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Know what from all of the stories I made this one has the longest life because I usually back out especially when I see its not that successful in receiving hits...
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Chapter 4
Karin's power
Months passed by, Kazune can see the big change on Karin. In the way she acted, she spoke, everything! And the most odd thing that he noticed was Karin going out everyday and coming home exhausted. And this made him worry more. So he confronted his so-called "wife".
"Hey Karin, is there something wrong with you?" asked Kazune with a worried voice.
"No, why ask that?" asked Karin dully as she could muster.
"It's just that I'm worried about you nowadays."
"Don't worry Kazune-kun, I'm fine... ok..." said Karin assuring him.
'I'm really worried about her...maybe today I'll follow her wherever she's going today.'
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"Hey, Kazune-kun I'll just go somewhere..." said Karin lifelessly.
"Ok, just be back as soon possible." replied Kazune
"Sure..."
'Its been months and he hasn't notice anything...'
'Recently I've been feeling bad lately I wonder what's happening...'
'I've always felt bad since then...'
' I wonder why...I can't smile...'
Then she left with a mind filled with thoughts.
'Her face was even more serious then ever...Now I'm really am worried...'
"Hey,Kazusa..."
"Yes, Kazune?" replied her so-called sister.
"I just need to go somewhere...please take care of Suzune for me."
"Where are you going Kazune?" asked Kazusa.
"I'll just buy something that I need for school."
"Oh, ok...be back soon."
"Yeah, see you." replied Kazune as he turned for the door.
'Ok Karin I hope that you're not that far... I must run quickly...'
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As I passed a lot of shops, I finally found her... still walking as lifelessly as ever.
'This is really weird...Does she do this everyday?'
'So damn odd...'
I continued to follow her to a secluded area, a forest really far away from home. I stayed as quietly as I can and especially stayed fearless from this terrifying insects buzzing around me!
'For the venue, I guess she really doesn't want anybody to see her...especially me...'
'Man, this sucks...I wonder what is she hiding out here?'
"I AM GOD!"
'?! What the?!'
'Why change in her kamika? Hmmm, the place look disastrous as if a tornado came crushing those trees, I wonder what's happening?'
'What's this...dark aura...'
As I watched her standing there staring at a tree for a while, I really got curious. Then suddenly it exploded, and the pieces of the tree flew away to different places as it exploded. As I carefully watched, I was really surprised seeing her scratched free from the explosion. Then another person came.
"Hello, Hanazono-san... nice to see you having fun with your power." said Rika as she walked away from the nearby trees.
I was really tempted to use Kamika, but since I really don't want to make a move, I fought the temption and continued to watch the two.
'Power, huh? I guess I really missed out a lot for 3 months.'
Then I just watched her just standing there.
"Hmmm, well, Hanazono-san, I hope that you're prepared! Kirio-outo-sama!" shouted Rika.
"Arggh!" shouted Kirio as he jumped of the tree, shooting Karin-with dark power.
'Karin! Move! MOVE! KARIN!!'
"Karin!!" shouted Kazune from the bushes as he changed into his kamika form.
As the rays neared us, it just disappeared. And it really surprised me.
"God thunder..."stated Karin calmly without even moving. Then suddenly, a ray of light emitted from the sky hitting the whole place, but to my surprise its not even hitting us, as if there was a barrier over us and as I looked into Karin's dear face, she even looked more dully, that made me even sadder as if there's something inside her.
'Karin, why do you look so sad and dull?'
' What goes into that head of yours anyway?'
'And how did you get this great immense power from?'
'This is so unlike you Karin...'
"How did you get this strong, novice Goddess?" asked Kirio, " Well, lets see if you're powerful enough!" Then a great vast dark light emitted from his staff, as it formed into a giant ball of black flame and and went towards Karin and Kazune. Kazune was really worried and said,
"I'll protect you, Karin. Just stand back."
"No, you stand back Kazune...I'll handle this on my own, I don't need your help." said Karin coldly as she raised her hand as Purple light emerged on her hand.
'Purple light? This is the first time I saw that, I usually see pink. There's really something different here. And I'm not liking it one bit. But... I'm really worried, Karin getting immense power and her sudden change of attitude. It really bothers me a lot.'
Then all Karin just did and just used that small bit of power in her hand and just touched the fireball and it just dispersed to a beautiful sight. And everyone was really surprised, even Rika, not expecting her to be powerful as this.
'This will be harder than I thought, but one day I'll make sure that your powers will be ours too, you just wait Hanazono as that seed grows in your heart, I bet you'll not even survive it and die as well...'
'This will be fun...'
"Kirio-sama, let's retreat for now." said Rika.
"Ok, then...We'll be back Novice Goddess! See ya around!" shouted Kirio as they fled away quickly from the place.
Getting back to reality Kazune went to Karin.
"Hey, Karin what wa-," said Kazune then Karin went down on her knees as she held her chest with a pain-stricken face." KARIN! KARIN! WHAT'S WRONG! SPEAK TO ME KARIN!"
Then Kazune held her in his arms making her rest.
"Kazune-kun, don't worry I'm fine...Its normal... I'm sorry if I kept this away from you for months...I-" said Karin.
"Shhh...rest now talk later...just ride on my back until we get home." said Kazune kneeling down making her ride his back.
"No, I'm fine I can walk..." said Karin but suprisingly Kazune didn't mind her words and carried her anyways.
"Kazune-kun...I'm really sorry..." said Karin in a weak voice and slowly drifted off to sleep.
"Idiotic girl..." replied Kazune teasingly and just looked on her adoring face.
'Karin you idiot, what have you been up to huh... so stupid...you really make me worry.'
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Wow! This was the longest chapter that I've made in my entire life! I guess if this was written in paper this could have been 4-5 pages I think!!Or even more!!O.O
I just hope that you guys enjoyed it all!:3
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