that moment, Bulma came out of the lunch line. They just started walking toward Goku and Vegeta when something stopped them. Derek and Mark blocked the path. Vegeta looked to see how his brother was reacting. Goku's heart stopped. All Derek did was ask ChiChi one question, and her eyes hid tears. He wondered how she was doing, now that he was there. They seemed to say some things, some things that Bulma didn't like, and then they left. Goku was relieved that they chose to not make a scene. ChiChi was happy to be so close to Goku, and Bulma was happy that they left. Goku sat across from Vegeta, forcing him to sit next to Bulma. Of course, Bulma did NOT like this!
"Wha- GOKU! I don't wanna sit next to him! Please sit next to him... for me?" Goku knew she would complain, so he came up with a plan. This plan would keep Goku seated next to ChiChi. He gave it a shot.
"Well, you and Vegeta said you would be nice to eachother. I thought, 'Why not start at lunch today?' Come on Bulma! You know that this is a good idea. Just go along with it." Bulma was getting mad. She noticed he had this all planned out. Since she was mad, she decided to try and embarass Goku.
"Just 'cause you like ChiChi you think you can sit by her all the damn time." He blushed a litte, but ChiChi payed her no mind. Her mind was else where. Why would Derek come up to her, and then leave? After the past 'they' had, she thought he would do something much worse than make her scared. When she heard her name, she snapped back into reaity. Vegeta cut in before ChiChi could ask why her name was said, and what for.
"Well, I heard what you said this morning after I left. You said somthin like 'you don't like me'. Mmhm, I heard you!" Buma blushed a little. Vegeta continued, with a smirk of course, "Yet, in Science you had a chance to sit where ever the hell you wanted, and you some how ended up next to me. I don't see why you don't wanna sit with me now."
Bulma gave up, and sat down. Goku got to sit next to ChiChi. He was so happy! He then heard something. He looked where the sound was comming from, and saw ChiChi, laughing! Her laugh was amazing to him. She was laughing because every word that came out of Vegeta's mouth was true, and Bulma knew that. She gave ChiChi a cold stare.
"Shut up ChiChi. I'm not in the mood for your little games." ChiChi couldn't control herself. Her laugh got quieter, which was more amusing than her other laugh. Goku thought this 'new' laugh was so funny. Before he knew it, he was laughing with her! Trying to keep their balance, they leant their hands on each other, and just when you'd think they were done, they would take one look at each other, and start again! Vegeta found himself laughing every now and then, for to him, those two were such idiots! All the laughter stopped when Derek and Mark re-entered. They threw out their trays, and then left. 'Now's my chance' Goku thought.
"What did Derek ask that made you upset, ChiChi?" ChiChi's 'happy' face left, and she seemed to pale a little.
"He...well...I guess you could say he asked me out..." Goku's heart stopped. ChiChi was scared of him, and yet he asked her out? Hopefully ChiChi's fear of him wouldn't cloud her better judgment.
"I told him I'd think about it, but after what happened with 'us,' I seriously doubt a 'no' is an answer." She seemed scared, terrified now. Knowing Goku liked her, Vegeta thought it right to 'aid' his brother with the given situation.
"Shit, I don't see what you're so fuckin scared of! He's probably gonna say, 'Will you got out with me, yes or no?' That's when you aswer 'or'! And to say I thought I was stupid!" His plan eased the tense atmosphere a little. ChiChi looked up and smiled. Heck, she was giggling before any one knew it.
"Thanks Vegeta, I really didn't know what to say there, you really helped." Goku said that in Vegeta's head.
"You're just lucky I accept her. I guess she'll be a good girlfriend, and I can see Ma takin a likin in her. You better not screw it up! You know I hate bein nice!"
"God Vegeta, I thought that was a neutral comment, I didn't know you were tryin to be nice. But for the record, thanks any way."
"What? I just wasted my breath tryin to cheer her up, and that's bein neutral? See if I help again!"
"If you want help with Bulma, to be your girlfriend or just a friend, you better stay nice to ChiChi, got it?"
"Fucking shit man! Fine! But you better gimme some fucking good help, or else!"
"Thanks Vegeta, I really appreciate it. I never thought of that. I guess I could use that against Dad now." She started to giggle again.
'Who would've thought Vegeta could actually be nice? Maybe if I'm lucky, he'll be nicer to me... But I doubt that will ever happen...' Bulma sighed to herself. If she would've kept to her self that day in the store, Vegeta would be nicer to her, like he was to ChiChi. Bulma couldn't help but feel there was more to this than what met theeye, but she had no idea what that was, and it drove her nuts!
"So ChiChi, can you tell me now?" Goku asked. She took in a deep breath, and held it in for a while. She knew this was comming. He did say he would ask for details later, but she still wasn't ready to tell any of them, even though Bulma knew.
"I'm sorry, but I can't say, not yet. Sorry..." Goku just smiled at her.
"Tell you what?" Vegeta cut in.
"Don't worry about it too much." Goku replied. Vegeta gave that 'now I'm even more pissed look'. He tried to speak, but was silenced by Goku.
"You wanna know mine then?" He asked. He wanted to give her anything she wanted. Right now she wanted to know some things that had to do with that. She nodded, but Vegeta cut in, again.
"What? You mean that so called 'past' of yours with that one fag?" Goku laughed at what Vegeta said. 'Fag' Vegeta rarely said that word.
"Yea. Now, before I was so rudely interrupted," Vegeta snorted," You see, it all happened my first year at high school. There was this girl, she was really cool! Every one said she was me, in a girls body. She was pure of heart. She kept all her promises, never cursed, and she wouldn't hit boys either. Vegeta, she was the girl you said I dated, because I had her number. Anyway, everyone tried to get us together. 'Cause she was like me, she refused to date me without knowing me. When we got to know each other, we saw each other like older brother and younger sister. She was the best." Then, Goku got quiet for a while. "That's when Derek first went to the school. Back then, we were close friends. I found out he liked her, and I hooked them up 'cause she liked him too. They were so cute together, and he respected the times when she wanted to be with me. Then one day, he asked to take her out. I was ok with it. That one date changed to two, three, four, so on. You get the point. One day, he asked her, to go with some friends. I told her she shouldn't, but she did anyway. I tried to call her, but there was no answer." He fell silent again. ChiChi put her hand on his. Her hand was so soft. He looked at her, and she urged him on. "I did this little technique I had specially for her, so I could know where she was at all times. I followed it to that spot.
When I got there, all I saw was this group of guys, taking turns." ChiChi found it hard to swallow. "I got there too late. I got every one of them at the dead end of the ally.
When I looked at her, she was dead. I beat the snot out of everyone who was there. Ever since then, the only person I could ever bring myslef to hate was Derek." There was a long silence. ChiChi had no idea this had happened! She felt bad, wanting to know the story and all. Vegeta was the first to speak.
"HOLY SHIT! I remember that girl!" Was all he said. Bulma gave him a look that said, 'You idiot! Can't you see he's sad right now? Try to say something that's nice!' He just snorted at her. Bulma, on the other hand, tried to help.
"I had no idea Goku. I'm sorry for the loss. I have a 'past' with him as well, I guess you could say." ChiChi stole a glare at her. Bulma was the only person other than her dad that knew what happened between them. She hoped Bulma wouldn't say anything. But she didn't. Of corse, Vegeta was the one to make that little moment of peace leave them.
"So! I saw the way you looked at Mark earlier, Bulma!" She didn't want to say anything, but he just wouldn't quit! "What did he ask you?" Bulma sighed.
"He didn't ask me anything. He made nasty comments, like how I was SO great in bed, how I always gave Mark good money, those kind of nasty things. He just pissed me off." She glared at Goku, totally forgetting how 'upset' he just was, "And Goku only fueled that anger! Makin me sit next to you! Vegeta, you weren't much help as well! Helpin him when you should've been tryin to get him to sit by you! And don't get me started on Goku and ChiChi's little laughin attack!" ChiChi started to giggle again, but controlled herself.
"So you actually slept with him?" Vegeta thought he knew the answer, but it wouldn't hurt to know the truth and piss off Bulma even more so why not? "Disgusting!" He had a HUGE smirk on his face now. Any one who slept with Mark was disgusting!
"NO! I DIDN'T SLEEP WITH HIM! GOD!" 'Oh yea! She's pissed! Time to ask a serious question!'
"Why don't you tell us why you, say, 'dislike' Mark so much now, hm?" 'Oh great' she said to herself. Well, Goku was there... Things couldn't be all that bad.
"Mark was the first and only guy I dated. Is that what you wanted to hear, Vegeta?" He snorted. He knew she was hiding something. "You're so lucky I said I would be nice toward you, or else I wouldn't be saying this. He was a jerk. When we first met, I was scared of him. I believed dad, how he would say, 'Boys will ruin your life! Stay away from them!' After I met Mark, he asked me out. I didn't have a choice but to say yes. He was such a dick though! If I looked at a boy, 'What? Would you rather date that punk?' But he grew worse. In middle school, he started to hit me." Vegeta got pissed. He didn't know why, but he felt Bulma belonged to him. For some reason, Bulma meant so much to him. 'Perfect!' He thought. 'Maybe it's 'cause she's my entertainment! If that's the case, then hell yeah she belongs to me!' "When I finally broke up with him, he swore we were still dating. I had to switch schools because of him. But, he's the reason I have this attitude. He's the only boy I fear, he's the only boy I will ever fear."
With that, she looked at Vegeta like, 'What'chya gonna do 'bout that, huh?' Vegeta only smirked, and gave his 'reply.'
"Girl! Realize what you said, 'BOY!' Do I look like a fucking boy to you! NO! I'm a grown-ass man! If you want to insult me, at least get your facts strait!" He smirked as he saw her get madder. Goku was about to do something, when Bulma ushered him to stay seated.
"Well, I do have my facts strait. You don't! If you're a grown-ass man, where is your house?" No answer. "Hm... ok. How 'bout a car?" Vegeta was about to say something before she cut him off. "The car you bought with your money?" That shut him up quick. "Ok... How about a degree? Did you finish high school?" Another no answer. "Ok, so I'm guessing you have a degree from college?" He wasn't even looking at her by now. He was so wrong about her. She really was a smart girl. Vegeta started thinking that she was the second smartest person, second to her father. "How 'bout a family you actually take care of? You know, you have a wife that you did'nt leave, and maybe a kid or two. Where are they?" Still no reply. "And to say you had the nerve to say my facts were not strait! Next time, you get your facts strait!" Vegeta smirked at her now. 'God he pisses me off! How the hell could he be smirking after I just told him how it is? Damn!'
"Ok. For once, I was wrong. But don't go lecturing me! You're not my mother! So shut it!" He got up to throw away his tray. Bulma had a minor fit, then she calmed down.
She followed him, and threw out her tray as well.
"Do you have to follow me everywhere? You're pissing me off." He said it under his breath. Bulma gave him a look.
"Look, Mark just came in. There's no way he would just come in, and leave right after. Yes, I'm nervous around him. You aren't. Please Vegeta, I know you'll laugh, but there's a reason I put up with you. You're not scared of anything, and I feel..." Her eyes were tearing. He wanted to help her, so he cut in.
"Hey," He hugged her. Goku stared at him! What was that in his eye? Goku never saw that in his eyes before. It was so weird. Was it peace? Was he happy to help some one? Vegeta continued. "I now know why you act the way you do. I just mess with you 'cause it's fun." His facial expression changed. He was serious in his face now.
"When ever he's around, I'll be nice to you. Believe it or not, now that I know what he did to you, I have another reason to beat the shit outta him. But, all I ask is when I become the guy on top, you do one thing for me. Trust me, it won't be anything nasty. "She nodded, and he held on to her a little longer. After a while he let her go. ChiChi was laughing. She knew Bulma was happy now. That's when the bell rang, and it was time to get back to class...
Well? What do you think? Well... about the enemy thing... this chapter came out much longer than I expected. ChiChi and Bulma's girl enemies will be introduced next chapter. ChiChi's past with Derek mite be said as well. Idk yet. Hope you liked it! If thats a cliff hanger... srry thats not whats intended. mom thinks im gettin sick, but dont worry! i have an extremely good imune system! i havent thrown up in ages, or had that nasty medicene! thats how good it is! fear not! tmi lol the chpts will still b comming, i just mite leave cliff hangers... lol now i wonder whats better... me gettin sick, or cliff hangers lol about the yes or no thing, with ChiChi and Vegeta, i got that from my brother... god somtimes i wanna beat him.. and then 4 the nice teacher, ChiChi's little late problem, read Sorasgirl16's fic, that's where I got the idea! now u have 2 read it! Thanx 4 da idea gurl! i 'stole' it but u cant stop me! ha! lol i just got the idea from readin her fic. heres the responses!
mooglechick: well, now u noe wut happened next! lol srry i confused u lol and i bet i love ur fic more! yea u guys, her KH2 fic is gettin better! i cant wait till her next chpt!
and bout Vegeta kickin their asses... i got a special 'sneak peek' next chpt, see... i wuz thinkin on wut 2 make happen next, but since u couldnt wait i gave u and Vegeta
wut u wanted, but just a little.
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me: how did u get here? im talkin 2 my reviewers!
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have no idea y lol so u g2 b patient 4 once, ok? work with me here! lol
serverussweetie: thanx! i wuz hopin u guys liked it! u noe, my moms rele smart... mayb next time i sould listen 2 her, but she wants me 2 enter soom contest where i
can publish this fic. funny, that contest doesnt exist lol ok, so shes smart somtimes lol. well, now i bet u cant wait till chpt 5! lol well u have 2 wait! no fair! how do u smell
popular stories? i wanna noe 2! lol thanx! i hope my fic does get popular!
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fanfiction idol! kool! lol how did i noe u would love the parts with Goku? cuz i look at ur profile all the time! lol keepin Goku in character... thats 2 easy lol and afta wut i put
Bulma and Vegeta through this chpt, i hope ur happy! just like with mooglechick, u get a preview, but she asked 1st so its mainly hers! we gotta b fair here! lol i hope u
liked the 'romance' i put up! i already had it, but once i saw u wanted some, i changed it! gotta keep my lovely reviewers happy, ya noe?
as 4 trunks2000, she didnt review... girl, i hope ur ok. like mayb ur comp is bin gay and u cant get on or somthin. mayb skool is a prob, even though its summer. i just
hope that ur not sick, and that everything is ok. dont worry bout not reviwing, id wait if i could, but i g2 b fair! i hope u review next chpt!
Yea so now, if you wanna review, you should be able 2 with no problem. now, i think its called flame... idk, but u can yell at me 4 that, i rele deserve it! if u dont yell at me
cuz ur scared or somthin, then shame on u! i wont mess up again if u yell at me, yellin makes me sucsessful! lol