OK since I have no clue what my stories should be rated as I have to ask that if you could tell me what the appropriate rating should be then please do so. My view on this stuff is very different then other people as I have been more mature then most 50 year olds when I was 8 years old so I have no clue what the mature problem is as I have known that kids the age of fourteen have seen and done things that the managers of this site have claimed to be rated ma but I see no point in it as kids now a days are cussing and playing very violent games and even watching porno's that should be only viewed as an adult. When I was 10 I watched movies that were rated r so the moral standing on the ratings have no meaning to me. The managers are obviously not of sound society standards as I am certain that where they live they have seen and heard of this type of thing themselves and no matter what they do they cannot change it for it is part of humanity and therefore part of themselves because if you ask them to be honest with themselves and ask if they like to watch rated r movies or read play violent games or even games that are violent and have the rated r things in them such as god of war then they have to say yes because there is no self respecting male out there that does not like some kind of fighting game or rated r movies same for some females out there because my sister likes the shows that are violent and she thinks they are cool they even give her inspiration for her pictures that she draws. But apparently there are a select few humans that are not in this category as they have appeared as the managers of this sight.
For the ratings I view them as k is for the kids below twelve, t is for teens, m is for mature people no matter the age if you disagree then that is up to you as no one is forcing you to read them and if you take the stories off the site then you are violating the freedom of press where the writer can write and publish anything that they want and if it so happens that there is something wrong with it that you don't like tell them and see if you can work out a compromise to get it to where you can like it or just ignore it as I have seen people do to my stories from the hits and reviews that I have gotten from them. So far I have only gotten three reviews from other members that were not polite and the last one I have not had the opportunity to reply to as I am going to be nice to him compared to the other one that told me my story was crap, I will reply to him when I make the next chapter of the blessings from the linear gods so be patient for it if you have read that story also, then you get to see how I deal with people who flame me or my stories as I don't take kindly to them, if it is constructive criticism state that it is so I know that you are trying to help or put it nicely so that I don't make you sound like a fool for the statement that you leave,for instance if you write in the review that I should consider something like 'putting more flesh' or 'that I am skipping to much in the story' I will take those as insults to my story just like the fact that I should not update because you don't like the story then you will be having to be put down like I did to that one guy from the story that I put up called airfox I still have what I wrote to him in my profile so don't try to be Yoda while putting my story down or you will get the exact same treatment as him, as a side note to that if you flame any story that I make then be prepared to be degraded the exact same way that you degraded or insulted me or my story as I wont put up with it.
There are very few things that can be done that piss me off but insulting what I made is on the list near the top with insulting or hurting my family and making them cry because if I see that I can and will make you feel sorry for ever meeting them as I am very easily pissed of and it increases when any person that I see as family is insulted or hurt but that is only if you can make me become pissed off cause that is hard to do if you don't know how to do it as I have a very high tolerance for stupidity and annoyances as my cousins can attest as that is all they do to my immediate family as we are treated as the black sheep of the bunch or the lone wolf that had cubs and they stick to said wolf.
For the question of if kyuubi is going to be homaru or Miya sorry but no its neither of them but I will give you a hint look at kyuubi's claw's and you will be able to tell who if you have a good sekirei memory or go to the sekirei wiki site. Miya will make an appearance later on though but she will not be one of his sekirei. because of the book he looks up to her as a mother figure as the book taught him more then anyone else with the exception of his wife and future wives. I am not sure if homaru will show up as of yet if so I think I will make homaru a female right off or will be female by the time that Naruto meets homaru anyway
onto story now
as Naruto and his female companions walked down the road to wave he began recalling what had happened the past two months.
-flash-
as the time came for Naruto to take Chiho on the date they found that they were getting a little nervous as Chiho could be seen stressing over what to where on the date while Naruto was talking to Tsukiumi over what he should do on the date.
"well husband of mine I think you should just be you and not some fake person a if it were I that went on the outing with thou then I would like to get to know the real you instead of a fake you. Other then that I think that you should do things that you both like maybe take a walk through the park if you like that for example." Tsukiumi said to him smiling at his nervousness.
"OK so I should just be me and take things at a pace that we both like right?"
"yes and remember no female likes to be looked at like a piece of meat so be respectful and don't look and linger on anything but the woman's face you can five a scan to her body to let her know that you find her attractive but don't spend so much time on it that it makes her uncomfortable at your gaze. If you must stare at anything stare at the eyes or lips of the woman. Alright?"
"yes I understand hime all I have to do is be myself and be respectful of the woman's feelings and to be mindful of her." he said to her getting her to nod at him.
"good now go and get her for your date and then you can enjoy yourselves on your date." Tsukiumi said to him.
As he walked up stares to her room Naruto was still a bit nervous that he would mess this up for her and make her hate him.
Same time as Naruto talking to Tsukiumi
as Chiho was getting ready for her date she couldn't decide what to where so she asked Uzume to help her pick something out for her.
" Uzume what do you think I should do with Naruto kun on the date? "
"well I guess you should be yourself and have fun." she replied to her.
" I just cant find what to wear on the date Uzume Chan can you help me with it? Could you maybe make me a dress to wear please? I know that you are a great seamstress and I love the outfits you make me." Chiho asked her
"alright what kind do you want and I will make it real quick for you." she said with a soft sigh at her ashikabi's attitude. After getting the details for the dress she set to work right away on it."so what made you accept the date anyway Chiho Chan?" she asked
"well I guess it was the fact that he was helping us and never wanted anything in return except to get to know us and be friends with us, then it went to his caring nature and his great eyes as a bonus for me. But I think the part that got me the most was that he was understanding of your hesitance and would gladly forget about trying to get you if you didn't want to go out with him that shows that he is willing to set his own feelings aside for those he cares about." Chiho said to her with a dazzling smile in place on her face as she thought and listed the things that she liked about him.
"yeah I can understand that too as I was hesitant to agree to his offer as I thought that I would hurt your feeling as my ashikabi but when you and he agreed that if things didn't work for me and him then I could call it off and we could still be friends that made it just better for me along with the fact that you don't mind if I try to date him."
"well Uzume Chan I think that if you want to have a family then you should be able to without having to be afraid of hurting my feelings so I am good with you wanting to date someone as long as they treat you right like Naruto obviously does Tsukiumi and any one else that will wind up with him and I think that right there would make him the best kind of father out there as he will care for his children no matter what anyone says about them." Chiho replied to her
"yes well I think that I wont need to find any other person after his date with me as I am sure he will make it near perfect or as close as he is able to for both of us. I was actually surprised that Tsukiumi said that if we wanted we could be with him in the first place."
"well I think that she just wanted to have some more friends and then we wouldn't need to find a place to live in as then the one that cares for us is right in this house and he wouldn't let us leave if we didn't really want to. Maybe she saw that deep down we wanted to be with a man that is like him no matter what I don't know but I do know that she has given us the chance and I don't think we should waste it on the off chance that we don't click with him, as he said yesterday he is willing to just be friends if we don't click on that level and forget about having a relationship with the ones that don't click with him and stay as friends with them so I say at least give it a chance to find the happiness that a male can give and remember that no matter what I still like you and you still like me. He wont take either of us away from the other as long as we still like each other it would be adding to the family as if you don't like him like that you could still be with me but he would be with me and you would gain something like a brother in him if that happens same with me if I don't but you do okay Uzume Chan?"
"yeah but I think that he will be good to both of us and then we could be together, all of us, with whatever others he manage to get to be his wives as I heard he had to have at least four to six, and I know for a fact that Naruto would only date the ones that he sees potential love for in and Tsukiumi would only give permission to those who see him for himself. Here you go its almost time for your date Chiho put this on and I'll help with your hair and make up." she said holding up the finished dress to her friend.
"thanks Uzume Chan your a life saver." Chiho said hugging her before putting the dress on and sitting in a chair facing a mirror in her room.
After a little while there was a knock on her door."yes who is it?" Chiho asked
"its Naruto are you ready chi Chan?" the muffled voice of the male ashikabi called out
"almost Naruto kun I'll be done in a second please hold on." she told him
"as long as you need, don't worry, I don't mind as it shows that you are looking forward to the date." you could basicly hear his smile through the door as he said this happily to her making her sigh in relief at him not minding her taking her time to get ready for him.
"thank you." she said as Uzume finished her hair and started applying the make up to her face lightly, to enhance her natural beauty.
"there we go all done Chiho Chan I know he will love this." Uzume said with a smile to the girl
"i hope so." she said hugging the other girl after she got up then heading to the door. "sorry for making you wait I was having Uzume Chan help with my hair and make up." she told him
"like I said I don't mind waiting as you were looking forward to the date and the fact that your you look even more beautiful then before only helps to affirm that fact my dear." he said with a smile that made her blush lightly at him. "shall we head out now fair maiden?" he asked her holding out his arm to her.
"why thank you kind sir. Yes I think we will head out now." she said following his lead with the terminology for each other.
"i do have to say that you look absolutely gorgeous and breathtaking in that dress with your hair like that and the light make up though,my fair maiden." Naruto said looking over her dress and face to see that she was in a red Chinese style dress adorned with majestic phoenix designs and her hair up in a Chinese style bun with chopstick like hair pins holding it together (there is a picture of the dress on the profile) as they started to leave the house making her blush even more.
"well I couldn't find what to wear for our date so I asked Uzume Chan to help by making one as she is an expert seamstress and love to make outfits for me, then she offered to help with my hair and make up. But thank you any way my kind sir" she said in reply "i have to say that you look fairly handsome also, even more then any other guy that I have ever or most likely ever see again my kind knight." she said making him blush slightly at the praise also, as she looked over hm he could be seen wearing a dark red tuxedo with light blue and green flames licking the bottom of each pant leg like they were real, with a jacket that was black with his clan symbol on the sleeve of it.(description with a picture on profile)
"why thank you my lady but I cant compare even close to your radiance." he said back as they made their way to the restaurant that he chose based on her likes. While they ate they made small talk about each other and what they both liked getting to know each other better. After the dinner was over Naruto asked "what would you like to do know my lady?"
"well what did you have in mind Naruto kun?" she asked him
"well I was going to suggest to take a walk unless you would prefer to do something else for now."
"hmm a walk sounds perfect." she said to him.
"well then my dear what would you like to go to, a river, the park or the forest?"
"i think the park on this one Naruto kun."
"very well my lady." he said as he began leading her to the park. When they got to the park they saw that some children were there so they decided to sit down and watch them play for a little bit. Some of the kids saw them and came up to them commenting on the clothes they wore or how good or cool they looked getting a smile and thank you in reply from the two ninja. When some commented on how pretty Chiho looked to them Naruto said "yes she is very gorgeous and all but even when shes not dressed like this she is a very beautiful lady that any male would be lucky to date and I just so happen to be on a date now. But we saw that all you children were here so we decided to take a little time to rest and watch you all play until you little ones came over here, don't get me wring its just that we wanted to watch you guys play but thank you for the compliments to us." he told them making them smile in return and comment on how nice he must have been to be on a date with the really pretty lady as they called her making him chuckle lightly.
"thank you all but shouldn't you be getting back to your own parents or to where you live as its getting late and will be getting cold out, we don't want you to get sick now do we?" she told them making them shake there heads and run off after saying their goodbyes. After she shivered lightly she felt a light weight be placed on her shoulders. When she looked at Naruto she saw that he put his jacket on her to keep her warm, smiling she said "thanks Naruto kun"
"no problem we don't want you to gt sick now do we chi Chan?" he said making her giggle slightly at him for saying what she said to the kids.
"no we wouldn't want that to happen." with that the couple walked out of the park and soon found themselves at the door of their house. Walking in and up to her room they stood outside of her room. "thank you for the wonderful night Naruto kun I had a great time on the date." she said smiling at him.
"me too maybe we could do it again sometime after I take Tsukiumi on a date as I bet she would like to go on one some time to get to know me better then we already do." Naruto said before she leaned over and placed a kiss on his cheek making him stop and look at her in slight surprise before he leaned in and kissed her on the lips making her eyes widen before closing and wrapping her arms around his neck while he put his hands on her waist and pulled her closer to him making her gasp slightly as he kept the kiss as a no tongue kiss as he knew they weren't that far into the relationship yet and was happy to keep it as a chaste kiss. When they broke apart for air both of their faces were red and they were smiling while looking into the others eyes and leaning their foreheads together.
"good night my knight." Chiho said as she regained her breath.
"see you in the marrow my dear fair princess." Naruto said in reply before she closed the door and he walked to his own room with Tsukiumi in it lying in the bed half awake.
"oh husband of mine did you enjoy yourself?" she said when she heard him enter the room.
"i did my love but worry not I will take you after I take Uzume I promise my wife." Naruto said as he climbed into the bed with her.
"i know that my love but I still get jealous of the thought that you will be with others aside from me." she said making him smile slightly.
"i know its hard for you hime but at least you will narrow the people down to those that are right for me and then it will only be my friends and people that we can trust no matter what." he said to her while pulling her to him then rolling onto his back taking here with him making her rest on is chest.
"i know its just not easy for me is all. Here I am, I love you and you love me but we are forced to let you marry more women then we want to for the stu..." she started before he cut her off with a passionate kiss that made her moan as he licked her bottom lip asking for entrance. Letting him in she placed her hands on his bare chest to support herself as he wrapped his arms around her waist and brought her closer to him deepening the kiss. Soon they released it in order to breath and she laid her head on his chest listening to his heart lull her to sleep. He watched as she fell asleep then went to sleep himself thinking 'I am her husband so I need to make sure she falls asleep peacefully before I do.'
-end-
when he finished going sown memory lane for that day he found that they where at the shore and needed a bout to cross. So making a bout out of crystal, surprising Anko as she had never heard of the crystal boy yet and stopping her as she was going to find someone that would take them across to wave, he started to remember the date with Uzume.
-flash-
the next day after training Uzume had asked that Chiho come to her room and help her for her date with Naruto as he stayed in his room with Tsukiumi getting him ready as well.
" Chiho Chan would you mind helping me with this design that is giving me some trouble here." she asked as she saw that Chiho had just walked in.
"so what are you going to do on your date Uzume Chan?"
"well I think I will take some cloth with me so Naruto can see what it does somewhat. Other then that I don't know yet." she said to her
"that sounds good, do you think that you will enjoy the date like I did yesterday?"
"not sure I think I will enjoy it but maybe not as much as you." she replied with a sly smirk making Chiho blush knowing what she meant by that.
"yes I admit the kiss was unexpected but it was great and it only helped the feelings that are in me foster more." she said.
"i know."
after Chiho helped her with the kimono and makeup Uzume let her hair down from her side ponytail and started to brush it out. Hearing a knock followed by Naruto asking if she was ready for her date she replied "almost. I'll be done in a minute so please hold on."
"no problem Uzume Chan its good. I'm just exited to be going on a date with a woman as beautiful as yourself I got a little anxious." Naruto replied through the door.
"mou does that mean I'm not beautiful as well Naru kun?" he heard Chiho exclaim to him.
"no it means that you were even more beautiful than words could express or convey to anyone dear. I'm sure that with your help Uzume will be the same, not that she wouldn't be of course, I'm just saying." Naruto said with a light chuckle to her.
"alright I'm done see you later Chiho Chan." Uzume said to her while kissing her cheek lightly
"so are you ready Naruto kun. I'm done." she said before she opened the door to her room.
"yes Uzume Chan I'm ready." Naruto said
"well what do you think Naruto kun?" she asked as she opened the door showing Naruto what she looked like.
"well I think that you would have to have fallen from the heavens as there is no way you are from the mortal world with the beautiful elegance that you radiate." Naruto said making her blush at his words as he looked at her black kimono with orange foxes on it at random places, the foxes looked like they had white cloth scarves around their necks, and her hair framing her face before going down her back and the cloth that she had that floated like a deity's cloth (not sure how to explain it but its like the cloth that some Japanese gods have that floats around their arms and above them), all in all it made her look to him like an angel or a goddess.
"thank you Naruto kun you look very good as well." she said looking at him as he wore a kimono that had several different kinds of mythical creatures on it on different spots and colors.
"thank you as well. Now should we be going tenshi?" he said offering her his arm, as she blushed at being called and angel.
"why yes lets go." she said taking his arm and letting him lead her out.
Naruto asked her several thing and answered several things for her while they ate. When they finished eating they decided to take a walk in a different park then he did yesterday as this one had a playground in it as well having several small children in it like the one yesterday."why don't we take a little break Uzume Chan?" Naruto suggested.
"yeah that would be nice Naruto kun." she said in reply before some of the kids noticed the lady that looked like a goddess siting with the guy from yesterday as there were some from the park yesterday here to day as well as new ones.
"excuse me miss but are you an angel or a goddess?" they heard a small voice call from in front of them. Looking down they saw that a small girl around the age of five had asked Uzume that. Picking her up Naruto put her in his lap so that she could be seen and heard better making her giggle at the nice male that was with the lady in her opinion.
" I'm sorry but I'm not either of those. But I do have a special ability that lets me do many things with this cloth that I have do you want to see? By the way whats your name little girl?" Uzume asked her.
"oh my name is Azumi inuzuka and please miss." the now named Azumi said to her.
"very well Azumi Chan and my name is Uzume Hidaka and the good looking male that has you on his lap is Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze." Uzume said be before she started to make different shapes for the girl. Azumi giggled as Uzume made a dragon then a small dog that ran around the little girl chasing a small cat that made her giggle more after making some more creatures she stopped as the girls aunt came to pick her up.
"hey brat how you doing and wheres your wife?" the lady asked
"oh hey tsume san I'm fine and my wife is at the house. We were playing with Azumi here when she came up and asked Uzume Chan here a question." Naruto said to her.
"thanks for keeping her safe her mother was called to work at the vet office that our clan runs so she asked if I could come get her soon. When I got here I saw that you were playing with her so I came over. Sorry but its time to go Azumi Chan." tsume said to the girl.
"aw but I wanna play with the pretty girl and her boyfriend some more."she said to her aunt.
"how about this Azumi Chan when ever you want that we aren't on missions you can come over to play with us and my other friends okay?" Naruto asked her.
"yeah thanks Naruto niisan." she said happily while jumping up from his lap giving him a hug. "I'll come see you and Uzume neechan some times." she said while Uzume gave her a hug then lifted her with the cloth making her giggle at the material.
"see you two later then."tsume said to them.
"well that was fun don't you think so Uzume Chan?" Naruto asked as they watched them walk away
"yeah it was Naruto kun."
"lets go its getting late out." Naruto said while offering his arm again.
"yes it is lets go then Naruto kun." she said taking his arm.
When they got to the house they walked in and up to her room. "thanks for the great time Naruto kun."
"its no problem Uzume Chan. How do you feel about going out again at a later date?"
"I'd love to but I should tell you something. You see I am a se.." she started before she was cut off by Naruto.
"i know your a sekirei. I guessed after the fact that you were a little hesitant to go out with me and I don't mind as long as you are happy I could care less, I'm guessing that Chiho is your ashikabi as you looked at her as if asking her if she would mind." Naruto said with a smile
"yes your right. Why are you not mad at me for this?"
"well if I was mad at you for this than I would be a jerk and I don't like being a jerk and I actually like you for you. Who cares if your a sekirei it doesn't have anything to do with you and me being together, I want to be with Uzume the person not Uzume the sekirei understand Uzume Chan?" Naruto said softly cupping her cheek with his hand near the end.
"yeah I do thanks Naruto kun." she said putting her hand on his with her fingers under his thumb as he rubbed it on them gently.
"then may I kiss you Uzume Chan I know I should not be able to wing you as you are Chiho's sekirei but would you mind if I kiss you all the same?" Naruto asked making her blush at his soft and gentle voice and touch as he continued to rub and caress her fingers under his thumb.
"not at all Naru kun." she breathed out in an airy voice as she leaned toward him.
"thank you then." he said with an airy voice as he was inches from her mouth. When the two kissed Uzume wrapped her arm that wasn't being held to her cheek around his back and put her hand against his shoulder while he crossed his arm around her back placing his hand on her shoulder-blade to deepen the kiss tilting her head to the side to gain more access to his mouth as he did the same. When the broke the kiss they noticed that she had a strange thing happen. It appeared that her wings came out. As they noticed this they tried to come up with an answer that was logical. All that they could think of was the fact that yesterday when Naruto kissed Chiho he somehow gained the ability to awaken the power of her sekirei if he kissed her. After they came to that as the only good reason Naruto kissed her lightly on the lips again after saying "this is your goodnight kiss my tenshi." making her shiver at the touch wanting more but before she could get more he pulled back letting her go so she could go to sleep.
"then goodnight my mortal god." Uzume said still in a slight daze from her unexpected winging from another person then Chiho.
As Naruto got into bed with Tsukiumi he said "well that was unexpected."
"hmm?" she said as she was partially up waiting for him again as she found that it was easier to sleep with him them by herself.
"well I somehow managed to wing Uzume even though she was winged by Chiho before me. When we kissed her wings formed behind her." he said making her eyes widen slightly as she took in this information.
"but that shouldn't be possible." she said to him.
"i know tat what is confusing but I think that when I kissed Chiho I somehow copied her the DNA in her saliva and added it to my own so that I could release the power held in Uzume Chan." Naruto said while he pulled her closer to him.
"that would make sense."she said as she turned around to face him before getting pulled onto his chest as he rolled onto his back.
"yeah but I think your wings are more beautiful then hers my mizu no megami." he said leaning his head up to hers stopping before he touched her lips with his.
"oh and what does that name mean and why? Hmm Naru kun." she said
"well you are my water goddess and its because the wings that you have symbolize our love for each other while hers are her love for Chiho and maybe me in the future as I will not force her to be with me. You know that I will allow her to stop whenever she likes to." he said as he started to caress her right cheek making her blush at both his words and soft touch.
"yes I know my love." she said as he pulled her down while still caressing her cheek making the connection between their lips and pulling out her wings in what had become their nightly activity before they slept as he kissed her passionately making her moan and press herself further into him.
-end-
as he finished this memory he found that they were already on the shore and were nearing the house that held the team from konoha that they were sent to back up. Knocking they were greeted by a beautiful, by normal standards, woman that appeared to be in her late twenty's "hello how may I help you?" she asked.
"we are the team that Kakashi sent for as back up. May we come in?" Naruto asked her.
"of course come in come in." she said as she stepped to the side to let them in.
I put the links to the Chiho's and Uzume's clothes for their date on my profile so that you can see tell better what they look like for the date and please tell me what you would consider the rating for this story and my others as. I think they are all around t as I make the fights humorous and there are no suggestive themes if you don't count the kissing like I do. Please review and tell me who out of the Naruto world should be with him but remember no konoha girls I am fine with shizune as she hasn't been in konoha for all of Naruto's life so she has no real animosity here for her. The ones that have been their all their lives and Naruto's are the ones that I a against In this story. Personally I have no problem with most of them its just that this story is that he finds love outside the walls of konoha with the exception of the sekirei and Chiho.