Thank you all for the reviews. After reading some of them I decided to make some minor changes to my plans of the story as a whole. Now for the Naruto characters I am limiting it to one rook, a knight, a bishop and possible a pawn.
For the rook spot we have Gain (fem Gaara), Tsunade, or Shizuka. Shizuka is my favorite here as Tsunade would most likely want Shizune and that would be way to many healers for a Phenex peerage.
For the bishop spot we have Karin or fem Haku but I am leaning towards Karin due to her sensor and healing abilities.
The knight position is the most contested due to having a lot of swordsmen options in fem Kimimaro, Satsuki, Samui or Tenten.
The pawn options include Shika or Naruko Satsuki could also go here if needed. Personally I don't like either option as Shika has the family and would be to lazy to want to leave and Naruto is a bit of a one trick pony in the first part of Naruto.
As for the dimension I'm changing the next one to Negi's as the queen I want is there and I didn't have many recruitment options from Yu Yu Hakusho.
Uchiha Compound minutes after the massacre
Satsuki Uchiha is lying on the ground dying due to a mystery man she saw attacking her clansmen along with her brother Itachi.
"so this is how I'm going to die before I even become a ninja. Heh."
Then all of the sudden she sees a huge column of black flames appear in the middle of the room. As it clears she see a Boy her age with blonde hair before she passes out.
With Hitori
"OK now where am I"
as he looks around he sees a lot of blood then his eyes land on a black haired girl laying down with a sword in her stomach and runs over to check on her.
"crap what happened here." as he checks her pulse he finds she is still alive but barely.
"Good thing I still have a few of the tears my mother gave me for emergencies as I don't want to use one of my evil pieces on a girl I don't know anything about."
He reaches into one of his pockets and pull out a small crystal vial and drops a few drops into the girls mouth and instantly her injuries start to heal.
"good she will live now but I better get out of here so they don't think I did this."
Just as hes leaving he hears a faint "thank you" from behind him.
As he turns around he sees the ghostly image of an older version of the girl he just saved.
"it was no problem mam but I have to get going" and with that he vanishes in another swirl of black flames
"he saw me! Hem maybe I can repay him a bit for saving my daughters life" and with that the ghostly figure floats after her daughters savior.
In the forests surrounding Konoha
"Just great my first few minutes in a new world and I walk into the middle of a massacre."
"what do you mean in a new world?" he hears the faint voice from before say.
Hitori jumps "Who's there?"
The figure from before comes into view "my name is Uchiha Mikoto the girl you saved earlier was my daughter Satsuki."
"I see. Do you have any idea why she was dying in the first place."
"sigh. Yes My idiot husband was trying to overthrow the village leaders so they sent my son to try and end the coup. He was supposed to spare my daughter and other son tho so I don't know what happened there. And you still haven't answered my question about the new world thing."
"Its a long story"
"I am dead I have nothing but time"
"fair enough" so he explains his full story to Mikoto
"O my poor baby." as she rushes to hug Hitori she flies right through him and hits a tree behind him.
Hitori starts laughing "that was hilarious"
"stop laughing at me!" She yells with a red face.
"Whew I needed that. OK so why didn't you move on like the rest of your clan then?"
"I don't know but if what you said is true about Amaterasu-sama raising you for the last year she might have had something to do with it so I could help you adjust to the new world better."
"I see that is the type of thing she would do she does tend to be a bit protective..." A tree catches fire when he said that "Um forget I said anything..."
Mikoto sweet drops 'who new Amaterasu-sama was the mother hen type'
"well getting back on track I see you used black flames back there so tomorrow I want you to go back to the compound and take my eyes."
"your eyes!"
"yes my eyes my clan has a special doujutsu that will help you learn the jutsu of this world better as well as help you control those black flames even better. And I don't need them anymore. I will also train you in how to use them properly as well as some other basics to help you fit in this world better."
"OK Mikoto-sensei"
"Sensei I like that. Well get some rest your tortu- I mean training begins tomorrow."
Hitori feels a shiver go down his spine but listens to his new Sensei and goes to sleep thinking that this is going to be a long few years.
Next chapter starts following the Manga so the chapter should be a bit longer.
Giving Hitori the Sharingan literally came out of nowhere but I'm liking the idea as it would help him be more versatile then just the fire and wind powers.
