I would like to dedicate this chapter special to my friend who can only read my fanfics on his PSP or WII. Lol I'm just kidding.
I'm not that mean. It's not a chapter special. I would like to thank one person that gave me an idea. And this time, I didn't have
my sister type it for me! YAY! Mainly cause I don't have school and why write on a piece of paper when you can just type it right?
:D So I'm going to pour out my game lovin self onto this fanfic! Ok now, you might be thinking, why do people like eating pie? Well, ask them.
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Again, I'd love to have some ideas if you guys think of any. My sister is the new narrator, so when I pay her to type, I let her type
whatever and make the story longer, which is good since I'm trying to make you guys happier and enjoy this more and things like
that. I'm reeeeeeeaaaly lazy so don't really expect too much updates. Again, give me ideas since I'm only one guy that doesn't ask for help in real life.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 4: The Kidnapped Maria~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I would actually like to start off with what I wrote down. I don't really support Hina x Hayate. What i hate more than that though,
isn't the pairing itself, but people calling her Hina-chan. First off, it really makes no sense unless you are one of the 3 idoits in the
disciplinary committee. Second, not even Hayate calls her that. He calls her Hinagiku-san. And if you make your own character and
have them call her Hina-chan, I'm sure that she'll hate you, unless you're a close friend and a girl.
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Anyways, I've said what I wanted. Hayate and Nagi kissed. Nagi is 16, Hayate is 16, Maria is 17 but looks 16. Hinagiku is 16,
Hamster is 16, Chiharu is 16, the 3 idiots are 16. Anyways! Nagi opened her eyes just when Hayate was about to kiss her. On
second thought, just read the last chapter if you haven't already.
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At this point of the story, they just kissed. And they are still kissing. It's a 5 second kiss. Yup. This is good proof that I made Hayate
OOC. I made him lose his lolita complex for his Ojo-san. Now, its just plain love with his Ojo-sama. What's worse? Lust for your
Ojo-chan who was 13 or lust for your Ojo-sempai that's 16 now?
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Nagi pushes Hayate away. "H-H-H-Hayate..." She blushes. 'I never thought this day would come. Is it because I'm older? Wait! Is it
cause he wanted to kiss every girl that's his age?'
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"Ojo-sama, Maria has been kidnapped" Said Hayate with a depressed look that was about to cry.
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"O-oh! So you just wanted to replace Maria with me huh?" Nagi said, not listening to the voice in her head. 'Wait! Me. STOP! Maria was kidnapped! PLEASE!'
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"Eh? What do you mean Ojo-sama? Why would i replace Maria with you?"
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*Snap* "Ha-Ha-HA-HAYATE NO BAKA!" She threw random stuff at him. Nothing that dangerous because shes weak.
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"Ojo-sama please stop! Maria was kidnapped! We have to do something!"
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Nagi's voice took a imaginary megaphone and yelled in it. 'NAGI! LISTEN TO ME! I'M YOUR CONSCIENCE! MARIA WAS KIDNAPPED!
WE CAN PUNISH HAYATE LATER!' "WHA? DON'T HAVE TO SCREAM!"
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Hayate looked at her confused. "D...Did I yell?" Nagi starts screaming at the sky. "I...I'll come back later Ojo-sama. Nagi looks at
Hayate and says "I'm coming with you. It'll be like a Final Fan**sy game."
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Hayate looks at her and laughs " Ahaha...But what are you good at Ojo-sama?" 'Eh? Why'd i say that?'
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Nagi takes out a credit card. "We can buy all the potions we can with my money."
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Hayate looks away. 'I guess her mind did grow a bit. If she was still the old Ojo-sama, she would've...'
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Flashback! WOO...yeah.
"Ojo-sama, where are we?"
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"Shut up. We just need to go that way."
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"Ojo-sama, where are we going?"
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"SHUT UP! WE JUST NEED TO GO THAT WAY!"
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"Ojo-sama, are we lost?"
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"URASAI URASAI URASAI URASAI URASAI URASAI!"
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Different flashback.
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"Ojo-sama, can you get there yourself?"
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"Yes. I won't get lost."
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"But what about that one time when you got lost when I went to buy a new phone?"
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Nagi blushes."URASAI URASAI URASAI! BESIDES! YOU'RE THE ONE WHO GOT LOST!"
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End of flashbacks.
Hayate sighs.'Good times.' Nagi looks outside."So Hayate, where did they take her?" Hayate looks outside and points in the
direction they took her in."They went that way."
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Nagi looks at Hayate and slaps him."And you complained when I did that." "Gomen, Ojo-sama"
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They pack a couple of necessities. Food, water, blankets, a generator, a portable T.V, a *box and a *S3. Their party members
right now are Hayate, Nagi, and Tama(summon). Hayate is a warrior. Nagi is a summoner. Tama is a summon.
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Hayate's stats:
HP:3000
MP:100
Str:500
Def:300
Int:10
Mag:10
Special weapon: Does he have one?
Special weapon attack: I'll make one up soon.
Special:Take a party member's bad luck and put it on himself.
Super Special: Take all the party member's bad luck and put it on himself.
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Nagi's stats:
HP:100
MP:5000
Str:20
Def:5
Int:9999
Mag:300
Special weapon: *box
Special weapon attack: Controller allows her to cast insane spells.
Special: Can switch to *S3 which allows her to cast white magic spells.
Super Special: Use both Special weapons for an hour.
Summon Special: Her summons get stronger as Hayate gets stronger.
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Summoning Tama is like putting a new character onto the field, so...
Tama stats:
HP:1000
MP:0
Str:100
Def:100
Int:5
Mag:0
Specials:None. He's a summon.
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You might be wondering if I will actually use those stats later on. The answer is not really. I just miss playing Final Fan**sy. I will
give stats to everyone that appears later. Its how I think of them. Also, Nagi's not useless in this cause I feel like she should be
somewhat useful, even though shes not.
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Nagi starts walking outside."Lets go!" They walk outside and the SP's are outside."Please Ojo-sama, take us with you!" "NO!"
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Great start huh? Let's go see what Maria is doing.
"Let me get this straight. You kidnapped me thinking I was Nagi?"
"Thats right. They told me she was into anime and suddenly turned older today so..."
"Ok. I get it now." Maria sighed."Do you at least have some food?"
"Oh yes. I have lots of stuff. Make yourself comfortable. Sorry about this. I really didn't mean to make a mistake."
"I-I see." Maria smiles and starts eating a slice of bread.
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Maria's Stats:
HP:3000
MP:1000
Str:500
Def:900
Int:9999
Mag:?
Specials: Soon to be revealed. Maybe 3 chapters from now. Take or give.
Back to Nagi and Hayate. They decided to use the SP as a summon. When the SP's are summoned, they will deal 3000 damage
to the enemies. It will be divided equally. If there are 3 enemies, then it's 1000 each. Why'd 3000 damage? Think about Nagi's name.
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They finally get outside the door. Hayate says "Ojo, do you know where we are going to go?"
"Of course. I put trackers on everyone in the mansion that's important. The one in Maria is the little jewel around her neck."
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They got to the streets and starts walking north. 'Ojo-sama is a lot more reliable now. But...' "Ojo-sama, how long will it
take to get there?"
"I have no idea. I think Maria found the tracker or something because I'm not getting anything from this tracker." 'I didn't
think that she would find it'.
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There was a long silence. Then Hayate asked with a smile"Shouldn't we get a cab?"
"No. It would make us miss more things."
'Who is she?'
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Up ahead, they see what seemed to look like a robber. Hayate puts his arm in front on Nagi. "I'll take care of this Ojo-sama."
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The man charges forward, only to get drop kicked by Hinagiku. "GIVE ME BACK THAT STUFFED DOG!" Hina said with a crazy
stare and fire for a background. The man hands it to her and runs. Hayate and Nagi looks at Hinagiku. Hina looks back at
them. "Is...Is that Nagi?" Hina said with a confused look. O.o
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"Yes I am. What's with the stuffed dog?"
"Oh, he stole this from a store. Said it was for his daughters birthday. The wife walked by and yelled at the man for
abusing her child and then he ran off with the stuffed dog."
"Well...That's an odd story. Want to hear an even weirder one?"
"Sure."
While they are walking to the store to return the dog and while they tell her the situation,
Hinagiku's Stats:
HP:9999
MP:9999
Str:9999
Def:9999
Int:9999
Mag:9999
Special weapon: Any sword
Special weapon attack: Can use anything possible with a sword.
Special: Can summon wooden sword Masamune.
Super Special: Can scare enemies with a look.
Super Super Special: Can get many people to join the party.
Super Super Super Special: Can use other party member's specials.
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Far too overpowered? Does it really matter? She's the ***on Knight in Final Fan**sy 3, but better.
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They just returned the stuffed dog and just finished the story.
Hina turns and looks at them. "Should I help you guys then?"
Nagi and Hayate look at each other. Hayate replies "No. You would make it too easy for us."
Hina starts walking away. "Ok. Call me if you need help then."
Hina has join the party as a summon!
I ended up wanting to use a battle system so I will come up with one by the next chapter. "Why not now?" Nagi asked. Cause
I don't feel like it. And I don't know one. And also because this is the end of the chapter! Will bring more people into this story later on!
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Tell me what you think of the story. Blah blah blah. BTW, the summon system works like this, Only one summon per battle, with the
exception of Hinagiku, who you can only use once every 10 battles. I personally think that I did a bad job at this but you know what?
As long as you guys like it. I will add romance into this. I promise! Actually...
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Hayate, Nagi and Tama walked around until it was midnight. "Ojo-sama, We should rent a hotel."
"You're right. Let go into that one. It allows animals."
"Welcome! It's 20000 yen a night. Oh. Nice cat you got there."
"Thank you. He's trained. Here. 20000 yen."
"Your room is 1."
"Ok."
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They walk into their room and see that there is only one big bed. "Hayate, I'm going to take a shower." "Ok Ojo-sama."
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That's where I'm going to end. Why? Cause I'm not sure if people has noticed that this is mature. The first people to have read
this probably know that it was Teens, but I changed it cause I felt like it was more like older teen. Anyways, ideas are always
welcomed. Comedy ideas are also welcomed. What i want more than that is whether the flow of the story is good at all. I wrote
whatever came to mind so, yeah. I will write more if you guys really want me to.