A/N:
I'm back from my rest and ready for some more awesome reviews. Speaking of reviews here are my favorite reviews from last time!
JustBella
2009-07-10 . chapter 3
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
I loved this chapter :) Update when you can (No pressure) Just don't forget to bring the popcorn this time :P
Sweet! I have pink hair!
JustBella
2009-07-10 . chapter 2
What! The! Hell! It sounds like a chant, (now say it three times in a row, then we have a party) haha.
Nice Chappy!
JustBella
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
I like it :) And by generation my middle name is Anne :p Though it has an 'e' at the end, it's still Ann - though it's not Annie, for some reason, people think my middle name is always Annie instead of Anne. Because it is Ann! But with an 'e' at the end :P
(Confused yet?)
lol
*She had just read the story!*
Frightening Little Monster
2009-07-10 . chapter 3
That was brilliant! I loved how you used the third person point of view. Thank you very much for mentioning me at the start of the chapter. I look forward to your next update!
-Frightening Little Monster
2cool4school
2009-07-10 . chapter 3
awesome chappir you have potential to become an awesome author on fanfiction
Starthevampire
2009-07-10 . chapter 3
You are very welcome. I love reviewing for your amazing stories and i am so happy that you put me in your story. Stupid Jake. He hit Bella. That is so not cool. Oh I looked at the picture of the living room and it looked really nice. I would totally hang out in that room. I loved how us fates saved Bella from being gang raped. I thought it was funny that they used Jessica Stanley to distract the guys since she was going to die anyway. lol. And she was going to give all the guys STD's and stuff. That's what they get. Oh jeez. Bella had such a tough night. First she quits her job, then her boyfriend accuses her of sleeping with her boss, then her boyfriend hits her, then he leaves her all alone on the side of the road, then she was being followed to be gang raped though she didn't know it, then she almost gets killed by a minivan. Poor Bella. I was so happy that Edward was trying to make himself not treat women poorly anymore. Like I was glad he asked for advice on how to stop. I am glad that Edward saved Bella and all but now he is unconscious. Ah! I hope that he is going to be okay! haha. I love it when authors leave cliffies. It just makes me want to review more and find out what happend in the next chapter. I like your line by the way. I love the picture of the fates by the wat. I really do have blonde hair and she is wearing my favorite color. Yay! The other fates are awesome too! I like Bella's cell phone too. It is way cooler than mine. Although I have a Samsung too. Oh and Rosalie's Diner is awesome! I have always wanted to go to a diner but there are none around where I live. The inside of her diner is was cool too! I am affraid of vans like that one that almost killed Bella. Those are the kind of vans that I feel kidnappers would use. haha. I love the picture of the guys that were following Bella. The title of the picture made me laugh. So there is a fourth sister? She looks amazing. I also loved the picture of mother nature. I am saving the pictures of the houses for when you get there in your story though. I have a tendency to forget things. lol. I definitely cannot wait until the next time that you update this story. 8D
Opaloutcast
2009-07-10 . chapter 3
Aw, feel so special!
I really like the twist with the 3 fate sisters, that a really cool idea.
Great chapter I hope Edward is okay.
Keep up the good writing!
They all get Edward shaped cookies!
Also thanks to:
ihatejacob1
cheermom13
delilah69
2cool4school
SecretEmpath
They will get Emmett shaped cookies!
The Fate Sisters:
Starthevampire as Jess Fate the guardian of the future.
ihatejacob1 as Stacey Fate the guardian of the past
JustBella as Taryn Fate the guardian of the present
Also; booboo(dot)kitty2(dot)0 as Patty AKA: Mother Nature!
Now on with the show!
When we last saw Bella and Edward; Edward saved Bella from being crushed to death and hit his head on the pavement and past out! Many of you reviewed saying that he must be O.K. I think I even got a death threat from someone. So exhale that breath you've been holding for a week or so:
Tainted Love
Mother Nature at Work!
Bella's POV:
I found myself lying on top of Edward. He was losing consciousness fast but why? I shook him and called his name a few times but he lost consciousness anyway. I jump off him and looked him over for injuries. From the looks of it he hit his head pretty hard and it was bleeding. I tried not to breath but I was attacked from all sides by my best-friends and Esme in a breath taking hug.
When they let go I took in a deep breath and the smell of salt and rust hit me like a brick wall. My eyes rolled back in my head and everything went black.
Alice's POV: (don't get use to it)
Edward had just left leaving us all relieved that he is finally trying to get over what that bitch did to him. Bella always would ask about what happened but it's not my story to tell. She would try and pout but it never worked. I am the queen of the damn pout!
I was taking a bit of my burger when I was struck with one of my visions. (Yes she is physic in this story! Why? It's awesome that's why!)
(The vision)
Bella was walking down the road deep in thought as four drunken men followed her. Then a street walker passed in front of them and they switched gears and followed her instead.
Time moves to a half hour late; Bella walking into the parking lot of the diner. As a minivan is leaving the lot it was going a little too fast. It hits a patch of ice causing it too swerve. The driver tried to gain control over the van but only making it crash right into a distracted Bella killing her instantly. Her blood painted the pavement as people rushed to her side. She was pinned between a light pole and the van. No one could save her. She was dead….
(End of vision)
"Oh god!" I gasped as I came out of the most horrifying vision I had ever had. I started crying as I ran to the door of the diner to see that my vision had come true. I ran out screaming her name over and over praying to every god possible for her to fine and not a bloody mess pinned between the van and the light pole.
I rounded the van to see that Bella was fine. She only had a bruise on her cheek. She was standing over someone, they must have saved her! I tackled Bella with a hug only to be followed by Rosie and Esme. As soon as we let her go she took a deep breath and fainted.
"OH, GOD! NOT MY BABY!" Esme screamed. I looked down to see my big brother on the ground unconscious.
'He saved Bella!'
Soon the ambulances arrived and they were taken to the hospital. Before the EMTs could destroy Bella's jacket I took it off of her. I had bought this for her as a gift for becoming Ann's godmother; no way are they going to ruin it!
As soon as when got to the hospital we called Carlisle to tell him what happened and how it differed from my vision. He was on his way. He told us not to tell Charlie, it might give him another stroke.
The doctor told us that Bella just fainted and will be ok. He said she also had a bruised cheek but it was prior to the accident. I could only think of one thing as to how she got that damn bruise, Jacob… The doctor said we could stay with her and that she could go home when she wakes up.
Edward was more serious he has a concussion and because he passed out he went into a coma. They had no idea when he would wake up. What are the three fates doing! Just sitting there going duh!
Third person:
The three sisters sat in their living room staring at their TV/painting shocked. On the screen was the accident and Edward slipping into death's hands, literally! She was there with her scythe at Edward's throat ready to take his soul to the meadow of judgment. (The place you go to for final judgment. heaven or hell.)
Taryn grabbed her cell and quickly called Karyn the sister of Death. She is their half sister. All three looked up at the screen to see a very aggravated girl pulling her scythe away from her victim to pull out her cell phone that was playing down with the sickness. (Very fitting don't cha think!)
"What I'm busy!" Karyn seethed into the phone. She went back to what she was doing only to have her sister's scream for her to stop.
"What? His name was texted to me after he saved Bella Swan. I have to; he traded his life for hers..." Karyn explained.
"But you can't! They both have to live to save each other's souls! His soul is so tainted if he dies he will become the strongest Black Soul we have ever seen! Just don't take his soul to the meadow of judgment!" Taryn pleaded in to the phone.
"What the hell am I going to do with him then?" Karyn asked in annoyance.
"Put him in a spiritual coma. He'll be dead but not dead. He want remember a thing." Jess stated in a stroke of genius.
"Alright, but just until we get this shit straightened out!" They hung up and Karyn put Edward's soul in so a spiritual bubble.
Bella's POV:
I wake up to the sound of my alarm clock but it didn't sound like my alarm. I fought against the gravity that was holding my eye lids down to see a hospital room. Then everything came back full force. Jacob leaving me on the fucking side of the road after hitting me in the face. Then the van almost hitting me. Then Edward saving my life by pushing me out the way.
I shot up and the heart monitor went wild. Alice, Esme and Rose ran to my side looking relieved that I was awake.
"Bella, did Jacob hit you?" Alice came right out and said it.
'Wow that was blunt, good old Alice!I sighed and shock my head.
"No what makes you think that?" I said not wanting to say the trust.
"One you have a bruised cheek, two you were walking to the diner." I tried to play it off but she held up her hand and said, "I saw it Bella, you walking to the diner and being crushed by the van. Bella, you died in my vision!" She started to yell as she spoke.
"What? I did in your vision, but you visions are always right…what changed it?" I asked with wide eyes.
"I'm guessing Edward changed it when he made the decision to tackle you out the way." Rose spoke up. 'Oh Edward, I almost forgot!'
"How is he? I know he hit his head and he was bleeding...that's why I fainted; I smelled it thanks to someone squeezing the breath out of me!" I glared at Alice. Then Esme began to cry…oh god!
"He's in a coma because he passed out. You know from experience that you can't fall asleep or even pass out when you have a concussion." Alice stated calmly.
"I'm so, so, so, so, sorry!" I began to feel guilty. "Do they know when he'll wake up?" I asked. Alice shook her head saying no.
"You on the other hand, the doctor wants to speak to you first, but you can go home. " She left to get the doctor.
"Esme go sit with Edward….I'm fine, go." She tried to protest but I shooed her to her son. A few minutes later Alice came back with the doctor.
"Ms. Swan I'm Dr. Thomas I want to ask you about the bruise on your cheek." The doctor asked in a serious tone.
"My boyfriend and I got into an argument while on our way to the movies. He left me on the side of the road. When I ran after him I tripped and that's how I bruised my cheek…" I trailed of f looking down at the floor.
"He left you!" Rose and Alice yelled shocked and pissed off. I just nodded yes and asked if I could leave. The doctor said yes and Alice gave me a bag with new cloths since the EMT's destroyed the ones I was wearing.
After getting dresses Alice handed me my coat. I thanked her for saving it. She took me home and told me to stay in bed. She would come that after noon seeing as it was two in the morning. I would tell Charlie about what happen later. It needs to be done gently but not about what happened with Jake. I just can't do that. With that in thought I went to bed.
Third person:
The girls watch as an unconscious Bella lay on a lumpy hospital bed and Edward in a coma. Bella on the right and Edward on the left of the TV screen. They had no idea what would happen to him until Karyn arrived with his soul and they could discuss what to do. Just then everything became gloomy as Karyn walked in looking annoyed.
"Ok let's get this over with. I have to off Billy Mays today." She said annoyed. (R.I.P. Billy Mays! I always had an urge to buy something when he did his infomercials!)
"Yes, well he has to live so I say we trade someone else like we did for Bella with Jessica." Taryn spoke out. Karyn shook her head 'no' and with that the four argued for hours. A knock on the front door interrupted there fist fight. Yes it came to that.
Esme's POV:
As I sat by my son I couldn't help but think off all the bad things that plagued his heart. He was once so sweet and kind to everyone. But now he is here so close to death. I pray he lives to accomplish his goal of returning to his old self. I was brought back to reality by a tap on my shoulder.
"Mrs. Cullen?" I looked up to see a lovely women smiling at me. I nodded and said, "Please call me Esme." I smiled sweetly.
"I'm Patty and I here as a volunteer to comfort the patient family members. I heard of your son condition and thought you could use comfort from another mother." She said as she sat down next to me.
'She has kids? She only looks twenty-two?'
"I have all girls. A triples and one other daughter. They are quite a hand full. How about you? Do you have any more children?" She stated as he smiled.
'Wow!' was all I could think.
"Yes I do Alice and Emmett. They will be here later today."
Soon we were talking for hours about our children and what trouble they got into all the time and how grown up they are now. Patty's girls were still teens. The triplets Taryn, Jess and Stacey are always fighting with their sister Karyn. She always has to step in and stop them. We laughed and I grabbed my boys hand and rubbed it.
"Is there a lady in his life, I mean a wife or something like that?" She asked in a motherly way. I just shook my head.
"He was engaged but she left him. Ever since he's never been the same." I told her everything that happened. She was as shocked and angry as I was that something so horrible could happen. Soon she had to leave and so did I. Carlisle was coming to take my place while I rest and everything.
Before I left I wanted to show my gratitude for the volunteer making me feel like there was hope for my son. As I passed the nurses' station I did just that.
"Excuse me I wanted to say that Patty was a great help." The nurse looked at me like I was crazy.
"Who's Patty?" She asked confused.
"The volunteer that comes here, her name is Patty." I said confused.
"There are no volunteers here today; they never come on Fridays, Saturdays or Sundays." She stated as se looked back at her chart.
'What? Then who was Patty?' I thought as I thanked her anyway and I went home.
Third person:
Jess answered the door to find her mother or should I say Mother Nature. She looked young and beautiful, her looks about the age of a twenty-two year old even though she is really older than the universe. Without a word she walked to the living room and sat on the chair between the couches. She waited for Jess to return to the living room to sit with her sisters. The Fates sat on the left couch and Death on the right.
"Since you can't make a decision I did my own investigation and made one. First; I paid Miss Swan a visit and then I spoke to Esme in human form and I must say she loves her children with every fiber of her being, and she love her daughter-in-laws not to mention Bella. And my decision is..."
[To Be Continued!]
-This is My Seam! -
A/N:
Ok tell me you love it. Your reviews are like my addiction, please review! Thanks to booboo(dot)kitty2(dot)0for being Patty AKA: Mother Nature!
Will Edward wake up or sleep forever? To find out review and stay tuned and take this time to get popcorn and soda!