Hey, next one And again… I really would appreciate some feedback because it is the first thing I write in english...
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Crucial moment
Harry cowered deep in his hideout. His breath came in thrusts, his hands shivered.
Convulsively he clinched his wand and eyed through the chink. Draco got nearer, much nearer. He had a strong-willed look and an angry grin.
Behold! Harry could hear his steps near, near and dangerous. His heart beat the same bar like Dracos boots on the ground.
"Let him go away! Let him be blind!", he begged to himself.
But too late! Draco stopped in front of his hideout, tore apart the curtain and frowned at him.
"Gotcha, Potter! Now it is your turn to search me!"