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but friends.. what is this.. itne kam reviews ... this is not fair na... you people were continuously demanding the duo story.. Ab aa gai... ab review to karo... meri dusri story k reviews jab bhi me open karti thi.. do teen reviews to aise hotey hi they har chap mein jo pure duo ki demand karte they.. to ab kia hua,,?
Anyways thanks to all jinho ne review kiya.. and to all the silent readers also..
Will meet u at the end of chappy
Now here we go
In a big building there is a hall where all employees are working because they are passing through very critical time. Their some collegues are busy in fulfilling a duty towards their nation and far from them. They are providing the logistic support to them.
One of the senior employee who was checking something on records called the other one.
vineet aik file tumhare pc pe bhej rahi hun.. us ko check karo zara...
yes mam..
after sending the file she stood up to drink water when her cell phone rang.
She recives the call with: senior inspector Asha...dehli headquarters...
hello Asha... me Freddy...
after listening freddys voice Asha said: arey freddy... tum ne number change kiya kia?
han wo bas...acha suno ..tum abhi free ho... aik baat karni hai...
asha sensed something serious so said : freddy me... tum se adhey ghantey baad ghar pohanch ke sakoon se baat karti hun...
Freddy said: asha... please zara jaldi...
han han.. ok... me karti hun..
call cut.
after half an hour Freddy was sitting silently in his lounge when he felt his cell vibrating inside his pocket. He took out and looked at the screen confusingly, because its his another number or we can say it a khancha sim number and not so many people have this number so...
He recive the call.
hello...
kia baat hai freddy.. tum kuch pareshan..sab theek hai na...
nahi Asha.. kuch theek nahi hai yahan...
kia hua hai.. batao to sahi...
humein tumhari help chahiye...
meri help..acha... saf saf batao kia baat hai...
Freddy explains the matter and ask: Asha tum please is barey mein koi madad..yahan pe sab bohat pareshan hain.. daya sir ne bhi har koshish kar k dekh li per...asha seriously.. muje un k liye bohat dar lag raha hai...
han us sentimental fool se to yehi umeed thi... acha tum pareshan mat ho... me kuch karti hun
han... please...
tum muje kal tak ka time do... me batati hun.. acha... me daya se khud baat kar lun gi...
thanks Asha...
call cut.
Freddy sighed: Ab shayad koi achi khabr aa jaye ...( his eyes caught the sight of team picture on the wall) sir ..jaldi se wapis...a jaiye... Me apni tang khichaii bahut miss kar raha hun
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at an unknown place man was lying on floor and four man surrounding him. they are chattting and laughing as if they just got free from an important task.
Suddenly the door opened with great sound and a man entered inside with two more armed man.
new entry said shambhu.. sab taiyyar hai na...
shambhu replied: haan bhai sari tayari ho gai hai... hai.. aap fikar mat karo...
or wo dusra parcel...?
haan bhai wo bhi aik dam ready hai bhai...
shabash mere sheron...
bhai... dhamaka kab karna hai...
aj raat teen baje...
theek hai bhai...
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Asha came out from the room and about to pick up her badge and gun when her cell phone beeped.
She checked and found the massage as"mam me ne aap ko kuch mail kiya hai... kindly check kar lije..."
getting the real meanings of this massge asha replied ok and moved out from her house
Reaching headquarters Asha came out from her car and moved inside. There she found an envelop she took out some papers and read them carefully it was a sales agreement of her small cottage .
She sent the paper to higher authorities for verification .. Because now its become a rule when any of the officer sell or purchase any property the one should inform about it to the autorities
she kept the papers back and masseged that "i have recieved your mail".
MUMBAI
A policeman was brutally murdered and CID is solving the case. They went to forensic lab for details.
Looking at the body vivek said: kitni berehmi se khoon kiya hai ..is ka.. lekin is ko bhi salam hai.. k is ne un logon ko kuch bhi bataya nahi...
Sarthak who was examining his belt ,sighed: han... in logon ka to kaam hi.. desh k liye larna or jaan dena.. ye to in ka farz... or roz ka..
Daya cut him rudely:what farz han... kia kehna kia chahty ho..ye koi bari baat nahi...kabhi in becharon ki families ka socha hai...un pe kia beet ti hai..farz...
Sarthak looked down : sorry sir...
Daya marched out from the lab.
Acp sir sighed and turned to Sarthak: wo daya aj kal... pareshan hai to..
Its ok sir...
DELHI
In evening after returning home, Asha took out the papers again and put them aside. Then tore the envelope in the way it look like a plain white sheet.
Then she turned on her microvave oven and after heating the paper on required temparature took it out.
Now some sketch is visible on it. she quickly drawn the sketch in dark lines. After some time she complete her work.
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Daya parked the quills and came out started walking toward the beech
He sat on rock at the farthest corner of beech which his buddy termed once as atmao ki jagah.. Because it is the most silent place.
Suddenly he remembered sarthak's words and at the same time fear started engulfing him
Desh ke liye Jan dena far...nahi..phir families ka kia... Abhi ki family ka.. Mera kia phir pehle desh ki slamti k liye... Abhi ne itni saari goliyan khaeein (suddenly he started thinking selfishly) akash agar gawahi dene se pehle hi inkaar kar deta to kia ho jata... Per Abhi ki WO halat...
He shivers remembering that time
He was checking some records when his cell phone rang he received the call with
Han Abhi bolo
But abhijeet can not hear him properly he said loudly
Daya... Meri awaz aa rahi hai tumhe
Han aa rahi tum bolo...
Dekh... Muje lagta hai in logon ko pata chal gaya hai...
Kia..
Han...tu meri baat dihaan se sun... Aik gari...
Then Daya listens firing sound
Hello... Abhijeet kahan Ho tum...
But he listens firing and car screaching sounds.
And suddenly the call cut.
He immediately ran to acp's cabin and entered inside without taking permission .
Sir abhijeet ki car pe attack hua hai...
Kia... Acp sir stood up from his place.
Han Sir me ne firing ki awaz suni oe wo keh raha tha shayad un logon ko pata chal gaya hai...
Acp sir said while moving outside .
Daya abhijeet ki car track karo foran...
They track car location and reached there.
And they saw
Abhijeet lying on roadside and his neck titled to a side
They ran to him and saw him stained with his own blood his face seems dry and lifeless .
Daya sat down And took his head in his lap. He looked at his face closely and a cold shiver ran through his spine
He called him
Abhi... Ankhein kholo please...
Shake him
Boss please ankhein kholo...
But no effect.
Daya placed his hand near Abhi ' s heart and shouted back at acp sir
Sir ..is ki dharkan Sir. Ye ankhein nahi khol raha sir... Please sir aap kahiye na isey..
Acp sir called
Abhijeet...
Abhujeet's body jerked badly
They immediately shifted him to hospital where doctor informed him that abhijeet had moved to coma.
One month have passed and in this one month daya felt himself all alone. he was handling the work presure very well.
Now he mostly avoid the free time because he know.. he know if he get free time he will become weak... he spent hs most of the time in beauru... only go home when he needs to sleep.. but his bad luck wather it was bauru or home his heart didnt get peace
He also didnt visit the hospital every day Because he cant tolerate that sleeping face any more
Its limit na... that the person who always busy in different tasks and snubbing him.. now sleeping silently since one month
That day when he was in beauru for a case and Acp sir with rajat went to court as today Akash was going to give his statement.
His cellphone rang its a call from hospital
He recives the cal : hello..
Sir abhijeet sir ko hosh a gaya aap log please hospital...
Daya grinned: Abhi ko hosh..me abhi abhi ata hun..
He disconnected the call and rushed out even without infrming anyone else and drove directly to hospital.
He entered nside and saw abhijeet leaning back with closed eyes. he was staring him and didnt notice that he is now sitting an smiling at him
He came out of trance with the voice: arey aisa kia deh raha hai... bhai me zinda hun...
Abhi...abhi tum...
han me...(abhijeet smiled)
daya shook his head in no.
Abey ye mundi kiun hila raha hai... acha.. phir se so jaun kia...
nahiii...(shouted)
Abhijeet looked at him. He started taking small steps towards him reaching close he sat beside his bed on floor and looked at him .
He kept looking at him until he ruffled his hairs with: kia hua?
Daya again shook his head .
Abhi : arey phir se mundi.. acha aa idhar ooper aa ke baith.
Daya slowly stood up and sat on bed. Abhijeet hold his hands. he was still all quiet .
Abhijeet irritated a bit : maun varat rakh liya kia sahab ne...
Daya didnt reply so Abhijeet continued : tu muje aise dekh raha hai... jese tu ne mujh se icecream mangi... or me tujhe wohi icecream kha kha ke chira raha hun...
Hearing this tease and leg pulling after a month daya's patience ended up and hugged abhijeet
Abhijeet was prepared for this so he just pat his back silently
when his sobs didnt stop Abhijeet called him softly : dayaa...
but daya started sobbing more
He rufled his hairs with : hat na... dekh muje dard ho raha...
daya immidiately separated from him.
abhi kahan... kahan dard ho raha... batao ..na... me doctor...
Abhijeet try to stop him: daya daya me...
but he was about to get up when abhijeet stopped him hold his shoulder: daya me theek hun...
daya looked at him with teary eyes.
he wipe his tears and said : dekh me theek hun... kuch nahi hua muje sach mein...
phir abhi jo tum ne kaha..
Haan wo to tujhe rota dekh dard ho raha tha..
daya in teasing tone: acha ...aik mahine se tum khud kia kar rahey they... kuch andaza hai...
Abhijeet try to spek daya didnt allow.
nahi tumhe kuch andaza hai... jab bhi me ghar jata tha,,.. gari mein baithta ..beauru mein beech pe sab jaga.. muje lagta tha tum aao ge abhi...
abhijeet was looking at him he was expecting some shout but the coldness in his voice told the whole story of a month.
isi liye me hospital bhi nahi aya zada..
Abhijeet manged to ask : kiun,...
Daya replied : kiun ke muje ghussa ata tha...tum pe...kese tum aram se so rahey they na...muje bhi dard hota tha... tumhe aram karte dekh kar meri to fikar thi nahi tumhe..duty jo karni thi senior inspector Abhijeet ko
Abhijeet smiled naughtily
Daya sighed: boss aj bhi ghussa aa raha hai manao na aa ke
He wiped his eyes harshly. His cell phone rang.
It was an unknown number so he composed himself and recive the call.
hello..
the caller : senior inspector Asha headquarters...
oh... Asha... kesi ho...or mera ye number tumhe...
Freddy se... batao...tum kese ho...:?
me theek...
silence .
Asha realize her words so said : acha daya aik cheez bhej rahi hun...
Kuch pata chala kia? Daya's voice automatically turned hopefull.
han...aik kaam ki baat pata chali hai...
kia.. Abhi ke barey mein .. wo kahan hai...kuch...
daya...dheeraj rakho... sab theek ho jaye ga.. dekho hum sab koshish kar rahey hain na,...
pata nahi Asha...wese to ye ghayeb hona ye kidnapping wagera.. sab duty ka hissa hai.. per is baar bahut dar lag raha hai...
Daya himmat rakho acha ab suno dhiyaan se, aik gang pe shak hai jis ne shayed ye kidnapping ki..sirf Abhijeet sir nahi STF k aik officer ki bhi per us officer ki lash mil chuki hai...
Asha..
Daya nahi..tum wesa kiun soch rahey ho..kuch nahi ho ga abhijeet sir ko..hmm.. Us gang ka jo leader hai ..us ki to koi info nahi humare pass per leader ka jo right hand hai Rajkumar us ka sketch or details bhej rahi hun tumhein, tumhare unofficial mail id pe ok? Dekh lo or us basis pe kaam shuru karo..
Thank u Asha thanks a lot me...
baki bad mein pehle sir mil jaaein phir..chalo ab strong bano daya.. Warna sir aa ke na piten ge tumhein
daya smiled.
After some encouraging lines asha ended the call.
Asha sighed i hope so.. ke sab kuch theek rahey... (then pick her cell) chalo vineet ko call kar ke bata dun..
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...
Daya downloaded the sketch sent by asha and delete the mail from his inbox. He glanced at the skech.
Suddenly he started feeling tiered. He glanced at the clock, it was showing 2:30 AM. He thrown himself back on sofa and closed his eyes, trying to sleep.
After about an hour his cell phone rang .
he immediately recieves the call.
Hello...
end of chappy
before saying anything more i want to ask u something me ne chappy k bilkul start mein aik word use kiya "logistic support"... kia ye word yahan theek hai..? ya koi or word aye ga..? kindly do my correction.
Now reviews k replies
CHAP 2
priya, Dips, Mistic Morning, priyaa.s, coolak, Guest, Guest, Guest, salmazhv, love duo nd purvi, 93, abhijeeteye, Sariya: thanks alot friends ...thank u so much...
krittika, Shubhangi's Abhi: yes jhatka lagne wala hai very soon... thanks alot..
Guest: thank u so much... ab aap please believe kar lije k ye pure duo hi hai... and may be your guess is right... chalo lets see k kia hota hai...
Guest: rajat vineet are my favs... un pe do plots hain mere pass but wo abhi nahi likh paun gi... at least august tak to nahi...
love duo and crazy for abhirika: thank u so much... daya sir ko yaad to tha hi or wo pichle 15 din se try bhi kar rahey they us se kuch dhundne ki... per nahi mila.. or us din unho ne phir se try kiya,,, shayad mujh se narration mein thori garbar ho gai...
Guest : g... aap ne guess kar liya.. acha hai.. per me nahi batun gi k aap right ya wrong... wese me kia nahi bataun gi.. aap ne hi nahi bataya k aap ne kisey guess kiya... actually meri na.. us k sath deal hai k me usey disclose nahi karun gi... And about sarthak... i m telling u one thing wo spy from hq nahi hai,...thank u so much
CHAP 3
krittika : thank u so much... and not only bhayanak... something veryyy bhayanak on its way.. just wait and then read...
priya, Guest, Shubhangi's Abhi, 93, Aisha, salmazhv, Guest: thank u so much friends.. thanks alot...
GD: thank u so much... is chap me kahani thori si agey barhi hai...thanks again
love duo nd purvi: thanks for your review.. but me aap ka question half understand kar saki hun.. or us ka answer ye hai k u have to wait till mid of june for rajvi fic,,..
and now jo me understand nahi kar saki wo ye hai ke... you want rajvi fic including who? please mention the character's name...
acha ab me chali... ap log zara reviews de dije kiun k
next will arrives soo... no it will depend on your reviews.
next update tabhi aye ga jab reviews aaein ge bohat sarey.. to agar agey parhna hai.. to review karna hai na...
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