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Chapter 4

Cycle Ten: Bonfire's POV

Excruciating pain.

Filling my body.

I dont remember who I am, or why I came here. Only one thought occurs to me.

"Obey Unicron."

I realize I will die, here and now. The strain is to much for my servos. I feel as if the whole Cybertron is falling on me.

And then, out of nowhere, the planet explodes.

And i'm suddenly flying through the air, not even knowing whats going on, when I realize the planet hasn't exploded, something hit us. Hard enough to the point where Unicron lost his grip on me.

I fall back down, into what used to be the cave of trash. Now, its a sinkhole. I can see the orange sky above me. Far, but I see it.

Then I realize somethings wrong.

My whole left side has been distorted. I cant move it. Whatever Unicron was doing wasn't finished, and it's resulted in half of me twisted and burned.

I frantically try to think of a way to escape. Transform? No good. I'd probably melt. Run? I cant even move.

I hear his voice, this time louder than before. He's very, very angry. That thing must have hit him or something.

I only have one option. Wait until the smoke clears.

And there, before my unbelieving eyes, stands Ace, sword in hand, glaring at Unicron's twisted face.

And then I black out.

Cycle Eleven: Bonfire's POV

When I wake up I know Ace lost the fight. Mainly for two reasons.

1. I don't feel any better.

2. He's dangling in mid air, with a glowing red light surrounding him.

I still feel queasy from being knocked out, so I just lie there, until I realize I can move again.

Its painful, but possible.

"Yes. The other would have been better, but you are just as worthy." I hear Unicron say.

His voice is raspy and cold. Unforgiving.

I try not to let it distract me as I search around for Ace's dislodges sword.

"First, i'm going to kill you for pleasure. Then I will reanimate you, then turn you into my eternal slave." He growls at Ace.

I crawl on the floor, trying not to be seen. Luckily, Unicron seems to only have one working eye.

Eventually I find Ace's sword. But its split in half. So I lodge its piece into the parts of my arm that connect to my hands. This way I can just slide them out, and maybe this monster won't notice i'm armed.

But I should have remembered Unicron wanted me.

He let his mental grip go of Ace, and grabbed hold of me. And this time, I began to Transform. Over and over again.

Decepticon. Uprising. Megatronus Prime. Megatron. Darkmount. Ratbat. Deathsaurus. Kill.

These words flash through my head, and I realize what they mean.

I am a Decepticon.

I will regain my past leaders glory.

I will kill all who appose.

My body begins to morph. Sleeker. Faster. Deadlier.

The blades I put in my arms are melted onto me. They become glowing purple and tipped with Cosmic Rust. Fully operational, ready for battle.

A Purple insignia appears on my chest and shoulders. The Decepticon Insignia.

Unicron is putting all of this information into my head. I accept it.

And lastly, I am no longer Bonfire...

Then finally- I fall to the ground, Scorched and Smoking. I can feel power coursing through me.

Ace runs up to me, and says, "Bonfire- What happened..." I turn towards him. Hatred glows in my eyes.

"I'm no longer Bonfire." I say.

"Unicron is my master, and my name is Thrustfire."

Cycle Twelve: Thrustfire's POV

I am suddenly teleported to Cybertron.

The chain of events that just happen appear so clearly in my head.

"I wonder where Ace is," I think. "He is a traitor to the Decepticon cause," I say it out loud, to remind myself.

I don't know how I got here, or where I am on the planet.

But my orders are clear.

Recruit more Decepticons. Once my forces are big enough, take back what is rightfully ours.

Cybertron itself.