Hi guys Scorcher here and I'd like to know if there are any ideas out there for this story and I'd like also know if there should be music for this and I would like to have commits on my hope for authors story to see how that was and I would like to reach 50 commits if you would like to make stories if you don't I would have to retire.
5 Years Later
So now in a house there was a 7 year old silver macaw looking at his adoptive brother Blu and who was the name of this silver name was Scorcher he got the name by havering scorch marks and life was good for him even if him and his brother Blu get bullied by two geese that he wish he can beat them sometimes.
Now he was at the house of his owner or friend that is a human name Linda that was 15 years old and had lots of books that both Blu and Scorcher read and new lots of things.
Scorchers POV
So I was walking around looking for Blu then I heard what I thought was water so I follow it to find Blu with some glasses with chemicals in them combining them and poring them in different glasses and then said"Blu what are you doing with those chemicals you do know you have to be carful"
"Yes I know that that's why I am outside" Blu said
Then when Blu was being most carful I heard two voices said "what are you doing nerd birds"when two snow balls hit the glasses and all the chemicals had laneded on Me then all I heard was the two geeses laughing and the pain with the chemicals on me burning then I got angry and attack them I heard Blu saying stop and the two geeses flee.
Blu's POV
As I saw Scorcher sitting I said "will they won't bother us again won't they" which that made us both Laugh then I noticed that something was on his head and it was fire!
he must have not noticed so I got him and pull him saying "You on Fire"! and he run so fast I saw a silver bur and he jumped to the tub that had full water with Linda getting ready to go inside(cloths on) then she screamed and got him to the tub,but the weirdest thing the fire was blue and then he got the fire out and his head feathers which where like mine where thanks to a chemical blue fire where now blue and he just pass out.
Scorcher's POV
So as I woke up and I look at the glass and my head feathers where blue and grew a little longer so the front reach my eyes a I did the only reasonable thing I scream.
So how was that I'd been working on it so commit it and give me ideas for later and I will see if up to 50 commits I will counting after jewel heals and I would add a girl for my OC if you guys would like so I out later.