Hello once again. Hope you all enjoyed the last chapter. Thanks to all who reviewed Now, this is the update of excepted OCs.

Max Smith (Me! Siderisn)-Summer

Sierra Crystals (DazzlerAngel)-Autumn

Ninel Lucia Velasquez Bychkov (Graceful Amaryllis)-Winter

Blaze Markura (RedPhoenix10123780)-Summer

Mana Valkov (Gingercookiessnaps)-Winter

Fang Kushina (Gin-Nee)-Saturn

Morgan Blue Robinson Abyss (GoldenAngel999)-Mars

Frieda Belvini Love (GoldenAngel999)-Spring

Carlos Zepeda Jones (GoldenAngel999)-Saturn

Grace Styles (DazzlerAngel)-Spring

Santina De Luca (Graceful Amaryllis)-Saturn

Mitzuki Uryuu (Darkus Phantom)-Mercury

Kiara Summers (Grace of Flame)-Summer

Jaden Grace (Grace of Flame)-Jupiter

Unmei (MarsTwilight)-Mars

Linh Tuan (Graceful Amaryllis)-Venus

Skyliner Walker (Skyliner Walker Hacama)-Mercury

Aiya (Bristeclaw)-Venus

Taylor Prince (Grace of Flame)-Venus

Luke Portadonnez (Grave of Flames)-Jupiter

Okay, so now I still need some OCs for these-

Autumn-At least 2 more OCs

Mercury-At least 1 more OC

Jupiter-At least 1 more OC

Mars- At least 1 more OC

Spring-At least 1 more OC

Winter-At least 1 more OC

Please send some in! I would also like a few more male OCs but it doesn't mean you have to send in a male one.

Chapter 4: Double Trouble

Max sped towards class like a bullet.

"I can't believe I slept in on the first day!" panicked Max. "I'm going to be totally late! And my first class is a Skills Lesson!"

Max quickly ran to the gym doors and stopped. He took a deep breathe before slowly opening the doors.

Squeak!

Apparently the door needed to be oiled.

The entire class turned their heads towards the noise and heaps of eyes were suddenly locked on Max.

"Um," muttered Max. "Sorry I'm late."

Sierra chuckled quietly, Blaze just shook her head and Jaden was sniggering evilly.

Max watched as battles broke out throughout the gym. He had to sit out because he was late.

Max looked around to see if he could watch an interesting battle, but most were basic ones and weren't really heated.

Suddenly the teacher in charge of the lesson, Mr. Meaner came up to Max.

"Max," said Meaner.

"Yes Mr. Meaner," replied Max. "For arriving late to this lesson I am not only going to not let you be apart of it, but I'm also giving you detention for the next week."

"Detention for a week!" panicked Max. "Come on!"

"However," added Meaner. "I am going to give you a chance to battle your way out of this."

"Thank god," said Max in relief. "So who's my opponent?"

"Did too!" snapped a Girl, catching the attention of Meaner and Max.

She was wearing a purple T with a black rose in the middle. Over this, she wore a black leather jacket with the sleeves rolled up and she also wore black tight pants and brown combat boots.

"Grace Styles," interrupted Meaner. "How many times have I told you not to get into arguments that end up getting heard by those on the other side of the school?"

"But she called me Ace," snapped Grace.

"Sorry Ace," replied the Girl Grace had been arguing with, Jaden. Grace hated it when people called her Ace.

Meaner sighed and said, "You need to be taught a lesson. So you and Mr. Late over there will be battling in a tag team match to stay out of detention."

"What!" cried Grace.

"A tag team match?" questioned Max.

"Yes," replied Meaner. "Attention class! We will all stop battling for and watch a special match!"

All of the students stopped battling and crowded around the main bey stadium in the gym.

Max and Grace stood at one end while two boys were at the other.

"Allow me to introduce your opponents," said Meaner.

Two boys appeared from the crowd and walked to the opposite end of the arena.

The first boy was wearing a scarlet tank top with the words 'Come At Me Bro' under a black mini jacket. He also wore black ripped shorts with a brown belt and red flip-flops.

The second boy was wearing a white tank top with a plain light blue t-shirt. He also wore blue denim shorts, blue toms, black fingerless gloves and a black belt to keep his bey in.

"Morgan Blue Robinson Abyss," introduced Meaner pointing at the first boy. "And Carlos Zepeda Jones."

Meaner pointed to the second boy.

'These two are excellent in tag team battles, mainly because they are experienced in these kind of matches,' thought Meaner. 'They should prove a good challenge for Grace and Max.'

"Let's do this," declared Max as he readied this bey. "I can beat both of you with one hand tied behind my back."

"I could beat them with my eyes closed," declared Grace. "I don't even need a partner to win. You will fall to my bey Evil Virgo."

Grace held out her bey, Evil Virgo for everyone to see.

It was black in colour and appeared to have sharp edges. Printed on the Face Bolt was a girl with long hair, its performance tip was made of rubber and the spin track was purple and had four claws.

"This is my bey," said Morgan as he held out his bey, Dark Flame Scorpio.

The beys face bolt was black and had a claw printed on it. The energy ring is red and the fusion wheel is dark silver and is rock like in appearance. The performance tip is red and semi flat.

"And this is mine," said Carlos as he held up his bey, Thermal Wolf.

The beys face bolt is a blue grey colour and has the wolf head printed on it. Its energy ring is grey and the fusion wheel is white. The spin track has large claws sticking out and is black. The performance tip is also silver.

"Ready Bro?" asked Morgan as he readied his bey.

"Ready Dude," replied Carlos as he readied his bey also.

"3!" cried the crowd.

"2!" added Morgan and Carlos.

"1!" finished Max and Grace.

"Let it rip!"

The four beys spun into the arena and Max quickly went on the offensive.

"Attack Flame Swordsman!" commanded Max and his bey charged at Scorpio.

Scorpio however, dodged the attack.

"Chill dude," said Morgan. "The match only just started."

"Yeah man," added Carlos. "Don't end something this fun so soon."

"Enough!" butted in Grace. "Attack Virgo!"

Virgo charged forward but Wolf dodged also and she and Max both attacked with their beys. Both of the attacks were dodged however.

"Come on," whined Max.

"That's it," stated Grace. "Special move! Flame Attack!"

Virgo surrounded itself in purple aura and the field was suddenly set ablaze.

The fire began to burn Wolf, Scorpio and Swordsman.

"Hey!" snapped Max. "I'm on your team!"

"I don't need your help," replied Grace stubbornly.

"Ready?" asked Morgan.

"Yep," replied Carlos.

"Special move!" declared Morgan. "Flaring Claw!"

Scorpio suddenly vanished and then reappeared on the other side of the field.

Grace watched as Scorpio rapidly attacked her bey's spin track. The attacks knocked Virgo away, stopping the fire attack and the flames vanished.

"Hey!" cried Grace.

"Time to step in," declared Max. "Special move! Flame Sword Slash!"

A flaming red knight appeared and swung its sword at Scorpio.

"My turn!" interrupted Carlos. "Wolf! Special move! Blazing Bite Attack!"

A grey large wolf with a silver blue aura appeared and charged at the red knight. The wolf bit the knight arms, knocking the knights attack off course and protecting Scorpio. At the same time Wolf smashed into Swordsman's spin track, knocking it away.

"What!" cried Max.

'Team work is something that must be used in a tag team battle,' thought Meaner. 'And right now, Max and Grace will lose unless they work together.'

"I'll move onto the defensive then," stated Grace. "Special move! Flame Shield!"

A shield of fire appeared around Virgo, protecting it.

"Let's go," said Morgan.

"Right," replied Carlos.

"Special move!" exclaimed Morgan. "Super Stab Attack!"

Scorpio charged and glowed a crimson red. The bey then smashed through the shield, knocking Virgo into the air and then speeding on through to Flame Swordsman and smashed it away.

Both Max and Grace were speechless at what just happened.

"I'm not out yet," stated Grace. "Special move! Fire Tornado!"

A tornado of fire appeared around Virgo, shielding it once again.

"Your defenses are useless," stated Carlos. "Special move! Furious Ware-Wolf Attack!"

Wolf suddenly began to multiply and the grey wolf appeared again and multiplied also.

All of the wolves charged and Grace didn't know which was real. They fakes slowly disappeared until there was only one left, and that one smashed through the tornado and smashed Virgo out of the way.

"How did he…?" questioned Grace.

"Now go!" butted in Morgan. "Special move! Poison Fury!"

A giant scarlet scorpion appeared and slashed at Flame Swordsman with its claws.

"This is really bad," commented Max.

"Looks like this is over," stated Carlos as Max and Grace saw that their beys were definitely spinning slower then Scorpio and Wolf.

"There is still one way to win," said Max. "But Grace, we have to work together."

"No way," replied Grace stubbornly.

"If we don't we'll lose," added Max. "Have you yet to realize that their whole strategy revolves around team work. That's what we have to do to win."

"Fine," replied Grace. "Let's do this."

Swordsman spun to the edge of the arena and shot up into the air, while Virgo did the same thing.

"Now!" exclaimed Max and Grace at the same time. "Combination attack!"

"Special move!" shouted Grace. "Flaming Fury!"

Virgo spun faster as it sped through the air and a girl with a long brow hair tied in a high pony tail, wearing a black tight tee with black buttons, tight black pants and brown boats appeared and charged downwards.

"Special move!" cried Max. "Flame Sword Slash!"

The red knight appeared alongside Virgo and charged downwards also.

"Special move!" shouted Carlos. "Wolf Return!"

Wolf glowed blue as it circled the arena and prepared to counterattack.

"Special move!" added Morgan. "Super Stab Attack!"

Scorpio grew a crimson red as it circled the arena also, preparing to counterattack also.

"Heat it up Swordsman!" commanded Max.

"Burn them alive Virgo!" exclaimed Grace.

"Let's end this battle Scorpio!" shouted Morgan.

"Finish them off Wolf!" cried Carlos.

"Goooooooooooooooooooooo!" cried the four as their beys unleashed their attacks.

'This will finish it,' thought Meaner.

Flame Swordsman swung its flaming sword; Virgo swung a shattering punch, Scorpio slashed with its tail, and Wolf bit with its jaws.

There was an explosion and when the dust cleared, Swordsman and Virgo were barely spinning while Wolf and Scorpio had stopped. A few seconds later, Swordsman and Virgo also stopped.

"Few," mumbled Max and he wiped the sweet from his face.

The two boys smiled as the four walked to pick up their beys.

"That was some battle," said Morgan.

"Yeah," added Carlos. "We should battle some other time. I think we'd get along well."

"I guess so," replied Max as he smiled at the two boys.

Grace meanwhile didn't say anything and Max coughed and elbowed her lightly.

"I guess that was a good battle," said Grace. "And Max, I guess you were right about working together. For this one and only situation."

Grave smiled the very slightest as she walked away and told Meaner that they had a deal and that she was off the hook.

"See you around," said Morgan as he and Carlos left the gym as the bell went off.

Max happily left the gym. He was happy that he had such a great battle, happy that he won, happy that he got out of detention and happy that he knew this year would be a good one. Or would it?

"So you believe him to be the one," said the figure staring out the window.

"This is definitely the one," replied the cloaked female.

"We have searched far and wide," added the cloaked male. "He is definitely the one."

"We also found some who would gladly join our crusade," continued the Cloaked Female.

"I see," replied the Dark Figure. "Everything is going according to plan. None of them will expect what we have planned. Soon, we will finally achieve our goal. And for the one who we have been searching for, for years will have no idea what hit him."

The three figures laughed evilly as lighting flashed outside and it rained heavily and the thunder roared.

To be continued:

So, we catch a first glimpse of the evil in this story. Who are these mysterious figures? Well, you'll have to read on to find out! I still need some more OCs so send them in please. Please read and review!