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This is my first story, so don't expect a lot.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: I didn't give up on the story! No worries! Sorry for the delay, the hurricane Irene destroyed my internet and then my power. My neighbor has a tree on their house. Luckily it wasn't that big, else it'd crush the house. Right now I have no internet 8/30/11. Who knows when I'll have internet.
Reviews:
AlphaShenron: I'm actually using my own power level system (I said that in chapter 2). Super saiyans transformations are going to be the same. I'm not using whole number multipliers for Kaioken because it'll practically kill everyone. And if they use Kaioken and super saiyan while battling the androids or something, they could destroy the androids in one kick. In my power level system Kaioken 2x is 1.2x. 3x would be 1.3 and so on. Oh and I'm not following every single thing to DBZ.
Jason9000: Thanks! I'm hoping to make them this long for every chapter. Some chapters may be shorter. It won't be one saga per chapter by the way. The saiyan saga was just to show a bit of Gohans power, that's why it was so short.
Pink Sparkles: Thanks again! Don't worry, Gohan's power will have a big impact.
ChessMasterDBZ: Yup!
CrazyJr: Congrats on getting it correct! Standing outside at my house was relaxing though. The wind was awesome.
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Chapter 4: Namek
READ THIS: If there are errors please tell me. I have to go fishing in one hour and have to prepare, so I didn't look over. I wanted to update since I haven't in a week or so. Bye, wish me luck in catching fishes. I hope I get more than my brother.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Kami's ship
Bulma stared out of the window while Gohan and Krillin sparred in the Gravity Room. The gravity was at 10x and Gohan punched and kicked wildly while Krillin blocked them. Krillin jumped back and power up to gain an advantage. Krillin jumped out of the way and punched Gohan in the stomach. Gohan walked back a bit clutching his stomach.
"I guess warm ups are over," said Gohan with a smirk.
"What? Warm ups? So I was right," said Krillin glumly.
Gohan leaped at Krillin and kicked him to the wall. Krillin got up and smiled.
"It seems you've gotten a lot stronger than me," said Krillin.
"Well yeah, I guess," said Gohan.
"Let's get used to 20 times gravity," said Krillin.
"Sure!" said Gohan.
Krillin set the gravity to 20x and then fell down.
Gohan laughed when Krillin fell down. Krillin put his hand on the floor and pushed his way up.
"Wow.. This.. Is really.. Hard," said Krillin while pushing himself up.
"It's actually not that hard," said Gohan. "You'll get used to it."
"You mean its.. Not affecting you?" asked Krillin.
"It is enough that I can feel the difference, but I can still walk and jump," said Gohan. "This should slow me down a bit."
Gohan changed his weights to 500 pounds each and then jumped up and leaped at Krillin.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Goku's worst nightmare (the hospital)
Goku lay in bed looking very glum. The door opened and the doctor came in.
"Goku, it is time to change your bandages," said the doctor.
"NO! PLEASE NOOOOOO! AAAAHHHHHHH! PLEASSEEE NO!" screamed Goku.
"What's wrong with him? We're only changing bandages," thought the Doctor.
Yajirobe came in from the window and said, "Hey Goku, here's some senzu beans."
"AAAHHH-! Huh? Thank Kami!" said Goku as he took one and crunched it.
"Hey! No unauthorized food!" said the Doctor.
His eyes fell of out their sockets when Goku took the bandages off and jumped out of the window. Chichi came in from the door and went to the window.
"Goku! Come back! You just recovered and you're going on to another adventure!" shouted Chichi.
"Sorry, but I've got to get to Namek!" said Goku.
"What's Namek?" asked the doctor.
Goku flew off to Capsule Corp and went to Dr. Briefs. Dr. Briefs was sipping coffee when Goku came in.
"Hey, is the ship ready?" asked Goku.
"I still have to install the cappuccino machine. It shouldn't take longer than a week," replied Dr. Briefs.
"WHAT? A week? I can't wait that long!" said Goku. "I don't need a cappuccino machine!"
"Well, don't blame me if you're half way through your trip and then start missing your cappuccino. I'll show you the controls."
Dr. Briefs led Goku into the space ship and showed him the controls.
"Whatever you do, do not turn the gravity machine high, it could crush you into a pancake! The highest it can go is 100x."
Dr. Briefs stepped out and said, "Remember to not-"
Goku pressed the red button and the ship blasted off into space.
"-set the gravity too high!"
Dr. Briefs sighed and went into the building.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Vegeta's space pod
"Ugh… Just a little bit longer," muttered Vegeta.
An hour later, Vegeta's space pod flew into a planet and crushed onto a cushion like thing. Three aliens came out from a building nearby and went to Vegeta's space pod. The door to the space pod opened and Vegeta fell out.
"Where's Nappa?" said one of the aliens.
"What? He's using his life support systems!" said the another alien. "Quick! Let's get him to the treatment center."
Vegeta's ship blasted off into the space towards Namek at incredible speed.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Kami's ship
"Hey you guys, we're going to be at Namek in three days or so," said Bulma. "You might want to clean this stuff up."
"But all of this stuff is yours," said Krillin.
"Well I'm controlling the ship and you two have been doing nothing besides eating and training," said Bulma.
Krillin sighed and picked the trash with Gohan that Bulma had made. Bulma looked outside the spaceship window and stared into space.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Goku's spaceship
"Wow, 50 times gravity is really easy now," said Goku as he completed his 10,000th pushup.
"That means I'll have to go to 60 times," said Goku.
Goku ate a senzu bean and started doing 10,000 sit-ups.
"One…. Two….. Three…. Four…. Five," said Goku as he did a sit-up.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Otherworld
Yamcha, Tien, Chiaotzu, and Piccolo flew across Snakeway. They saw the end and looked around.
"Hey, where's King Kai's planet?" asked Yamcha.
"Up there!" said Chiaotzu.
They all jumped up to the small planet in the sky. Yamcha, Tien, and Chiaotzu felt the change in gravity when they landed. Piccolo didn't say anything when they landed.
"Woah, the gravity," said Tien.
A blue person came out when the four of them landed and looked at them.
"Is that King Kai?" asked Chiaotzu.
"Hm? Guests?" said King Kai.
"We came here for training," said Yamcha.
"Oooh, friends of Goku huh?" asked King Kai.
"Er.. Yeah," said Tien.
After several hours, they managed to get King Kai to laugh. Bubbles hopped up and down and Gregory zoomed around the planet.
"Your first task will be to catch that monkey," said King Kai.
"What? This will be a piece of cake," said Yamcha.
They all ran off after Bubbles. Bubbles ran around the planet and successfully dodged each and every one of their attempts. Piccolo disappeared and appeared in front of King Kai with Bubbles's tail in his hand.
"I came here for training, not fooling around," said Piccolo.
"Well then, you can hit Gregory with a hammer. You three will go catch Bubbles," said King Kai.
King Kai gave Piccolo a hammer and Gregory disappeared in a blur. He came back the other side and Piccolo threw a hammer at him.
"So? What's next," said Piccolo.
"Wow.. Uhh.. Well then I will teach you myself then," said King Kai.
Tien and Yamcha had caught Bubbles and Chiaotzu was now chasing him.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Wherever Vegeta is
"There's nothing I want more than to return to Earth," thought Vegeta. "Paying a little visit to Kakarot and his spawn. First to planet Namek."
"Well Vegeta, I heard you took a beating recently," said a purple alien named Cui. "And if the rumors are correct, you couldn't even beat a third class saiyan."
"Drop it, Cui," said Vegeta.
"The thing is, Frieza isn't too happy with you and your attitude," said Cui.
"Hahaha, just let him try to do something about it," said Vegeta. "Tell me where Frieza has run off too!"
Cui smirked and said, "The planet Namek."
"What! But how could he know? If I don't beat him to the dragon balls, I'll never be able to defeat him!" thought Vegeta.
Vegeta punched Cui in the stomach and ran off. Two aliens were talking when Vegeta took his scouter from them and ran off. Vegeta went outside and jumped straight into a space ship and blasted off into the sky.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Kami's Spaceship
"Hey guys! Look!" said Bulma. "It's Namek!"
Krillin and Gohan ran to the window and saw a big and green planet.
"Wow! It's huge!" said Gohan.
"Yeah!" said Krillin.
The ship flew into the green orb and landed. Gohan and Krillin stepped out while Bulma was checking the gravity and oxygen.
"HEY! What if there was no oxygen!" screamed Bulma.
"Well we can breath fine," said Krillin.
They looked at the sky, the water, and the trees. Krillin walked over to Gohan and said, "Hey Gohan, how about we raise our weights to the maximum? It'll help conceal our power."
"Sure!" said Gohan.
Gohan put his hand on Krillin's clothes and the clothes glowed a bit and then stopped. Then he removed his hand from the clothes and put it on his clothes and did the same thing.
"How much did you raise it to?" asked Krillin. "It's kinda heavy."
"Hmm.. Around.. 200 pounds each," replied Gohan. "My weights are 300 each. Your's is 1 ton in total and mines 1.5 tons."
"Uhhh…. One.. Ton in all?" muttered Krillin.
"Hey you two, I just fixed the dragon radar to pick up the Namekian dragon balls, we should look for them as soon as possible."
"Wow! That's shiny!" said Bulma while looking at the sky.
Gohan and Krillin looked up and saw a small ball flying in the sky.
"Uh Bulma… I think that might be Vegeta," said Krillin.
"WHAT! VEGETA?" screamed Bulma.
"Don't worry, I should probably be a lot stronger than him," said Gohan.
"Alright then, let's go Gohan," said Krillin.
A blast from the sky came down and hit the ship. The ship blew up and a group of aliens flew down and surrounded them. One of them pressed a button on his scouter and said, "The short people are at 25, and the woman is at 8."
"THE SHIP! HOW ARE WE GOING TO GET BACK TO EARTH Now!" screamed Bulma.
"Hah, you guys are coming with me to Lord Frieza. You have no chance of-"
Gohan moved in front of him and punched him in the gut.
"But how! His power level is only 25!" said one.
Gohan and Krillin finished the rest of them and said, "Well I guess we just have to wait until daddy is here."
Bulma sighed and said, "Well I'm glad that someone's coming for us."
Gohan and Krillin blasted off into the sky with the dragon radar in their hands. Bulma looked up and screamed, "WAIT! DON'T LEAVE ME!"
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Wherever Frieza is
"Lord Frieza," said a pink alien. "Vegeta is on this planet."
"I know," said a lizard like alien. "there's no need to worry. I am a million times stronger than Vegeta, and you know that. No matter how strong he'd get, he would never be able to best me."
Dodoria's scouter blew up when he checked Vegeta's power level. Zarbon said, "It's just an old model."
"Impossible! It was at 24,000 before it blew up!" said Dodoria.
"What? That's impossible!" said Zarbon.
"What are you worrying about? You know I'm a lot stronger than that," said Frieza. "Why don't you go kill him Dodoria? There are three things I hate: one is monkeys, two is boasting, and three is black hair. Vegeta has all three so I HATE HIM! GO KILL HIM DODORIA!"
"Yes Lord Frieza," said Dodoria.
Dodoria blasted off into the sky towards Vegeta. Gohan and Krillin landed near a cliff near Frieza moments later.
"Huh? Was that some giant fly? Oh well," said Dodoria.
"Hey Gohan, the small lizard must be this Frieza, his power level is huge!" whispered Krillin.
"Let's just stay and watch," said Gohan.
Frieza blasted a namek and said, "So are you going to tell me where the dragon balls are?"
"We would never give them to someone like you!" said one of them.
"Very well," said Frieza. "Zarbon, tell me what they are up against."
Zarbon disappeared and appeared behind one of them and blasted him.
"You monster!" said the eldest Namek.
"So, planning to give me it?" asked Frieza. "The children will suffer, you know."
The eldest namek went inside to get the dragon ball while a small green alien tried to run away when Frieza shot a ki beam through his head. He came out and saw the child dead.
"You monster!" he shouted.
Frieza was about to blast him when 3 warriors flew in.
"Oh?" said Frieza.
The four of them blasted all of their scouters, only to be killed by Frieza.
"You, call the Ginyu force. Tell him to bring the latest scouter and come here at once," said Frieza.
"Yes, Lord Frieza," he said.
"Now let's have some fun," said Frieza.
A small child cowered in fear while Frieza advanced on him.
"He killed them all!" said Gohan with clenched fists.
"Gohan, stay calm!" said Krillin.
"Krillin, you grab the child!" said Gohan.
Flames erupted around Gohan and he charged at Frieza and punched him in the back. Krillin grabbed the child and left with Gohan. Frieza turned around and looked at his back.
"What was that? I guess someone decided to use an iron on me. Oh well, to be honest, that felt really good. Time to kill the-"
"The child is gone," said Frieza with a blank face.
Dragon Ball AU: The Elemental Saiyans
Wherever Vegeta is
Dodoria flew down and landed near Vegeta. "Vegeta! Why don't you hand that pretty scouter over? I won't kill you if you do!"
"Hah, there's a bit of a problem though," said Vegeta.
"There is? What is it?" asked Dodoria.
"IT'S BROKEN!" said Vegeta as he crushed it.
"Now you're blind as the rest of us!" said Dodoria.
"Oh no no no, I happened to pick a trick up from Earth, I can sense power levels!" said Vegeta with a grin.
"So you're working with them?" said Dodoria.
"Oh no, just working on my own accord. Now you die!" said Vegeta.
Dodoria charged at him and punched him in the face. Vegeta caught the fist before it made contact.
"Impossible!" said Dodoria.
Vegeta punched his chest and sent him flying. Dodoria got up and blasted a barrage of ki blasts at him.
"Not even you were able-"
"I was able to what?" said Vegeta from the smoke.
"What! Impossible! How did you get so strong!" said Dodoria.
"Well, Saiyans tend to get stronger after healing from a near death situation. Now say bye!" said Vegeta.
"Wait! I'll tell you a secret!" said Dodoria.
"And that is?" asked Vegeta.
"Frieza was the one that destroyed your planet! It wasn't a meteor!" said Dodoria.
"I already knew that," said Vegeta with a grin.
"But how!" said Dodoria.
"I should've told him not to put that message on Spacebook," said Vegeta. "Nappa and Raditz had a Spacebook but they got blocked because they were weak."
"What!" said Dodoria.
"Ha! You're no match for me! I would love to kill you, but I am running short on time," said Vegeta.
Vegeta blasted off into the sky and headed towards a village.
Dodoria blasted off back to Frieza.
Sorry for not updating. I had to get stuff for school and yeah. Grats crazyjr for guessing the correct one. I don't know when I'll have chapter 5 up, maybe few days. I'm going fishing in an hour.
POWER LEVELS
Goku
-Weights Max Healed - 16954
-Weights Max 64770 (Gravity training + senzu heal and some of those needles)
Gohan
-Weights Max 49892
Krillin
-Weights Max 18000
Vegeta
-Max 24000