Hello hello anybody who is reading. I hope you enjoy. Please no rude comments, but I would like Constructive Criticism. I know my chapters are short.
Andrew had to get everyone in Abnegation to a safe place. The Dauntless were all controlled by some sort of simulation. You lied Jeanine. You lied to me this whole time. I know you would try to control me, but I never thought you would do so by killing innocent people.
Andrew looked out on the streets of the Abnegation sector of the city. Every house looked the same- porchless and grey. Taking time to sit down and think would be completely self indulgent. The usually quiet street of houses was littered now with blood and bodies.
Andrew lifted his mattress where he hid three treasures. After all these years of telling his children decorations and personal possessions were self indulgent, Andrew had kept some personal possessions of his own.
Andrew had beneath his mattress two photos. One standing beside Natalie who was all in black and him all in blue looking beautiful and perfect. The other picture was him laughing by the fountain with Jeanine's head on his. She was laughing as well. No one knew her but him, he realized. He doubted she ever revealed her true self to her colleagues. She laughed with him and smiled.
We could have been happy.
But where were they now? His people were being massacred in their homes while she sat safe behind the walls of her office behind a desk responsible for it all.
"I'll deal with you later. First, I need to save my son." Andrew said to the picture of Jeanine before hiding the photograph under the bed again and running with the gun.
