Alright here is 3 more segments. Please review and tell me what you think….. BE HONEST! I will share them with my co-writer. We left off with…I think it was- Cammie saying oh Hi Zach
Spam-
OMG HI !!!!!!!!! opps... *time magically stops* *Spam looks around
then sees FranFran looking at her with dissapoint yet no surpris at
all*
FranFran- Spam!
Spam- sorry
FranFran- YOU DONT KNOW ZACH REMEMBER ?! What's ur problem ?! grrrrrrr
Spam- im sorry
*akward silence*
Spam- *in quiet voice* but i meanit is ZACH
FranFran- well....i guess i can forgive you and itis kind of cool to see him in person.
Spam- I know right?! can we celebrate?
FranFran- 5 seconds
Spam- yes *both start jumping up and down in a circle while holding hands and screaming YAY!*
FranFran- times up
Spam- so now what do we do?
FranFran- turn that dial on your watch/ laser till it reads .....um negative 00.02.49.
Spam- but how can it read a negative number? What did you do to my watch?
FranFran- i enhanced it with special powers. u should thank me
Spam- thanks, i guess. so like this *shows franFran watch*
FranFran- yeah and press that button in and it should take us to right about-*spam presses button*
FranFran- here
Voice that i wont let you know who it is- Hi cammie... and Bex, Liz, Macey. Aren't there more of you than there last was?
Cammie- Oh Hi Zach
*zach comes out of the shadows*
Cammie- why r u here?
Zach- I thought i might like to meet your new friends
Cammie- But how did you know they were here, they just arrived a few minutes ago? are you stalking me?
Zach- no
Cammie- then how did you know?
Zach- *points to himself* Spy
Cammie:
Zach.... come on!!!
Zach- Spy. *turns to FranFran* So, who are you
anyway?
FranFran-I'm....Sandi..... hi.
Zach-As you may have
guessed, I'm Zach. From another school. Spy. *extends
hand*
Franfran-*shakes hand* Yes, us too. In Germany.
You're....
Spam-*interrupts in mind* (by the way, the
means in head) Yo, Can i? i wanna freak him out!!
Franfran-
sure... whoa, this is sooo cool
Spam-You're from
Blackthorne? Right?
Zach-*speechless*
Spam-You know,
Blackthorne School for Boys?
Cammie-Yeah, how did you know?
Spam-
*points at herself* Spy. *Points at Franfran* Also Spy.
Bex-*high
fives Franfran* good one, i guess you are one of us!!
Zach-*looking
very blustered* um.... yeah.... so....
Liz-Too bad Zach!! I doubt
that these girls hit like girls!!!!!
Spam-*Rolls
eyes*
Franfran-well, except you!!!
Spam-
hey!!!!
Macey- *who has just returned from talking with
* what's going on?
Cammie-Oh, nothing
Zach-Well, I
guess I'll just go settle in....
Franfran-Yeah, you might want to
get away... we aren't letting up on you at all!!!!
Zach-I was
afraid of that...
Spam-See ya!!!
(Hey!!! Where'd he
spring from???)-Ladies... We are going to be joined by two other
schools for this semester. Blackthorne and....
Amelia- There's no
way this place can be as good as Timphani. Oh, hi. *laughs*
Cindy
(btw, these guys are from another school)- Well, what a warm welcome
you give us!
Cammie- *whispers* Them!
Spam-*turns to FranFran* omg since when was Timphani coming here?
FranFran- I guess they must have planned it recently. I wonder if-
Cammie- wait you know these people?
Spam- I guess you could say that
FranFran- In other words- we are these people, or were that is.
Macey- What?
Spam- Timphani is our old school. Our old SPY school
Amelia *who has been standing there with Cindy listening*- Wait r u-
Spam-
Leighah and Sandi? yes
Cindy- part of the infamous ELFS?
FranFran- yes
Bex- wait your infamous?
Spam- sort of
Cindy- YES!!!
FranFran- You wouldn't happen to know if Elisabeth *pronounced Elisa - beth* and Fawn are here would you?
Voice- turn around
Spam- Fawn! Elie!
Fawn*who is really LiLi and her codename is Fawn*- Leighah!
Elie*who is really Oboe and her code name is Elisabeth/Elisa/Elie*- Sandi
*All four run together in a group hug*
Bex- So you guys r spys no too?
LiLi- spys? what?
Bex- what. nobody says spys. we aren't spys. why in the world would you think that?
LiLi- I just kidding. yeah we're spys. i'm Fawn *shakes hands with Bex than Cammie, Macey, and Liz*
Oboe- And I'm Elisabeth but you can call me Elie *also shakes hands*
Voice
*who I wont let you know who it is but im pretty sure you can figure
it out*- Everytime i turn around there's more of you
Oboe- cut it
out Zach
Zach- *flustered* wait- h..how do you...
ELFS- *all 4 point to themselves and simotaniously say* Spys.
Yes that was totally awesome. If your confused about names here's a breakdown
Real names (that isn't really our real life names cause there are weird stalker people online. They are actually our real life nicknames)
Spam
FranFran
Oboe
LiLi
Those names will be used to say who is speaking
Our character names
Spam – Leighah (pronounced leah)
FranFran- Sandi (like sandy)
Oboe- Elisabeth –other wise known as Elisa or Elie (pronounced Elisa * NOT ELIZA* beth)
LiLi- Fawn (I always liked that name it Dawn with a F)
These are the names other characters will refer to us as. Together they make ELFS (Elie, Leighah, Fawn, Sandi) LiLi and Oboe are our friends in real life and our real life names also make ELFS.
If you have any questions feel free to put them in a review or PM me.
Thanks, Chameleon333
