Cookie0monsta: Ok! Here's where the next person comes in!
Sasuke: Wait you mean that you're leaving us off with that cliffy ending!?
Cookie0monsta: Yep!
Sasuke: No fair!
Sakura: Ya!
Naruto: So did we get to look in the bag or not?
Cookie0monsta: Didn't you read chapter 3 at all!?
Naruto: …
Cookie0monsta: Sakura…
Sakura: I know, I know *punches Naruto on the head*
Cookie0monsta: Go ahead Neji
Neji: Cookie0monsta doesn't own Naruto.
Cookie0monsta: By the way Jenna talks aloud to herself while Jessica is more of the silent talk in your head kind, just so you know. And seriously, what Naruto story is complete without another voice in your head. Tell me that. Now I'm going to babble cause I want to take up a page with my Authors note cause I'm evil like that and I want this to end as a cliffy so yea. But seriously read the rest of this because there's some important stuff down der V. Bear with meh. Etoo lets see what's on the news of my life. Well here's a moody piece, One of my cats has gone missing L So could you please pray that we find him? His name is Quartz and he's an inside cat. Ummm another thing is that my grandma is having by-pass surgery because three of her valves are blocked. Uhhm. Oh! I'm sooo sorry that I haven't updated lately!! Here are my reasons why; writers block, missing cat, sick grandma, stressed parents, a nagging mother saying something about me being on the computer too much and needing to get some "fresh air". Errg I'm sooo close to this being a page long XD. Ok you can stop reading this if you want….. I SAID STOP! Geez cant you read!? I mean not read this… anyways that was my pitiful attempt at being funny and I think it failed… epicly. So how's life treating ya? I'm sorry if my chapters seem short ^_^" I'm not really an idea person… more of a "give me an idea and I'm work off of that" person. Catch my drift? Ok here's a question for you. What is your favorite anime. Here's another question, Which anime's have you either cried about the ending or at some point in the anime and why? Does that make any sense? I think it does. Here's my list of cried at/in/because of something animes: Chrono Crusade (I bawled), Full moon wo Sagashite (First one I think.), Scrapped Princess (Tissues were needed.), Princess Tutu (Awww!), Gakuen Alice, Naruto, Ouran (maybe?), Macross Frontier, Full Metal Alchemist (*sniff*), Wolf's Rain, Zero no Tsukaima (so sad!!), Pretear (so sad but cute!), H2O Footprints in the Sand (Kawaii but sad!!). Lol I know I'm a softie!! Oh I tried something new with my writing this time! Tell me what you think! Anyways my page is now done so see ya next chapter!
Please R&R!!
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Uhh since we're starting with a new person now you cant really review anything so I'm going to skip this part XD
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Stepping into Their World
Chapter four: Vortex of Doom
JESSICA
"AhHhHhHhHhHhHhH!!! I'm going to be laaaaaaaate!!" I rush down the starts… I take that back I trip down the stair and out the door to the car, "MOOOOOM!"
My mom walks out the front door calmly, "I'm coming I'm coming so stop yelling Jessica." She sighs as she slides into the drives seat and guns the vans engine.
My foot taps nervously as we drive, "Can you hurry? I'm already five minutes late."
"Don't rush me!"
I roll my eyes and turn to stare out my window instead. The tree blur together as I think of my favorite manga and anime, Naruto. Ahh I cant believe Kakashi dies. This sucks I mean all my favorite characters always die on me! So not fair!
".. I'll pick you up at 8:00 and you can study and finish your homework when we get back home."
Tuning back in I nod absentmindedly as I rush out of the van. I wonder if Jenna will be on I.M. tonight… I take that back she's always on… is it just me or am I emphasizing the word always a lot…? Oh well.
I burst through the front door and slow my pace as I enter the dojo. I bow deeply, "Sorry I'm late!"
"Hmm. Don't be late again, as for punishment I want 15 laps around the dojo and then 20 good push-ups." One of my sensei's barks the orders and I flinch inwardly, Damn.
~Two hours later~
Huffing I sit down against the wall chugging my water. The brewing storm outside catches my attention and I smile, I love a good thunder storm.. Hmm wonder if there'll be lightning too..
Checking my watch I frown, She's usually not late… Oh well maybe it's the storm. I glance out the window my head was leaning against and see a huge lightning blot light up the entire sky, That was awesome!! I grin happily and continue to watch the storm.
Gawd when is she going to come I mean the only people left are me, this dork Josh from my school, and a few instructors. The power flickers momentarily and my grin spread even wider, Sweeeeet, I love the dark!!
I sigh and close my eyes for a few moments loving the sound the of the deafening thunder. With another loud crack the power goes off and... doesn't come back on, Now this is what I'm talking about! I stand up to stretch my legs and notice something strange.
A glowing light coming from under one of the "Forbidden Doors". No it's not really forbidden we just don't go in there cause it's locked all the time and the sensei's are the only ones who have a key. Who are you talking to? Uhhh myself obviously. I'm afraid to know what your mental stability is. -_- Meanie.
I furrow my eyebrows at my inner battle but continue on my merry way towards the Door of Doom. Yes it has a nickname now. Anyways… as I stand in front of the door I look at the mesmerizing blue light that filters from under the door. Pretty.
A sharp pain runs through my head and I reel backwards with a low gasp. Ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow OW. That's one way to put it. Oh shut-up! Shaking off the lingering pain I walk back towards the door and stop just short of it. Swallowing I reach out a semi-trembling hand and grasp the doorknob which is cold to the touch.
Here goes nothing! I swing open the door and come face to face with…. nothing… Isn't this scene supposed to be.. I dunno… dramatic!? I let out a frustrated sigh and walk towards the glowing source of light. As I near it turns out that this object is a… disco ball… painted blue… Nice.
I step towards it not noticing that there was a gaping hole in front of me. Wait there's a what in front of me!? My eyes shoot down and see the hole just a little bit too late. Ya think? Zip it. Fine fine sooooorry. I let out a shriek of terror as I fall down into the dark, but swirling with colors, abyss. I deem this hole the Vortex of Doom. Cue dramatic music.-_-"
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Just to remind you, R&R!! Oh and sorry it's short, if you didn't read my above author's note then go read it! Besides I wanted to end it with a cliffy to keep you guys waiting XD.