Okay so I wrote a nice chapter with no drama but then I realised that I left a major cliff hanger in the last chapter so I have to go dramatic. This is only an idea atm because I feel like I need to update seeing as I've left it a few days to try and think what to write (don't want to let you down) so this is what I came up with for now. I may change it, but please comment to let me know what you think? Its only short but to dramatic right?
Jac looked at Jonny and froze for a second, who on earth could it be. Neither of them had ordered room service and the only person who knew that they were here was Mo. Jac quickly thought that was a mistake, had Mo came? They were both confused. Jac got up sliding Jonny's shirt on before heading towards the door. Jonny couldn't believe how beautiful the red head looked in his shirt. She opened the door slightly so she could see who it was. She looked at the young girl confused. She mirrored Jac's image. She was tall, skinny with long ginger hair, her cheek bones stood out just like Jac's. Jac looked at the girl who couldn't be much older than 16. She raised an eye brow at her, the girl looked shocked yet worried.
"mum" a delicate voice said as she looked into Jac's eyes. Jac just looked at her but at this point Jonny had got dress and walked to the door. He just staired her and then Jac again he couldn't believe how alike they had looked. He didn't hear the girl speak but he knew she was a relative of Jac's somehow. He didn't know much about her family seeing as she didn't open up much but he knew she grew up in care and didn't like her mother.
"Sorry, I think you have the wrong room" Jac said about to close the door when Jonny stopped her.
"Are you lost?" a strong Scottish voice said as he got a glare from Jac.
"I must be, sorry to bother you I was just looking for my so called mother but I guess she still doesn't want me"