I always try to reedit and make the translation more pleasant each time. Here's chapter 4:
CHAPTER 4
- Family tie? - the nurse asked, now I'm confused and distraught about the situation in which we find ourselves , as none of us is familiar to him, except for ...
- No. .. I can not go ... I can not bear to see him like this ... - I answer sobbing , trying to hold back tears as I separate myself from my friends and start running - ... if anyone needs me I'll be in the bathroom ...
When I feel I'm far enough away from them, I begin toslow down and enter the ladies room , I sit on the toilet and then let my feelings off steam and finally break into tears.
-Knock-knock ... - I hear the voice of Dr. Saroyan walking from the bathroom door to where I am sitting as she watches me with concern - Is something wrong Dr. Brennan?
-I'm fine... - I say between sobs as I wipe a few tears - This damn hormones make me act like this the whole time...
- Hormones? - Confused she questions, but after a few seconds his face tells me that she begins to understand, so finally squats and placed at the same height of my eyes - Doc.. Temperance, Seeley needs our support . If what you care is about none of us is an immediate family member of hi, there's no problem, I'm more than sure that Hank, Jared or Parker will be more than grateful for the favor, especially because you are the closest person he has to a familiar between all of us...
-That is not what worries me, Cam... - I say between sobs while I wipe away the new tears with the sleeves of my sweater - Booth... I worry that i can't see Seeley in that state...
- Temperance, Seeley have been in worse situations, even you were present with him even when he was operated by that brain tumor. Compared to that, a shot is nothing ... Although I understand the fact that you finally formed a serious relationship with him you feel that way. Vent is normal, even for you , you have a reputation for having a heart of ice. You know that that isn't true.
- It is shame to see me mourn what worries m , Cam ... I know this sounds irrational, but what worries me is fear ... - I say between sobs while I bury my head in my hands - fear of loosing Seeley... afraid he will not wake up ... afraid of him to never return home ... fear... fear that my baby would never know his father...
- Temperance ... - Says Cam as she approaches to me and take me in her arms trying to comfort me - I assure you that we will do everything in our power to make sure that Seeley will meet and raise that baby with you.
-After half an hour wait in the parking lot , Agent Booth finally left the building and headed for what I assume was the meeting place with the alleged witness ... - Sweets tells in the Hospital lobby to Hodgins and Angela what happened early.
-For God's sake, Sweets! Even the fact that you followed him so close you couldn't made it in time to help him?! - Angela says worried listening intently to the youngest member of the team .
-I did all I could Angela, but Agent Booth had lead me too! I found his parked vehicle pretty fast, but when I finally found the agent Booth he had already been shot and there was no trace of the attacker.
-But what was he doing there to begin with ? Booth is not stupid enough to fall for such an obvious trap!
-I think I can answer that ... - abruptly interrupts a man in suit and hazel eyes as he approaches the group.
-Do you know anything about this Hacker ? - Question Hodgins , altered in the presence of the boss of Booth - Are you the one who sent him to an almost certain death?
-Of course not! I'm not stupid! I am well aware that if something happens Booth, Brennan will do the same to me!
-Well, you better start to explain Andy if you don't want to everyone to do the same! - Angela threats agent pounding his chest with his finger.
-I was sitting at my desk when Booth walked into my office holding a phone ...
-Andy? - The agent is interrupted while Brennan , leaning on the shoulder of Cam , appears in front of them - What are you doing here?
-Booth came to my office before going to the place "witness" cited him, and came to see how the situation was to report it to my superior.
-He went to your office before going to the scene? - asks Brennan angrily to hear the insolent excuse of the Agent -Were you the one who sent him there Hacker?!
-Of course not Temperance! - Says raising his hands to fend off anything that women would tries to do -Booth more than anyone I knew it was a trap!
-If anything happens to Seeley I swear I'll do exactly the same to you and Sweets! - Dr. Brennan threats before returning to Cam shoulder to sob. Andy gives him a look of fear Sweets, but he just nods with equal or more fear than the agent.
-You'd better begin to explain Andy if you want to be lynched in 5 minutes - says Cam trying to hide his fury as she taps the anthropologist 's back.
-I was trying to do until you two broke me ... - tries to explain , but to see the looks of anger team decides that it is better to get down to business - ... ahem ... well , as I was saying ...
HOUR AND A HALF BEFORE
-I'll take care of everything Director Cullen... greetings to his wife ... goodbye ... - Hacker says while hanging his phone and begins to settle into his chair, but seeing an old friend come to the door, realizes that it will not be as simple as he thought later - is there something wrong Seeley?
-Andy , I need your help to findsomeone in the department that can trace this phone number and address ... - Booth says while giving his superior his phone and note paper .
- Why do not you ask aid Squint Squad? I thought that was their job...
- It happens that this is too delicate situation, Andy... - says Booth sitting at the desk and interlace your fingers under his nose - I can not let my team analyze this information without commiting them or the information...
- What are you planning to do Seeley? Do you plan to go there and play the role of target shooting for a possible murderer?
-That's the last thing I thought to do ... - says with a sigh as he stands up and gets stuck in the door - but it's clear that that's the only clue we have ...
-Seeley ...
-Hacker ... if something happens to me, I want you to stay close to Brennan until this is over ... - the agent flips and threatens to clarify things - ... but if you dare to touch my girlfriend, you won't live enought to tell the tale.
-Do not worry ... - says you swallowed before the menacing look of his subordinate, until finally realizes who is his girlfriend , after a few seconds of bewilderment continues - although Dr. Brennan would not let me near her and emerge unscathed...
-That explains why I was waiting half an hour in the parking lot ... - Sweets whispers when Hacker finishes his story.
-Do you have any clue of the attacker ? - Question Brennan sobbing and drying her tears with her sweather
-No , the number leads to a pay phone away from the crime scene and the forensics have just arrived on the scene ... I'm waiting to be told the preliminary results.
- Friends of Agent Booth? - Interrupts a nurse from the front desk.
-Right here... - Cam responds by raising her hand and headed to the counter - What are the news about Seeley?
-Agent Booth is just out of surgery, so you can come to visit whenever you want, though it will take a few hours to regain consciousness and only two of you are allowed to be in there...
-Thank you nurse .
-I'll go back to J. Edgar Hoover to wait for information from the experts - Hacker says nervously to see the scowl of the rest of the team - I'll call you if we find any clues, Camille ...
- Are you ready? - Cam Question Brennan , who nods and new tears dried. The group begins to move to the designated room, to which only Brennan enters.
-What happens finally to Dr. Brennan, Dr. Saroyan ? - Sweets asks suddenly, while he and Hodgins will run a look at the boss - Did you find out why it is behaving like this?
- Yes, he told me five minutes ago Lance , but I can not tell you anything ... without their consent.
- Oh , I see , is something about the case ... - Sweets says naively - now I understand , confidentiality ...
- You're wrong , kid, this isn't about the case, and it is a secret only to you... - Angela interrupted at the impudence of the psychologist - if Brennan and I wanted to tell you you'd know.
-I understand well Angela! But they never say anything even if I insist!
-Boy, this is not the place nor the right time to ask this kind of thing ... believe me , sooner or later you'll learn everything, but not today .
-Yes, but...
The discussion is suddenly interrupted by a sharp noise from the room, as if someone had fallen to the floor.
-Dr. Brennan ! - Cry the four team members in shock at seeing anthropologist lying on the ground unconscious.
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