Note to lila: don't talk about your daughters troubles on my reviews, its inappropriate (this is what me and me friends when were jokkiing about)
If you guys get a bit confused, my cousin kylie has been wrighting since I was in hospital, I hope she read the plan right and yes i write plans don't juge ;-) thankyou for your comments they are much appreciated
Maddys P.O.V
Me, rhydian, shan and tom are having a sleepover "right guys this sleepover is going to be fight free, so any fighting, rhydian, maddy tom" I know why she says me and rhydian, we did have a real fight, not quite sure why she said toms name though... "right tom we know you like mads, but as you can see she's not on the market now" tom looked hurt "SHANNON!"
"OOPS! I THINK HAVE TOUCHED A NERVE! now on with the sleepover, sorry tom" he gave her an unconvinced smile "s'ok"
"rhydian you said you had a scary film...series was it?" he looked confused but soon saw what I meant "oh yea, paranormal activity" uggh, I hate rhydian some times "rhydian you no I cant stand that!" he gave me an evil smile they all said at the same time: "WE NO!"
Rhydian P.O.V
I have a scary movie that maddy hates me and tom loves and Shannon just thinks its educational for people who explore paranormal activity "sooo, when should we watch it?" rhydian answered immediately "I was thinking we could watch a non horror and then quite late we could watch In the dark!" i was happy that mads would only reject "rhydian that sounds great, maddy go home...IF YOUR TO SCARED!" maddy looked hurt "I AM NOT SCARED AND YOU NO IT, YOUR JUST TRINER TEAS ME AND GUES WHAT! I love horror movies" maddy was shouting at all of us and suddenly nice and calm calming she loves the film categorie "we can watch wild chid now or at nine o'clock, your choice big man maddy!" i was getting concerd this was going to turn into tears "guys if were going to be horrible each other than this sleepover might as well end now plus mads int a man so shan that dint really work" maddy smiled at me.
Toms P.O.V
God my life was going so well, and then that bloody rhydian comes along and ruins my chances with my crush, god i just wish i could make him pay, but as much i would like to, hes like a brother to me maby maddy has met a proper match i should be happy for hem but tonight seeing them together maks me think that could be me, why wasn't i good enough for maddy? oh well il find some one else any way shans giving mads a right run for her money, i have never seen her act like that "shan, rhydian, maddy stop it, now rhydian since your the only one who int (i eyeball maddy and shan) SQUBALING" rhydian laughed "i think...i don't no what do you think tom?" i look at rhydian "heeeeerrrrrrmmmmm, i don't know..." i got the game rhydian was pulling so i went with but maddy cut me off mid sentence "are we invinsable or what?!" rhydian looked at me and smirked "tom did you say something or was it just me?" maddy threw a pillow at him "oh ha ha very funny" i gave a little snigger "something funny Thomas" Shannon asked me i was laughing my head of now "YEA, YOUR FACE!" she looked like she was gonna cry "oh shan im sorry it was just (she started laughing) a joke. ok i vote we watch it now"
"put in shan"
"ok" we watch wild child and we put the film (scary film). scared and jumed on rhydian a few tims and rhydian would peck her on the lips, which to me was disturbing as i hate to see them like that together The film was over maddy and rhydian fell asleep in the same sleeping bag, to see them like that, so peacefull together, it was hard not to be happy for them
Shannons p.o.v
AWWWWWW! maddy and rhydian are so cute together, i wish i could tel them who i go out with, but im scared they wont want be me friend any more when hes one of our enemies, we don't hang together until we know were for definite nobody we know would see us together "night shan"tom said to me, but i was to busy thinking about what to do to answer
morning
it was sunday and i was hoing to spend it inside away from it all out side, rhydian and mads were gone and tom was still asleep, it was only 7 so i decided to let him sleep til 10. i was on the laptop researching how to tel the truth the best way so nobody gets hurt (not physically) i was in the middle of it all and out of nowere tom pops up "im going now shan, see ya"
"yea see ya"
RHYDIAns p.o.v
whoa last night i got the b estnight sleep despite the horror movie, maddy was a victim of friendly banta, i bfeel bad but she nos it was all just a joke, i wasn't really sure so i decided to brake them otherwise mads might have just ripped shans head off "rhydian i am sooo tired after last nights night mare because (she yawns) YOU and that stupid horror film"
20 mins later
maddy fell asleep across my chest and the remote was on the floor and i wanted to watch some thing but the news, i dint want to wake maddy up so i just lay there, all of a sudden, maddy reached for the remote and passed it to me "i wasn't asleep you no, you could have got the remote" then all of a sudden there was a knock on the door, it wasn't shan or tom, they knock differently it isn't maddys parents cos its there home, who could it be...
bit of a cliff hanger BTW it isn't jimmy who goe out with shan and tell me if i should let rhydian and maddy and tom find out or have Shannon tel them for now, im out!
please R&R!