Disclaimer: Star Wars is owned by Lucasfilm. If I did this would the next film series. I own my original characters: Mark Adeyn / Darth Mortis, Jon-Si Ofimor, R2-K7,Meg-Da Kolchi, Zach, Siri Lovsi and Darth Sicarius.
Note: I came up with this when I an older kid (10, 11 or 12 maybe...?) I don't know it was in my film director stage when i wanted to go to USC and make the next Star Wars. So I am kind of foggy on this since I'm going by drawing I made at the time. But, enough about my life story...
Chapter 4: The Trap
Mid-day; a few days later
Coruscant-Jedi Temple
Mark was walking down an empty long hallway in the Jedi Temple when his comlink went off. "Mark, I need your help! Go to the hangar and fly your airspeeder," Zach said. "Wait, where are you," he asked. "I'm in the Works in LiMerge building with Meg and Siri… Hurry," his friend shouted before being cut off. Mark ran off to the main hangar and jumped into his red and yellow colored Koro-1 Exodrive airspeeder.
When Mark reached the Works he headed straight for the LiMerge building. He landed in a room that looked like a hangar bay. He began to search for his friends. "Zach! Meg! Siri," he shouted. He ran into the next room shouting, "Where are you?" the door to the room slammed shut behind him.
The room was pitch black. A voice spoke, "So, you are Mark Adeyn." Mark ignited his lightsaber. "Who are you," he asked. "I am Darth Plagueis, Dark Lord of the Sith," the voice answered. "The Sith died out centuries ago," Mark protested. "Oh, no, we have been alive and well," the Sith Master said. "I have been watching you. Your skills are impressive, but it seems like your Master is holding you back," Darth Plagueis said. "No, my Master…," Mark began to say before being cut off by the Sith, "Your Master knows that you could already be a Jedi Knight, but he does not want you to become greater than him! He wants you in the place he believes you belong," the Muun Sith Lord argued. "NOOOOO," the Padawan shouted as he deactivated his lightsaber and fell to his knees. He looked up at the Sith and asked, "What do you want from me?" "Become my apprentice… and you will learn your full potential," he replied. "And if I refuse," Mark said. "Then everyone you have ever cared about or have ever come in contact with you will be killed by me," he continued, "Starting with your Master and friends." "Then I am yours to command, my Master," Mark replied. "Good, my first instruction is to toss away that Jedi tool and build a new weapon," he commanded. "Of course, my Master," the former Jedi said as he picked up his 'old' lightsaber and walked out of the room.
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