Hello all!!!! I'm really sorry about that cliffy!! The original plan was that I was going to update right after, but I had to type it first! Then my dear mother found out that I was still up, so I wasn't able to finish!!! This was originally one chapter… but someone suggested that I should be mean and split it up. So I give you…

PART TWO!!!!

Disclaimer: sorry don't own it!!!

Previously…

"I love you too Edward."

Then I felt a sharp pain on the side of my neck…

Chapter 4:

Changes

It lingered for a moment, and then disappeared. But then I felt a new pain. It was like fire. Burning fire.

The other pain was back though, this time on my wrist. I opened my eyes to see Edward's face against it. There was a bit of blood leaking out of his mouth. I felt him suck a bit of it, and I let out a blood-curdling shriek. Ha looked up, mortified at what he'd done.

I closed my eyes, still screaming in all of the new pain. Then I felt myself being lowered into something and all of a sudden, some of the pain subsided. Wow. The ice water cut out a considerable amount of the pain, but it was still the most unbearable thing I'd ever experienced. This was going to be a long three days.

My last words to Edward were "I love you." I would have heard his response, but then all the world was silent. Except the pain. The pain was still there, but the world was black. In the distance, I could feel Edwards's hands cradling my head, while the knives were stabbing at my spine. Like I said, a very long three days.

EPOV

As I sat holding my angels head, I couldn't help but think that my worst fears were true. My Bella. My beautiful, compassionate Bella, was soon going to be a monster like me. Of course, she would never be a monster in my eyes, but I fear that she will think differently. As her screams echoed in my head, as I cradled her shaking, fragile form, I felt utterly and completely responsible for the pain and terror she was now going though. I couldn't wait for this to end.

--2 days later--

EPOV

Around 4 o'clock this morning, she had stopped screaming. Carlisle said that this was the worst part because she was getting all her heightened senses, so that made the pain intensify greatly.

We've had to change the ice water many times. Well, not we because I haven't stopped touching Bella yet. Not even when she was fighting and punching the invisible monster that was trying to swallow her body up.

Jasper'd had to leave the room because the emotional and psychological pain was so great; it had started to affect him. He had to go about three miles away before it was close to nonexistent. Everyone else, Carlisle, Esme, Alice, Emmett, and even Rosalie had all stayed in the bathroom with Bella and I. I have not spent a minute not touching her; not a second not trying to comfort her, or look at her beautifully changing face, even though her expression held much pain at the moment. It was truly remarkable what could happen over the course of two days.

But she still had one more day to go. Oh please God, please, let this end soon.

--1 day later--

EPOV

It's about 7:00, so Bella only has about an hour to go. In this last day, her body has undergone some huge changes.

I noticed that she got about an inch taller, and her hair, the part that isn't wet anymore, was very shiny. Her lips got fuller and she obviously got much paler. And colder. It was now like touching any other vampire. I could tell that she was not so breakable, she felt much stronger to me. I knew that I would never have to worry about crushing her ever again.

Since she has only an hour left in the transformation, all of her pain is gone, only an ache remains. Her body is just rebooting itself. So Esme, Alice, and I decided we should take Bella out of the water and change her into the nightgown and bathrobe Alice bought. Esme and Alice went and got her towels and clothes while I picked her up and carried her over to the bed.

Esme spread out some towels over the sheets so that when we were done drying her off, the sheets would still be dry too. Alice then took off her sopping wet bathing suit and, together, her and Esme dried her off with the fluffy, white towels, and put the nightgown on her. I set a towel on top of the pillow so she would be comfortable. I then took the bathrobe and put her arms though the holes. I tied the tie of the bathrobe around the tiny, beautiful waist. We then put the covers over her and waited for her to awake.

I kissed her forehead and snatched a chair from the 'waiting room'. Putting it by Bella's bed, I held her hand and waited for her to open her eyes.

BPOV

I suddenly felt as if my head was floating back to my body. I was certainly awake, but I wasn't ready to pry open my eyelids just yet. Just because my body has now decided to become functional doesn't mean that my mind has agreed. My thoughts were all over the place.

The first thing in my brain was ow. Ow, ouch. AHH, ugh, make it any abbreviation you want. The point is... I hurt. Now, it was more of an ache coming from all the work my muscles has been doing.

Then I remembered Edward. Well, not remembered really, because he had been on my mind the whole time. I knew that he had been with me the whole time, soothing me, and trying to make me feel better. I kept trying to answer him, but all my throat let me do was scream. I also knew that he is probably waiting at my side with baited breath. But I needed a second to organize my thoughts.

My senses were so raw and new. I could smell the faint hint of perfume from whom I assumed was Alice or Esme. I could hear the small sound of the drip of the water as the tub drained out the final contents. I could also feel the passing of time… it seemed longer now. Then I felt the burning in the back of my throat and realized what I wanted… or what I needed.

Blood.

It was time to open my eyes.

Well, that was what should have been the end of the chapter before this one. I hoped you liked the part in EPOV. It's kinda harder to write in Edward's point of view because he's all wise and old and mature… things that I'm defiantly not.

But I do have a MAYJOR problem!!!!!

The next chapter is where Bella finds out her power… but I haven't figured out what that will be. I REALLY NEED YOUR HELP WITH THIS!!!! Any suggestion would be great!!!! Because no power… no new chapter. (

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Luv, - topazeyes44