OKAY GUYS I GET IT THIS WAS A REALLY RUBBISH STORY =/ SO I GET IT I WILL JUST STOP WRITING AND THANKS TO THE TWO PEOPLE WHO DID REVIEW .. THEY WERE THE ONLY REASON I DID TWO MORE CHAPTERS INCLUDING THE PEOPLE THAT ALERTED BUT APART FROM THAT NO ONE ELSE DID. I ONLY WANT 2 OR 3 REVIEWS TO SHOW ME THAT THERE ARE PEOPLE READING BUT OBVIOUSLY THAT WAS TOO MUCH :( IF I CAN GET SOME REVIEWS IN THE NEXT TWO WEEKS THEN I WWILL UPDATE BUT IF I DON'T THEN SORRY I'M QUITTING :) THANK YOU SO MUCH TO THE PEOPLE THAT DID REVIEW :)