A MESSAGE FROM THE AUTHOR: Wow! The reviews are really pilling up! Im gona take one post to answer some questions Ive gotten and chapter five will really be four. Sorry fore those of you whose hopes I got up! I apologies.

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AncientTide posted that there are some spelling and grammar mistakes and that I could make my writing more "Deep".

Response I PMed AncientTide and said that I would try and deepen my writing but I can not do much about the spelling and grammar as I am actually dyslexic and spell check only goes so far. Then it was suggested that I get a beta reader. I am working on this.

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dogbiscuit1967 posted a lot of praise!

Response Thanks but please try and leave out the details of the story from your reviews. I would like people to find that stuff out for them selves. That being said I love the comments so if any one wants to tell me what they think of my chapters that might contain spoilers please PM me.

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An anonimus guest has posted that he/she thinks they found a plot hole at the bace of my story.

Response Sorry bud but I covered that manhole in chapter 1. It takes some reading between the lines but it is there. When Annabeth tells Percy the blindness is permanent she says that the nectar healed his eyes but couldn't restore the vision. You see I noticed that in all the Percy Jackson stories the meds or miracle cures are ether affecting a curent problem or a curse. Percy's vision in this story is neither.

Ex: When Bob fixes Annabeth's blindness in House of Hades. He was removing a curse not fixing her eyes. Her eyes were fin but the curse clouded her vision to the point of blackness. There was no damage done to her retinas.

Another Ex: In The last Olympian when Annabeth is dying from the dagger poison wound. The nectar saved her by removing the poison and heeling the internal damage it caused. I am shore this left scars on her inner organs.

Percy's eyes in the story were extremely damaged by the hot chunk of mettle. The nectar healed the eyes to stop any further blood loss but optical nerves cannot be re-grown and put into use. Even if they were to be re grown they wold not be intone with the rest of the nerves-system. Back to the magic healing side. He nectar as well as any other form of magical healing in this story can seal the wound and or remove any curse or poison in the person but to have it re-grow body parts has never been addressed in the series so it is not unreasonable to assume that it can not be done. That being said re-growing enough optic nerves to make a blind man see is like re-growing your hole arm. It just can't be done.

I hope this fills in some of your questions about the base plot of this story and I will take your advice to heart. From now on I will try and be more strait forward with my plot drivers rather than leave it to inference.