I am a horrible person the last one was really short and I didn't update again I am really sorry Will you except this really long chapter as a gift for not updating?Thank you! On to the story! btw review and tell me what max ride character i should hide in my closet jk haha but really.


FANG POV.

As soon as the doctor was standing right it front of me I heard a beeping down the hallway. Iggy and I stood straight up when we noticed panick in the doctor's face which meant that was the girl. Iggy i were running right along side the doctor. He stopped and ripped open the door on ICU room 112. When we followed him in I noticed the girl laying there.

Another thing I noticed was there was at least ten doctors or nurses surrounding her. In all the flurry someone came in to pull me and Iggy out. When we were pulled into the hall I asked,"what the hell is going on?" The Woman who pulled us out spoke," Language sir, hello I am Lissa Williams i work with child services.( in this story she will not be a slut ok.) "okaaaaaaay",I said slowly. This girl, we don't know who she is we have no records no nothing. she does resemble a girl missing for several years who goes by the name Max Martinez.

Ok so this girl is basically a jane doe? I thought to myself. We have people running DNA tests right now. Iggy then spoke," I didn't know this girl had no name, I was at her house delivering chinese. She looked kinda nervous." She then spoke again" So you just met her today. was there anything suspicious there?" I swallowed," ummmm we took down some guys before we took her to the hospital, not sure if they are dead but one got away." She then held up a picture," Is this him?" " yep!", Iggy and I said at the same time. Lissa spoke," that is Max Martinez's father.


I know its short but i have majorette practice that i was supposed to be ready for five mintues ago. Sorry i didnt send it to my beta but give her full credit. My other story is on hold. I dont know where to go with it. Have suggestions? pm or review me if you dont have an account. I will definetly upodate this weekend.

max:if she doesnt no cookies for herrrrrr! hahah

Me:awwwww please!

haha sorry for the random hope you like the story so far~ C: