Hello there my loyal fans, Memodo Shiki here with the fourth chapter you've all been waiting for!

I'm sorry it took so long to write this out, with the other stories I have out I have to divide my time wisely, and since school started up again I might have less time to work on future stories. But I will not let that stop me!

For those of you who read the Fairy Tail manga can you believe that Carla has a human form now! I think that it is like Pantherlily's transformation personally but who knows. My rantings aside, on with the story!

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, Fairy Tail or One Piece.


Chapter Four: The Power of Darkness! The Rise of the Fire Shadow!

Naruto's Apartment

"Ugh...stupid sun!" Naruto slowly opened his eyes and raised one of his hands to cover them from the sunlight currently shining through his bedroom's window. Naruto Uzumaki was not a morning person. He tried to get up but couldn't as he felt a weight on his chest and tilted his head to see the sleeping form of one of his girlfriends, Ino Yamanaka.

It had been a week since the Mt. Hakobe incident and Naruto and Natsu had been helping Lucy get settled into the guild and the town. The celestial wizard had taken a liking to the guild despite the quirks that some of the members had, but she was adamant on staying with them for a long time. Ever since Lucy was introduced to the guild and had been accepted by everyone there Ino had been more clingy lately. Naruto didn't know why but he had a feeling that it had something to do with the celestial wizard.

Last night was one of those times that she was extra clingy and didn't let go of him all afternoon. One thing led to another and the next thing Naruto knew they were making out on his bed before making love to each other. Despite all that he still needed to asked what was with her later, not matter how pleasing the night was.

Said blond haired girl in question was just starting to wake up herself as she seemed to snuggled into Naruto's chest before looking at his face. "Good morning Naru-kun." she said gaining his attention.

"Good morning Ino-chan, did you have a nice sleep?" Naruto asked.

"Yes I did, but my pillow keep moving all throughout the night." she said with a little pout as Naruto sweat dropped.

"You don't expect me to stay perfectly still the whole night, do you?"

"Yes." she answered as Naruto's sweat drop increased. Naruto started to sit up which made Ino 'epp!' as she was lifted up and thrown backward onto his bed. Naruto looked over at Ino's form and was once again amazed that he was able to get such a beautiful woman as a girlfriend, and more amazed that he also had three other beauties as well.

"Do you like what you see stud?" Ino's voice stopped his ogling as he looked to see a seductive smirk on her face, but a smirk none the less. Naruto moved the blanket to cover Ino up and moved to get dressed for the day.

"To answer you question Ino-chan, yes, I do like what I see. But i'm afraid I won't be seeing it for a while." Naruto told her as he put on his boxer and pants as Ino looked at him with a slight glare.

"You're going on another mission again, aren't you?" Naruto nodded. "It's not fair~! You just got back from another job not that long ago, I wanted some more time with you!" Ino wined as Naruto sighed.

"You do know that I can't just focus my attention all on you, right?"

"Yes, but we can still do other things together. Like talk to each other."

"Talking, huh? Then how about I ask you why you have been more clingy lately ever since Lucy joined the guild?" Naruto asked as he was met with silence behind him. He turned around to see that Ino was nowhere to be seen and a note was left on his now made bed. He walked over and read the note out loud.

"Have a nice trip Naruto-kun! See you when you get back. - Ino." Naruto once again sweat dropped and wonder how she managed to get dressed, make his bed and leave without him noticing. He just put the note in his pocket and finished getting dressed before leaving his apartment and leaving for the guild. As he was leaving he have sworn he heard Lucy shouting at someone but shrugged it off and kept walking.


Guild Hall

"Huh? What did you say?"

"That new book by Jiraiya-sama came out two weeks before the official release date. Can you believe it!"

"No, it's all too troublesome to think about it." Shikamaru said as he was currently talking with his girlfriend Levy McGarden in the guildhall that was in a rare state of peace. Levy is a rather young, petite teenage girl of a slender build who stands at a rather below-average height for her age. She had shoulder-length blue hair,which is tied up with a yellow bandana around her head. She was wearing a blue vest that stopped just below her chest and showed off her stomach and hips and was left slightly open showing that she was wearing a yellow bra underneath. She wore white colored shorts on bottom with a normal brown belt holding them up and had sandals on her feet.

"You think everything is troublesome, you lazy idiot." Levy said with a slight glare.

"But i'm your lazy idiot, Levy-chan." Shikamaru said in response as Levy huffed at him and looked away.

"What did Shikamaru do this time Levy?" Naruto's voice called out as Levy turned to see him walking over.

"Oh, hey Naruto! What's up?"

"Nothing much. Are you still asleep Shika? Even I know you're not that lazy." Naruto said as he started to poke Shikamaru's arm in an attempt to 'wake up' the lazy shadow user, and succeeded in doing so when Shikamaru grabbed Naruto's arm and twisted it making the blond scream slightly in pain.

"You troublesome blond, if you keep doing that, not even your Iron Body will protect you from the pain I will dish out for interrupting my nap. Got it?" Shikamaru said slowly as Naruto nodded before the shadow user let go.

"That was uncalled for Shikamaru, what if you actually hurt him?" Levy asked.

"Relax, you know as well as I do that won't hurt him one bit." Shikamaru's point was proven when Levy saw Naruto arm wrestling with Elfman nearby with the arm Shikamaru just twist and winning.

"Maybe you have a point." Levy said with a sweatdrop. She stopped when she heard a commotion by the doors and saw Lucy walking into the guildhall followed by a battered and bruised Natsu and Happy apologizing behind her as she ignored them.

"Hey Lucy, what did Natsu and Happy do to you?" Naruto asked his fellow blond after he won his match as she took a seat next to him after the blond had won.

"They broke into my apartment this morning and didn't even apologize to me about it! Who the hell does that?" Lucy said angrily as Naruto tried to calm her down.

"Don't worry about it, it just means that they see you as a friend-"

"Friends don't break into other friends apartments and trash the place." Lucy interrupted with a slight glare as Naruto sweat dropped and held his hands up in defense.

"Hey now, I didn't say that it was the right thing for them to do, or legal for that matter."

"It still annoys me though, I hope that it won't become a regular thing with them." The blond haired girl grumbled but unknown to her it was going to be a regular thing with the pair. Naruto prayed that she wouldn't kill Natsu and Happy every time they did that.

"Say, why were Natsu and Happy in your apartment this morning anyway?" Naruto asked as Lucy looked at him and explained.

"They wanted me to go on some mission with them but I didn't know what to do. What do you think?" Lucy asked.

"Well, do you want to team up with Natsu?"

"Team up?"

"Huh? You don't know?" Naruto asked as Lucy shook her head. "Even though everyone in the guild are comrades, some people who work well together form team within the guild and take on missions that may not be suitable for a single member." Naruto explained as Lucy soaked in the information and nodded.

"Does that mean that you are on a team then?" Lucy asked as Naruto shook his head.

"I haven't been on a team in a while. When I was younger I was teamed up with mister lazy pants over there." Naruto pointed at Shikamaru. "But when I wanted to do more missions and he wanted to just stay here and lounge about like the lazy bum he is so we had a parting of the ways." Naruto finished as Lucy nodded her head.

"I see, how long has it been?"

"5 years." Naruto said as Lucy looked at him with wide eyes. "In that time we have both become stronger, I doubt that we can be work together the same way as back then."

"Are you sure about that?" Lucy asked as Naruto looked at her. "I mean you said that the teams are made of people who work well together. If you and Shikamaru worked well together back then, then why after a few years of not working together would your teamwork not work in the field anymore?" asked Lucy. Naruto thought about it and then looked at her and shrugged.

"You have a good point. It just has been a while since we've worked together. I wonder…" Naruto trailed off as he looked towards Shikamaru and smiled. "Thanks a bunch Lucy, and I suggest that you go on that mission with Natsu and Happy. They can show you the ropes on what to do, see you." Naruto said as he walked towards the request board.

Lucy looked at Naruto as he walked to the request board thinking over what Naruto had said with great thought. While Lucy was doing that Levy came up to her and asked. "Everything okay? You're kind of staring off into space."

Lucy stopped thinking for a moment and looked towards Levy and rubbed the back of her head. "Yeah, I was just thinking of something, who are you?" Lucy asked.

"My name's Levy, Levy McGarden the lazy bum's girlfriend." Levy said as Lucy sweat dropped.

"So you heard what Naruto said, huh?"

"Yeah, but I do kind of agree with him though. Shika-kun is a pain to deal with sometimes." Levy said as she shook her head with a smile and sat next to Lucy.

"You don't say...I'm Lucy by the way." Lucy introduced herself as Levy smiled at her.

"It's nice to meet you Lucy! If you don't mind me asking what were you thinking about?" asked Levy.

"Well, Natsu asked me to go on a job with him and Happy and I didn't know what to do. Naruto gave me some advice but i'm still a bit unsure." Lucy explained before Levy slammed her hands down on the table.

"What!? Natsu actually asked you to work a job with him? He's never done that before." Levy exclaimed.

"Never?"

"Never! He must really trust you a lot." Levy said as Lucy got a peeved look on her face.

"I don't think that's it at all." Lucy said as she remembered the details of the mission.

"Huh? What did you say?" Lucy and Levy turned their heads towards Shikamaru as he was sitting up and saw Naruto standing next to him with a mission request in his hand and smiling at the lazy brunette.

"I said do you want to go on a job with me? It will be just like old times, what do you say?" Naruto smiled as Shikamaru sighed and laid back down.

"No thanks, it would be too trou-"

*SMACK*

"What the hell was that for!" Shikamaru yelled comically at the blond menace as Naruto continued to smile at him after he had hit him on his head.

"You've known me since we were kids Shika, when I ask you to go on a job I'm not really asking you." Naruto said. Shikamaru just stared at him for a moment before getting up and rubbing where his head had been hit.

"Fine you troublesome blond. I don't know why you are like this today and I don't care, as long as you will leave me alone afterwards." Shikamaru said as he smirked. "Besides, I overheard your conversation about me being a 'lazy bum'."

Naruto rubbed his head nervously as Shikamaru continued. "I am curious as well if we can still work together as a team, so this will be a good test as well."

"You just want to know about my progress and how much stronger i've gotten. You want data." Naruto said as the shadow user shrugged slightly, not caring that Naruto was right about what he wanted to do. While they were talking however, the whole guild looked at the duo with wide eyes and open mouths as Lucy looked around in confusion.

"Hey Levy, why is everyone so shocked about Naruto and Shikamaru teaming up? Naruto told me that he was once teammates with him when they were younger so why are they acting like this with them teaming up again?" Lucy asked as Levy turned towards her.

"I can see why Naruto didn't tell you, when he and Shikamaru were younger they were considered the strongest team in Fairy Tail. Team Fire Shadow." Levy explained as Lucy went wide eyed. "With the way they worked together everyone thought that they would be unstoppable. They completed every mission that they went on, with no damage to anything cause they always planned things out before they went into the job."

"It surprised everyone when they stopped working together and went solo before Shikamaru joined another team, but now that they are together again. I just believe it." Levy finished as she and Lucy saw Naruto and Shikamaru walk over to the master.

"Hey Oyaji! Me and Shikamaru are going to go on a mission together, we need your okay to go." Naruto said as Makarov raised an eyebrow at the two.

"Really? It's been awhile since you two have worked together, are you sure you two can handle it?"

"Come on master, you've known me and Shika for ages and you know how strong we've gotten over the years. Do you really think we wouldn't complete it?" Naruto said as Makarov held one of his hands up and sighed.

"You know that's not what I mean, but very well. You two just be safe okay?" Makarov said as Naruto mock saluted to him and Shikamaru nodded his head before they both walked out of the guild. Lucy watch as the two mages left and thought about what Levy had said about them being the strongest team in Fairy Tail and what Naruto asked her about being with Natsu as his teammate. She quickly stood up and walked over towards the pink haired dragon slayer.

"Hey Natsu, about that job…"


"Hey, Naruto. What made you ask me to go on a mission with you in the first place?" Shikamaru asked Naruto as the two mages sat on a train headed towards the destination of their mission. Naruto was busy eating some ramen he bought from Magnolia before they left.

"Well I was talking to the new guild member, Lucy, and she said that even if we had not worked together for five years we might still be able to work together as a team. I was interested to see if that was true so I put it to the test." Naruto said in between slurps as Shikamaru gained an annoyed look on his face.

"I knew that blond girl would be trouble. I have enough trouble in my life with you and Ino, and now this girl? Troublesome." Shikamaru said before he got comfortable in his chair. "Wake me up when we get to the town." He said as he closed his eyes as Naruto responded with a 'Yes sir!' and happily ate his food of the Gods.

"ATTENTION PASSENGERS! WE WILL BE ARRIVING IN LITTLETON IN 30 MINUTES, PLEASE BE ADVISED…" Naruto just ignored the rest of the message and continued eating.


After departing the train in Littleton, Naruto and Shikamaru had to walk for a couple of miles outside of the stop in order to make it to Banaro Town, the place where their mission had come from. It had said that the people of that town had been harassed by small group of mages and had forced them all to move out of the town itself leaving them to do whatever they pleased.

As the pair of mages kept walking down the road they both saw giant rock formations in the distance and knew that they were getting closer towards the town and picked up the pace. When they got closer they both saw a lot of people on the outskirts of the town and thought that they were the townspeople and made their way over to them.

When the townspeople saw them coming closer they all ran and hid behind the trees surrounding the town of some of the wagons that were parked along the dirt path. Naruto and Shikamaru walked through the camp that was set up and saw out of the corner of their eyes the people looking at them with both curiosity and fear which confused the duo as they continued to walk forward until they made it to the center of the camp.

"Hey, we would like to talk to the mayor of this, umm, I mean that town!" Naruto shouted loudly as Shikamaru bonked him on the head.

"Idiot, don't yell so loudly." The shadow user said as Naruto rubbed his head. They then saw an old looking man step out from behind one of the wagons and stopped a couple of feet in front of the two.

"Yes, what is it you two want? Have you two come here to cause harm to us again?" The old man said as Naruto and Shikamaru looked at each other with raised eyebrows before looking back at the man.

"No nothing like that. We are the mages that that sent for to help you with the people who harmed you." Shikamaru said as the mayor gained a look of hope on his face and signaled for the townspeople to come out.

"I'm so sorry for acting like that to you both, we have been having a horrible couple of months having to deal with the group of mage that have taken over our town." The old man then explained about a man named Rick Shadowsnake and three other people walked into their town one day and started wrecking the place apart for no apparent reason. When the people tried to stop them Rick and his men attack them all with their magic and drove them out of the town and were forced to live like this ever since.

As Naruto and Shikamaru listened to the old man they couldn't help but feel disgusted by what the men were doing to the town and planned to help end this quickly so that these people could get back to living in peace. With that thought in mind they both started to walk into the town.

"Hey, you better not sleep this one out Shikamaru. I will make your life hell if you do." Naruto said as Shikamaru snorted.

"I was about to tell you the same thing, you troublesome blond."

"I'm not the lazy one here you baka!" Naruto shouted as the two kept bickering as they kept on walking.

Town Center

"Damn it! It's not here either." A rough and old voice shouted out as a small group of four people sat around a fountain in the middle if the town. The man who shouted out was a large and imposing man and was the tallest in the group, he had black hair that was slicked back with brown eyes and some stubble growing around his jawline and a snake like tattoo on his neck and down his body.

He wore a purple button up shirt with with the first couple of button undone and his sleeves rolled up with a black and gold coat draped over his shoulders making him look more imposing. He has black pants with purple lines running down each leg and wore plain brown dress shoes on his feet and had a revolver strapped to his side.

"I was sure that we would find something here." The man said.

"Don't worry Rick, the information we get is bond to be wrong sometimes." A man next to him said as Rick looked towards him. He was a relatively tall man that wore a brown cloak that was ripped around the bottom and wore a cowboy style hat and dark sunglasses on his face. He also had an object strapped to his back that was wrapped in a brown sheet and tied together with rope.

"Yeah, you're right James. With the business we're in information about him is sketchy at best, but we can't let that get us down!" Rick said as another member of the group got excited.

"What do we do now Jefe?" An overly muscular man wearing nothing but black pants with brown shoes and a wrestling belt across his waist. He had wild brown hair with hazel eyes and a goatee as well as bands around his biceps.

"Well, we spent most of our time just lounging around here and doing nothing. So I think it's time we leave this place and destroy another town, what do ya say!" He asked his men as the wrestler screamed in excitement while the other two just nodded their heads in agreement.

"Com'n Buki, show some spirit!" The wrestler said as he put his arm around the last member of their group. He was a man of average size and build with red hair and black eyes and looked like he was bored just standing there. He was wearing blue colored hoodie with sickle like designs around the shoulders and chest area with brown pants and white and blue sneakers.

"No thank you Marvin. I would just be wasting my energy doing that." Buki said in dull voice as the wrestler slapped his back and Baku gained a tick mark.

"How many time have I told you, call me 'Senor Estallido'!" Senor exclaimed as he started to pose in different wrestling poses.

"Cut that out you two and let's go. We have some mayhem to cause!" Rick said as they all started moving towards the town exit.

"Now hold on a second there. I'm sure you won't mind staying a couple of extra minutes, right?" A voice from on top of a nearby roof caught the attention of the group and they all looked up to see Naruto crouching down on the roof with his fingers intertwined.

"Huh? Who the hell are you?"

"My name's Naruto Uzumaki, S-Class mage of Fairy Tail." Naruto introduced himself to the group.

"Naruto? Naruto?...Fishcake?" Rick said as Naruto gained a tick mark.

"IT MEANS MAELSTROM DAMN IT!" Naruto roared. He quickly calmed down and stared at the group before him. "I've heard a lot about you Rick Shadowsnake, you have an interesting group with you as well."

"Oh really? I'm flattered that you have heard of me before but can I ask you a question?" Rick asked. Naruto nodded his head yes in response. "You wouldn't happen to be 'Fire-Fist' Naruto, right? The famous fire mage whose body is said to be made of fire?"

Naruto smirked as he responded. "Now i'm the one that should be flattered. So you do know me." He stated.

"Yes, and before we start something here I just want to ask you one question." Naruto raised an eyebrow and signaled for Rick to continue. "How would you like to join my guild?"

"Guild? You're just four people, you can't call yourselves a guild."

"So what if we are just four people, we have enough power between us to destroy a full guild if we wanted to. Whaddaya say? First we just have to find lord Zeref and then we will rule this world!" Rick proclaimed. Naruto looked at the man with slightly widened eyes.

"Zeref? You're out of your mind. Zeref's been dead for centuries, get your mind out of the gutters." Naruto shouted as Rick shook his head in disappointment.

"That's where you're wrong, Zeref is still alive! He walks on the very earth we tread on and no one knows because they don't fear him. But we will show them! This town has traces of lord Zeref's magical energy in it but we didn't find anything useful for us so we just tore the place up a little, no big deal." He said as he shrugged his shoulders.

"Well it's a big deal for me, and for the people of this town. I'm here to take you all in for what you guys have done and there is nothing you can do about it." Naruto said as he started to gain a fiery blue aura around him. Down below the mages tensed up as they felt a large amount of magical energy coming from the blond teen.

Rick decided to ease the tension a little and asked the blond once more. "This is your last chance kid, won't you join my guild?"

"I already told you I'm not going to join. You can take that little offer and shove it up your-"

*BANG!*

"...well you get the point." Naruto continued as he ignored the bullets that went through his head and chest. As the flames closed both holes in his body Naruto looked up to see James holding a magic rifle in his hands and was looking at him. Naruto smirked.

"Well, well, guild master. It seems like you need to teach your members some manners. Fire Gun!" Naruto yelled as he pointed his index and middle fingers in both hand like and gun and shot bullets of fire at the gun wielding mage as he ran away.

Naruto saw something move out of the corner of his eye and looked to his left to see Senor in the air with a building above his head and bring it down towards the blond haired mage. Naruto stretched his arm out as a ring of fire circled around him. "Fire Magic: Fire Dragon!" A stream of flames erupted upwards from the mage and took the shape of a dragon's head before it exploded the building before it could retch him.

Rick shouted as a piece of burning building landed near him and backed away before it could hit him. "James! Senor! You two stay out of this. Until you guys reach A-class or above this guy's out of your league, do you hear me!"

"Sorry Jefe." Senor said as he rubbed his head while James remained silent.

"Fire Fist!" They all turned around and saw a large stream of fire before it engulfed them and sent them flying through several buildings.

Rick screamed in pain as he fell to the ground and the flames kept burning on his body. "AHHHHH! GOD DAMN IT HURTS!"

"Jefe/Boss!" His gang said in worry as they all rushed to his side. On the other side of the buildings Naruto had jumped down from building he was on and started walking towards Rick and his gang. As he walked through the remains of the building he sent the group of dark mages through the fire that had started suddenly made its way towards him and left the rest of the building unharmed.

As Naruto stopped near the group he saw the three men surround Rick and attempted to help put the flames out. "Get away from me you idiots! Stand back, I'll be fine." Rick said as he pushed his men away and fell to the ground and extinguished the flames on his front. Rick breathed heavily as he looked up and glared the the blond mage in front of him as Naruto had a serious look on his face.

Rick rolled over onto his back and put out another patch of flames and lay there for a moment. Naruto looked at the man in front of him with face not changing as he let the fire around him burn out and stop.

"You bastard!" Buki shouted at Naruto and waved his arm in front of him. Naruto could see blue streak in the air coming from his fingers that reminded Naruto of his Tempest Kick but shrugged it off as he felt a magic signature getting close. "Take this! Sapphire-!" He stopped his attack when he found that he couldn't move his body.

"Buki? What's wrong?" James asked.

"Knuckle Shadow!" The next thing James knew he was hit in the face with four shadow like fist that sent him flying.

"James!" Buki shouted before he too was hit with four shadow fists and flew into a nearby building. Senor was about to go see how his comrades were doing when he saw something moving across the ground and brought his arms up in defense as he block five shadow fists from hitting him but they sent him skidding a few feet.

"About time you showed up, Shikamaru." Naruto said to a shadow beside him as it began to rise and take the form of the lazy mage with his hands in his pockets.

"Shut it you troublesome blond I was surveying the layout of this place in case we needed a plan." Shikamaru said as Naruto snorted at him.

"I have a plan. It's called 'beat the crap out of these guys and go home.'" Naruto said as he punched his palm while Shikamaru sighed.

"Are you two done arguing?" Rick's voice spoke up as he slowly made his way back onto his feet and looked at the pair. "You two come walking into my town and have the balls to beat my men while I'm down and out? That's it, there's no other choice." Rick said as he stood to his full height and raised his arms out.

"Watch, and be amazed by the power given to me by lord Zeref himself!" Rick said as his hand began to turn dark and a black mist erupted from his body and into the sky, blocking out the sun as it did so.

"What is that?" Naruto asked as he looked at Rick. "Smoke?"

"Doesn't look like any smoke magic I've seen, and what did he mean by Zeref?" Shikamaru asked as Naruto said he would tell him later.

"Zehahaha, hey Fire Fist, your body's made out of fire right?" Rick asked as Naruto narrowed his eyes. "My body is darkness!"

Meanwhile outside of the town the people looked on in fear at what they saw. "Mayor, look! It's that weird black smoke from before!"

The mayor looked at the smoke and quickly went into action. "Quickly everyone, get away from here now! We must get away from here as fast as possible!"

The people acted quickly and started to pack their thing in a hurry before running away into the forest and hiding there until it was over.

Back in the middle of the town Naruto and Shikamaru had raised eyebrows as they looked at Rick with interest. "Darkness?" They both questioned.

"That's right. I would seriously reconsider my offer to join my guild before it's too late. In the whole history of the magical world there is other magic quite like this. Absolute Darkness Magic. In other words it's Dark Arts magic." Rick explained as he raised his hand in front of his face. "I'll give you both a taste of my power, just a taste before you both die."

"Stop yapping and do it." Naruto said with a challenging smirk.

While this was happening Rick's little group was currently making their way out of town with Senor and James running down the street while Senor held Buki fireman style who was thrashing around in his arms. "Let me go Marvin! I have to get that blond bastard back for what he did!"

"No way niño. Jefe's on a rampage, if we don't hightail it out of here he'll kill us too!" Senor said as he continued running and ignored his companion's yelling.

Back with Naruto and Shikamaru they watch in suspense as the darkness that Rick had released earlier began to recede back to him and released a slight shock wave as it did. Naruto and Shikamaru braced themselves as the force from the wave past them and saw the darkness begin to spread across the ground and make it's way through the town. It made it's way around the debris that they were standing on like water against a ship and surround them, they both watched for a couple of minutes as the whole town was now covered in the black substance.

"Darkness is gravity. It swallows everything around it, even light itself can't escape! It's power is infinite!" Rick proclaimed.

"That seems nice and all but it's nowhere near us. Sure you got the hang of this?" Shikamaru questioned as he continued to look at the darkness with a cautious eye.

"Relax, I'm not aiming at you two yet." Rick said as he turned to his side and crouched down to the ground and placed an open palm on the darkness. "Just stand there and watch as I take care of this town. Black Hole!"

Naruto and Shikamaru felt a pull in the air and watched as the darkness that had spread across the town was suddenly being pulled into Rick and watched as building, wagons and everything on the street started to collapse in on itself, like they were being put under a tremendous amount of weight or pressure and began to sink into the darkness below. Outside of the town the people who lived there could only watch in horror as their homes and businesses were being swallowed up into the ground as the darkness made its way inward.

"The gravity of darkness condenses everything and anything with its infinite power. To crush whatever they touch!" The darkness continued to rush towards the dark mage as all that was left was a plain and empty dirt field with the town nowhere in sight. The Fairy Tail mages looked with wide eyes as they looked around the once prospering town.

"T-The town…"

"Disappeared!" Shikamaru finished what Naruto said as they heard Rick start to laugh.

"That's just the beginning. Now I'll show you what happened to that town...or whatever's left of it I should say, Liberation!" Rick shouted as the black mist emerged from his back and and rise into the air, when it got high enough Naruto and Shikamaru saw something coming out of the darkness and soon found out what it was as the now destroyed town shot out of the darkness and landed all over the field.

Shikamaru used his shadow to knock away any of the debris that came his was as Naruto turned his body into fire and let them pass through him. When the debris had finished falling the field was now filled with piles of timber and wood as Rick laughed at the destruction.

"You see this! This is the power granted to me by-huh?" Rick said as green lights started to surround him. Naruto had both of his hands placed out in front of him with the same green glow and balls of fire coming out of them before they turned orange-yellow.

"Firefly - Fiery Doll!"

The green lights then flew straight into Rick and set him on fire as Naruto lowered his hands and looked at the mage in confusion. "The darkness part I get but this is strange. You said that your body was made of darkness right? That shouldn't even hurt you, or rather it shouldn't even hit you. You look like a normal old mage to me." Naruto said before he saw the same mist from before spring up from his body and surround his flames before moving, showing that it had extinguished them.

"Huff, huff, I already told you my darkness swallows everything around it. Whether its punches, blades, bullets, lightning or even fire." Rick said as he stood up. "Unlike you or any other advanced elemental mages I can't turn my body into an element and dodge an attack, and the pain I absorb is much greater than a normal human feels."

"So what's the point in saying that you're made of darkness? Or even why use that magic at all?" Shikamaru questioned the man.

"Haven't you heard the saying, all power has a price. Well in exchange of this risk there happens to be one more thing I can absorb, Black Vortex!" Rick then stretched his arm out and a dark spiral appeared in the air where his hand was. "First I use the gravity of darkness to pull a powerful mage into my grasp."

Naruto felt a strong pull in the air and was launched towards Rick. 'I-It's too strong! What is this?'

"And when I touch them!" Rick said as he grabbed Naruto's shoulder as both Fairy Tail mages looked wide eyed. "Hehe, you're smart. Have you figured it out yet?"

"It can't be…" Shikamaru said as he looked his friend struggling in Shadowsnake's grasp.

"That's impossible." Naruto said as Rick raised his right arm in the air and delivered a strong punch to Naruto's abdomen causing blood to come out of his mouth and sent him flying into a building.

"Naruto!" Shikamaru yelled in shock as he ran over to the blond mage.

"I bet it's been so long since you've been hit you've forgotten how much it hurts, right?" Rick questioned Naruto as the fire mage emerged from the rubble and tried to stand. He felt something wet on his chin and wiped some in his fingertips, he brought it up and saw that it was his blood and glared at the dark mage. "You understood the moment I grabbed you. The other thing my darkness can absorb is…!"

"Our magic power." Naruto finished as Shikamaru helped him stand.

"Zehahaha, that's right. So long as a mage is in contact with me their magical abilities are useless, they are nothing but mere civilians! S-Class, The Magic Council, even the Ten Wizard Saints, all those who have become dependent on their magic. Just one touch will remind them of how weak they really are." Rick exclaimed as the duo glared at him.

"Be careful Shika, one wrong move and he could actually kill us." Naruto warned him as the shadow user nodded.

"We'll be fine as long as we don't let him touch us."

"If you two think you can escape gravity that easily I would like to see you try! Black Vortex!" Rick challenged them as Naruto felt himself getting pulled towards him again but was ready as he encased his hands in flame.

"Flame Lance!" Naruto hurled two lances made of fire at Rick as the dark mage got stabbed with them. As Naruto got close however Rick punched him in the neck and sent him flying into a partially destroyed building and destroyed it further. The lances embedded in Rick started to burn him as he yelled out in pain and controlled the darkness to take them away.

"Tch, troublesome bastard. Shadow Stitching!" Shikamaru attacked the dark mage as he saw the attack coming and used Black Vortex again.

"You fool, don't you know that darkness is more powerful than shadows!" Rick yelled as Shikamaru's shadows were absorbed into the vortex. Meanwhile Naruto emerged from the building holding the side of his neck were Rick hit him.

"That damn bastard almost broke my neck. He's going to be an even bigger pain than I thought." Naruto said as he moved closer to the fight and stopped. "Time to take it up a notch. Fire Transformation: Phoenix!"

Blue flames surrounded Naruto and started to take the shape of a large bird. When the transformation was complete in Naruto's place was a large bird made of blue and golden flames with the Fairy Tail insignia on his back. He launched himself in the air and quickly made his way towards Rick who was distracted by Shikamaru attacking him with shadows.

"You never learn do you brat." Rick taunted Shikamaru as the lazy shadow user breathed heavily from the constant attacks he sent at the dark mage. "My darkness consumes everything, you will not leave this place alive! Zehahaha-Ugh!" Rick suddenly stopped laughing when Naruto transformed his whole body but his wings back to normal and kicked him on his side.

Rick gasped as Naruto dug his foot into his side. "Shika! If our magic attacks won't work then try physical attacks!" Naruto shouted as the shadow user nodded his head and rushed at Rick.

"You brat!" Rick gritted out as he covered his hand in darkness and grabbed Naruto's leg as his flame wings went away. "Take this!" He threw a punch at Naruto as the blond tensed up.

"Iron Body." Naruto said quickly as Rick hit his stomach and winced in pain.

"Damn that hurt! What is your body made of?"

"Hehe, my girlfriends have been trying to figure that out for a while." Naruto said with a smirk as Rick narrowed his eyes at the blond before he threw him into another building.

"Tempest Kick: Straight Line." Rick was surprised once again when he saw a blue streak of energy coming towards him and and created another Black Vortex to absorb the attack but was surprised when the attack hit him straight on the chest and sent him skidding across the ground.

Rick slowly got up again only to be hit hit in the back by an air slash courtesy of Naruto, who was now standing by Shikamaru and had blood running down his face.

"This guy is something else Shika, we need to end this now and let the council deal with him later." Naruto commented as Rick got back up and coughed up some blood.

"Yeah, you're right. Got any ideas?" Shikamaru asked as Naruto raised an eyebrow.

"Aren't you the one who normally comes up with the plans?"

"This guy is too troublesome to think straight. I can't think of anything to beat him with the power of his, it's too-"

"Troublesome, yeah I get it." Naruto said slightly annoyed. "But I do have a plan, can you still use that spell?" Naruto asked suggestively as Shikamaru saw Naruto's hand turn into flames and changing to his Flames of Despair.

"Yeah I can. You may be physically stronger than me but we have the same amount of magical energy, so don't think so little of me." Shikamaru said as he released his magical energy and his shadows started to rise off the ground.

'Damn those brats! What kind of attack was that? My darkness should have absorbed it if it was magic.' Rick thought as he turned around and saw the two mages surrounded by each of their respectable auras, Shikamaru's purple in color while Naruto's was fiery purple.

"I think it's time we end this, Rick." Naruto said calmly as the darkness mage scoffed.

"Really now, well then let's see you try!" Rick then started to gather the darkness above his head and formed a giant ball.

"Let's go, Shikamaru!" Naruto shouted as he released a large amount of purple flames from his fist behind him.

"Okay!" Shikamaru said as he did the same with his shadows and wrapped them around the flames.

"Die brats! Dark Matter!" Rick shouted as the threw the dark ball of energy at the two mages. Shikamaru's shadows fully wrapped around the fire and condensed it quickly until it it was the size of a pilot light between their hands and thrust them forward.

"Fire-Shadow's Shadow Flare!" They shouted as the small shadow construct glowed for a moment before a large amount of flames and shadows burst out and collided with the darkness. The two attacks pushed against each other and battled for dominance before the flames overpowered the darkness and made it vanish.

"WHAT!? IMPOSSIBLE!" Rick shouted in shock as he saw his darkness being overpowered and now saw a sea of shadows and flames heading towards him and envelop him as he screamed out in pain as he felt the flames burn him and the shadows pierce and cut his flesh and sent him flying into the distance.

When the attack ended all that was left in the field was the remains of the destroyed building and a large crater from the impact. Shikamaru sweatdropped as Naruto rubbed the back of his head as they saw the damage caused by the pair.

"Oops." Naruto said as Shikamaru sighed and walked towards the crater.

"Well this is bad. First we destroy a large portion of this town and second I can't sense that Rick guy's magical signature anywhere. We are in so much trouble." Shikamaru observed.

"Hehe, I'm sure that the townspeople won't mind. Besides it wasn't us that destroyed the town."

"But we did make this crater." Shikamaru pointed towards the destruction they caused. "I don't think they would like that."

Naruto waved him off and walked towards where the entrance of the town was and Shikamaru followed. When they made it to the treeline they both saw the townspeople looking at the remains of their town with sad looks as the mayor walked up to the duo.

"We're sorry. We couldn't save you town from those mages, and that we destroyed your people's town by that last attack. Please forgive us." Naruto said as he and Shikamaru bowed towards the people.

"It's alright, we know that you didn't mean for it to happen. Did you manage to beat the men anyway?" The mayor asked as Naruto and Shikamaru shook their heads.

"Sorry, we did manage to defeat Rick but our last attack sent him flying so far away we couldn't sense him anymore." Shikamaru explained to the mayor as he nodded his head in acceptance.

"Then I suggest that you two leave as soon as possible. No doubt the military saw the damage you two have done and will sent their forces to investigate."

"Thank you, and don't worry about the reward you can use that to help rebuild your guy's town." Naruto said as the mayor thanked both of them and sent them both off with a smile.


"Damn it!" Rick shouted as he lay on the ground of a cave miles away from the town while his comrades surrounded him and held him down.

"Calm down Jefe. If you move around so much your wounds will open up again." Senor warned Rick as he kept thrashing about on the ground.

"Damn those brats! If I ever see them again I will kill them! Kill them you hear me!" Rick shouted as his men struggled to keep him down.


Fairy Tail Guild, Makarov's office

"I see." Makarov said staring at Naruto and Shikamaru who just reported in on how the mission went. They explained about the dark mage and what he could do and the that damage he did. They went on to talk about how his powers work and what happened to Naruto when he went up against him and how they managed to defeat him but failed to capture him for the military to arrest.

When they returned to the guild they were first assaulted by their respective girlfriends (Levy for Shikamaru and Mirajane and Cana for Naruto) and assaulted with question about what happened to them while Mirajane patched them both up. They told them a brief summary of what happened to them before they were called into Makarov's office and told him the whole story from start to finish.

They were now standing in front of Makarov covered in bandages with Shikamaru's all over his torso and arms and Naruto on his abdomen, neck and head. To say the master was shocked was an understatement. Naruto and Shikamaru were easily the strongest pair in the guild and prime candidates to be called the strongest mage behind the guild's ace, so when he heard that they had to use a Unison Raid to beat one mage made Makarov almost sweat in fear especially when he heard that he could take away a mage's power just by touch and something on a different level than Nullification Magic alone.

Makarov sighed and looked towards the pair with tired eyes. "This is most disturbing. Once the council finds out about this they will put all of their manpower into finding this man and his gang and stopping them before they do anything drastic."

"With all do respect master those men are very dangerous, they can't be stopped easily with their powers. So far all we've seen is Rick's powers only, we don't know the extent of his subordinates magics except for little details about them." Shikamaru said as Naruto nodded in agreement.

"He's right master, the whole group could use some type of dark magic and we don't even know about it. Who ever is sent after them should use caution-"

"And they will not be you or anyone else in the guild." Makarov spoke as he cut Naruto off. "I know what you are going to say and you are not allowed to got after them."

"But master-!" Naruto stopped talking when Makarov raised his hand and stood up.

"I don't want you two investigating this any further. You two only got out of this situation because you managed to surprise him with your teamwork and magical abilities, now that he knows about you two it won't be the same. He will know to watch out for both of you. And if what you said is true then his companions might interfere and you will be completely clueless as to what kind of magic they use." Makarov explained as Naruto looked down slightly but agreed with the man none the less.

"Look, I will tell the magic council about this Rick Shadowsnake and his group and they will handle it, I just want you two to go home and rest up. Do I make myself clear?" Makarov asked sternly.

"Yes sir." Both mages said before Makarov dismissed them and they started to walk out.

"By the way, the mayor of that town sent a package for you both. They felt bad for not paying you two sizes you told them to keep the money for the repairs so they sent over a present for the both of you." Makarov then pulled out a box from his draw and opened it for the pair to see. Inside were two trench knives made from a shiny grey metal. The blades looked like brass knuckles, but each one has a sharpened zigzag 'tooth' over each knuckle, and a blade coming out of one end.

Both mages marveled at the pair of weapons before Naruto started walking out again. "You can have them Shika. I have enough weapons as it is." And with that Naruto exited the room.

"Troublesome blond." Shikamaru muttered before he thanked the master for the gift and went back to the guildhall, most likely to try and sleep.

Makarov sighed and rubbed his temples for the oncoming headache to come. "I'm getting too old for this."

Outside Naruto and Shikamaru were once again surrounded by most of the guild member and were checked over by their girlfriends again before Naruto waved Mira and Cana off and said that he was going home alone.

On his way home he stopped by a nearby store and bought some groceries for his dinner and made his way home as the sun was going down. When Naruto got to his apartment he spent the next hour and a half cleaning himself up and getting his dinner ready. As he was setting his table up he heard the sound of banging outside followed by a girl screaming out in frustration before it went quiet.

Naruto went to look outside and saw Lucy sitting against her apartment door with a sad atmosphere around her.

"Hey Lucy, how did your mission go?" He asked. Lucy looked up and was surprised to see Naruto standing in his doorway.

"Naruto? Don't mind me, what happened to you?" Lucy gasped seeing his wrappings

"Ran across a really nasty dark mage but don't worry. I'll be good as new in an hour. I always was a fast healer." said Naruto.

"Uh, sure." Lucy sweatdropped.

"So what's got you down? Something happen on your mission?" asked Naruto.

Lucy went on to tell Naruto about her mission with Natsu to retrieve a book from a man named Duke Everlue but she had to go undercover as a maid to get it, but had taken a blow to her pride as a women when the pig of a man called her ugly and shooed her off of his property.

After that she Natsu and Happy broke into Everlue's mansion and battled against mercenaries from the Southern Wolves and Everlue's crazy gorilla of a maid before they defeated them and brought the book back to its owner, Kaby Melon, who they later found out was the son of the author of the book Kemu Zaleon. When she had finished Naruto sighed and pinched his nose.

"Leave it to Natsu to not think ahead. I mean really, making you go undercover as a maid? Seriously when it comes to girls he has no brain whatsoever, and that jerk called you ugly? I would give him two black eyes. You could be a cover girl like Mira-chan with your beauty." said Naruto.

"G-gee thanks." said Lucy blushing.

"I'm just telling it like it is." Naruto said honestly.

"But the worst part is the client couldn't afford to pay us. How am I gonna make rent when it's due? And I just found the place! WAHHHHHHHH!" sobbed Lucy making Naruto hug her.

"There, there." he said wiping her eyes with a hankie. "Sometimes I go overboard with my missions I have to have my clients keep what they offer just so they can handle repairs. I knew that would bite me sooner or later so I do some moonlighting from time to time."

"What do you do?" asked Lucy before blowing her nose on the hankie.

"Well Once a week I sing at the guildhall, I go on treasure hunts, I also cook." said Naruto.

"You cook?" asked Lucy.

"Yep. Matter of fact I just finished making it and started setting the table up, want to join me?" Naruto asked.

"I don't want to impose." Lucy said as Naruto waved it off and invited her in, which she accepted reluctantly. When she got inside Naruto went to go get everything ready so she decided to look around his apartment. Looking at a nearby wall she saw pictures of Naruto with different members of the guild at different ages of his life.

The first picture was of a young Naruto and Shikamaru standing in front of the guild hall with smiles on their faces, with Shikamaru's being a small one, with the master standing beside them giving them a happy smile as Naruto had his arm around the shadow user's head.

The next picture showed a slightly older Naruto with two older people standing on either who had big smiles on their faces. The first was a fiery red haired woman with violet eyes and her hair cascading down her back wearing a formal top with a flower on her left side and a skirt. The second person looked like an older version of Naruto without the whisker marks wearing a formal kimono like top with long pants and a short, sleeveless haori over it and was messing up Naruto's hair as he had a big grin on his face and held up a sheet of paper with a giant 'S' on it.

'Those must be his parents, his mother looks beautiful but it looks like he gets most of his looks from his dad.' Lucy thought as she moved on to the next picture.

It was a picture of a 16 year old smiling Naruto with his arm around a grinning Natsu and each of their hands encased in their respective flames and fist bumped each other. Off to the side Happy was flying next to Naruto as he posed for the shot while a young white haired girl around Natsu's age and height was standing next to the dragon slayer with her hand over her mouth to cover up a laughing fit she seemed to have as she looked at the two.(1)

The last photo that she looked at was a picture of a blushing Naruto surround by Ino, Mirajane, Cana and one other girl as they each gave him a kiss on his cheeks while she could see the guild member laughing in the background with Shikamaru and a blond haired man smirking at him. Lucy knew straight away that these were Naruto's girlfriends who agree to share him and recognized most of them right away except for the the last girl in the photo. She had long scarlet colored hair with brown eyes, she had a slender and voluptuous figure that made Lucy jealous. She wore a Heart Kreuz armor with a blue skirt, and black boots. Lucy could just make out a blue Fairy Tail stamp on her upper left arm.

"What do you think?" Lucy jumped slightly as Naruto appeared next to her with drinks in hand. "I don't have many pictures but they do kind of tell my life here at Fairy Tail."

"I can tell, are these your parents?" Lucy pointed at the second picture on the wall.

"Yep, that's them. The redhead is my mom, Kushina Uzumaki and the older carbon copy is my father Minato Namikaze." Naruto said as he pointed out his parents to Lucy.

"Namikaze? Where have I heard that before?" Lucy wondered as Naruto laughed slightly.

"Maybe you've heard of his achievements as 'The Yellow Flash'." Naruto smirked as Lucy looked at him with wide eyes and a gaping mouth.

"Your father is the Yellow Flash!" Lucy screamed. Naruto nodded in response. "Your dad is a Wizard Saint, one of the strongest wizards in the country!"

"Yeah, that's dad! But mom can hold her own against dad if she got serious enough." Naruto said as he lead Lucy over towards the table. He pulled out the chair for Lucy so she could sit down and when she was in her seat Naruto went to go get their dinner.

When Naruto came back out he had two plates with lasagna on them and placed them down on the table. "I hope you don't mind, I originally made it for me but I had enough for two people."

"It's fine, it smells lovely by the way." Lucy commented before Naruto sat down and they dug in. "So I was wondering, who was the red haired girl in that last picture? I can guess that she is one of your...girlfriends."

"It's a bit weird and uncomfortable talking about it huh?" Naruto asked Lucy as she nodded as she knew what he was talking about it. "It was the same for me when the girls suggested it and it took a while to get used to it. Anyway, the girl in picture's name is Erza, she's one of the guilds S-Class mages and the strongest woman in the guild. She hold the name Titania, Queen of the Fairies." Naruto explained.

"Wow, the strongest woman in Fairy Tail? You must feel so lucky." Lucy commented.

"I do, but i'm not going to feel lucky when she gets back from her mission." Naruto said cryptically and decided to change the subject. "So what were you doing sitting against you door in the hallway anyway, i'm sure that you could have done that inside your apartment?"

Lucy blushed in embarrassment and slightly scratched her cheek as she answered. "I kind of forgot my keys at the guild. With the mission that I went on and the stuff that happened afterwards I was stressed out enough as it was and when I couldn't find my keys I broke down. I was going to go back for them but then you asked me to dinner and I couldn't refuse."

Naruto nodded in acceptance of her answer and decided to talk more with the blond haired girl to get to know her better. They spent the next half hour just talking about themselves and Lucy listened to the stories that Naruto told her about the missions he went on when he was younger and his S-Class trial as well.

They talked into the night until Lucy began to feel tired and Naruto offered for her to stay which she accepted and took Naruto's bed as per the blond's request while Naruto took the couch. As they drifted off to sleep they both thought of the enjoyable talk that they had with each other and smiled.


Character Profile: Chōji Akimichi

Alias: The 'Human Tank'

Magic and Abilities:

Titan Magic: This magic allows Chōji to enlarge his body to gigantic proportions. Additionally, it can also be employed on selective parts of Chōji's body, elongating them and making it look like he possesses elastic properties of short, coming in as a very versatile Magic.

- Human Boulder: After first using his Titan Magic to make himself into a human-sized ball, Chōji tucks his limbs and uses magic to propel himself into a powerful roll. Its effective use of weight and the force of rotation make for an even greater lethality than appearances would let on, enough to pulverize someone's hand with but a mere touch.

- Spiky Human Boulder: An enhanced version of Chōji's Human Boulder with its effectiveness raised several times by using it together with weapons. Chōji rapidly grows his hair out to wrap around his body and hardens it instead of using blades.

- Chubby Dive: After performing his Titan Magic to enlarge himself, a giant Chōji jumps into the air and falls on the opponent.

- Titan's Fist: After enlarging his fist to gigantic proportions, Chōji punches his opponent and sends them flying miles away.

- Human Jackhammer: After using Titan Magic to increase his size, Chōji funnels magic into his hands, which causes special markings to appear in them. The weight and power of the hands are greatly increased because of the larger size, the muscles are activated with concentrated magic, and the thickness is also increased. With so much magic that it becomes visible, Chōji's palms become like an iron hammer. This gives this attack the power to even cave in the earth, causing extensive crushing damage to anything that may be caught beneath them. This attack is also shown to have a wide range due to the increased size of his palms.

Advanced Techniques:

- Butterfly Chōji Mode: Chōji can enter this mode by converting the calories of his body into magic, which he can then use to perform techniques. The magic is shaped into two large butterfly wings, and then compressed into smaller wings. In this form, he can use some of his high-level techniques, such as the Butterfly Bomb and also combine it with other techniques.

- Butterfly Bomb: A life threatening technique which burns away all of Chōji's excess fat and converts it into magic. The intensely concentrated magic that is gained leaks out from the backbone and becomes visible through friction with the shoulder blade, appearing like a butterfly wing. Chōji then concentrates the magical energy into his fist, and then puts all of his body weight behind the punch.

Master Hand to Hand Combatant: Chōji possess great prowess in this art, being capable of easily taking on several opponents at once with ease. He can overwhelm foes even if they are armed or larger than himself. Because of Chōji's size and stature his uses power attacks more than anything else and combines this art with his magical abilities and uses it as his main fighting style.

Enhanced Strength: Chōji possesses a large amount of physical strength, being capable of pummeling and overwhelming someone as physically strong as Naruto when they were younger, even without his Titan Magic.

Immense Endurance: Chōji possess a vast amount of physical endurance, being able to hold his own against Shikamaru Nara and Naruto Uzumaki, two S-Class Mages, all the while showing almost no signs of weariness despite casting powerful magical attacks in rapid succession.

Immense Durability: Chōji is extremely durable, being able to take on powerful magical attacks head on and continue on fighting with little damage done.

Enhanced Magic Power: Chōji is considered to be an A-Class mage and possesses an incredible amount of Magic Power, which befits his Magic as it consumes a lot of it. When he exert his magic it is red in color.

Equiptment:

Three Coloured Pills: secret medicines used by Chōji's family . As the name suggests, there are three pills, each with a different colour. First is the green Spinach Pill, next is the yellow Curry Pill, and last is the red Chilli Pill. By forcibly converting the body's fat reserves into magic, each successive pill ingested gives a tremendous power boost. The Chilli Pill is even said to increase one's power a hundred times.


Official States:

Attack Power: 6/5

Defense Power: 4/5

Speed: 3/5

Intelligence: 3/5

Chubby-ness: 5/5


1. Natsu finishing his Fire Magic training with Naruto and being congratulated by his closest friends(family).

My first 'OC' chapter if you like. Sorry if the fight was too much like Ace's fight against Blackbeard but I thought it would be good for later on. You will see Rick Shadowsnake later on.

Thanks to R L Spradling for the OC character. I need help on what magic Ino should use. If you can think of any besides Telepathy tell me please~

Please review and tell me what you guys and gals think. Any flames will be eaten by Natsu.

M.S OUT! :)