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Anyways, I'm going to try to improve as much as I can. Italics are Josef voiceover. The huntress mentioned is the vampnapper person. So….here we go!
Chapter 3: Face to Face
Josef walked out of Buzzwire thinking. He didn't tell Beth the truth…First off, she can be an annoying human that I just want to feed off of, and second, Mick would kill me, he thought. If he's still alive…Josef shook that thought away. He wasn't going to believe that.
A FEW MINUTES EARLIER
Beth asked, "Oh, and have you seen Mick?"
"Uh…yeah." A long pause.
"Well, where is he?"
Crap. "Uh, he's…at my house."
Beth looked at Josef quizzically. "Why is he at your house?"
Out of all things, she had to be a reporter.
"His freezer broke, so he's using mine." Quit asking questions. I am a step away from baring fangs.
"Oh. Okay. When will his be fixed?" Josef had just turned back to the door. He felt his teeth grow unmistakably long as his fangs came out, and he growled, "Soon, Beth, soon. Can I go now?"
"Yeah. Just tell Mick to call me."
Why does Mick put up with this human?!
His eyes slowly went back to normal and his fangs sank back.
He left Buzzwire, thinking. Mick, you arrogant vampire. Look at what you're making me do. You're making me play nice to humans. For what? To find you. Then he thought of the huntress.
Watch yourself, hunter. I will kill you for what you did to my friend. Even though I may not know what you did yet, I will find out. Since you're in New Mexico, I will be honored to accompany you to my torture chamber…
Smiling, as he looked at the paper, he jumped in his limousine.
Mick was losing his life. He gasped for breath, his eyes light blue, and his fangs out at their fullest. Sweat rolled down his face as he continued to try to loosen the stake in his chest. He glanced at his watch and his eyes rolled backwards. It had been twelve hours. He himself was amazed that he made it this long.
Were Beth and Josef looking for him? He wondered about it until the huntress returned.
"Hello, Mick. My boss gives his condolences and is hoping you are enjoying your new tan. I'm here to, say, speed it up. Does fire sound okay? Yeah, fire's the best. I'll start it away from here, so you can see it approaching. Savvy?"
The huntress went to her car and drove a mile away from where Mick was and started a mile long fire.
She stayed only for a moment until satisfied and smelled the sweet smell of kerosene. She went back to her car and drove home, not far from her boss' house.
Opening the door, she dropped her keys and hung her jacket and walked into her office to reveal someone already in her chair.
Josef swirled the chair around and said, "So, are you going to come quietly or do my bodyguards over there have to carry you?"
He grinned when she became terrified.
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