The Great Mouse Detective Basil's Sister Chapter 4 ~ Rachel & Ratigan

Disclaimer: I do not own The Great Mouse Detective it is owned by Eve Titus and The Walt Disney Company, I don't own any of the characters. I only own my 2 OC characters Rachel & Brittney. Hope you enjoy this story and on with the chapter.

3rd Person's POV:

Inside a prison, a mechanical robot is pouring tea into a cup. Hiram is working at a podium, controlling its movements. Ratigan is at the door, monitoring his progress while his sister was standing next to him. Ratigan's voice is oily and gentlemanlike while Rachel's voice was just as sinister as her brothers she could be more manipulative if needed.

Ratigan: (Chuckles evilly) "Quite an ingenious scheme, eh, Flaversham? And aren't you proud to be a part of it?"

Hiram: "This whole thing...i-i-it's monstrous!"

He continues working at the controls, getting the robot to pour a spoonful of sugar into the teacup and stir.

Ratigan: "We will have our device ready by tomorrow evening, won't we? You know what will happen if you...fail?"

In Ratigan's hands was a small gold bell which obviously holds a certain threat. He rings it once, but instead of being afraid, Hiram becomes angry and defiant.

Hiram: "I-I-I don't care!"

He jerks hard on the controls, making the robot dump the cup of tea on its head. The robot seizes the teapot and pours that onto its head as well, then hurls it towards Ratigan, who dodges just in time.

The robot was flailing around and finally stops, but not before squirting oil out, which lands on Ratigan's coat. The rat scowls at the resultant stain. Ratigan wiped the oil away as Hiram comes to him.

Hiram: "You can do what you want with me. I won't be a part of this... this...this evil any longer!"

Ratigan breathes out his cigarette smoke, not amused of what Hiram said.

Ratigan: (Biting off rage and smiles) "Mmm... (Normally) Very well. If that is your decision."

Rachael noticed Olivia's ballerina doll.

Rachel: "Oh, uh, by the way, I'm taking the liberty of having your daughter brought here".

She pick's up Olivia's ballerina doll and winds it up.

Ratigan knew where his sister was going and decided to agree on her decision by joining.

Hiram: (gasps) "O-Olivia?"

Ratigan: "Yes. Hm-hm, yes."

Ratigan sets the doll down and watches it dance.

Ratigan: (Mockingly) "We would spend many a sleepless night if anything unfortunate were to befall her."

Hiram: "You...you wouldn't?!"

Ratigan picks up the doll again, and squeezes it until it breaks. He gazes at the doll in mock sorrow, then lunges threateningly at Hiram.

Ratigan & Rachel: (Yelling) "FINISH IT, FLAVERSHAM!"

With a heavy heart, Hiram does as he's told. Outside, Ratigan was humming to himself as he writes a list while Rachel on the other hand was going back to the barrel to see the thugs for their next assignment.

Ratigan: "Oh, I love it when I'm nasty."

He looks above the doorway to another barrel, where Fidget was hanging from the faucet, sleeping.

Ratigan: "Fidget?"

Fidget didn't wake up.

Ratigan: (Calling back in Fidgets ear) "FIDGET!"

Startled, the bat falls from his perch and rolls down the stairs by Ratigan.

Ratigan: "Bright and alert as always. Here's the list. You know what to do, and no mistakes!"

Fidget looks at the list.

Fidget: "No, no. No mistakes, sir."

Fidget quickly reads the list.

Fidget: "Tools, gears, girl, uniforms..."

Impatiently, Ratigan yells from the doorway.

Ratigan: NOW, Fidget!

Fidget: "I'm going, I'm going! I'm going!"

Fidget rushes over to a drain grate, lifts it up and disappears below.

Inside the barrel, Ratigan was approaching his throne as his sister was holding a cigarette for her brother, being cheered by his men. He sits down and holds out the cigarette that his sister gave him. Several hands offer lit matches, and he lights it and inhales, blowing out several smoke rings.

Ratigan: "My friends and sister, we are about to embark on the most odious, the most evil, the most diabolical scheme of our illustrious career. A crime to top all crimes...a crime that will live in infamy!"

Most of his men are cheering at that bit of news, save one mouse, Bartholomew, whose attention is focused on his empty mug. He holds it upside down and watches sadly as the last drop of beer falls to the floor.

Ratigan holds up a newspaper featuring the Queen's picture on the front page.

Ratigan: "Tomorrow evening, our beloved monarch celebrates her Diamond Jubilee. And...with the enthusiastic help of our good friend, Mr. Flaversham..."

The mice chuckle.

Ratigan: "...it promises to be a night she will never forget!"

He burns her picture with his cigarette. The thugs became frighten with a gasp.

Ratigan: "Her last night...and our first, as supreme ruler of all mousedom!"

Ratigan messes up his hair and collar as his men cheer for him. He calmly pins his collar back and smoothes his hair, then saunters down the red carpet as a spotlight shines on him and an evil tune plays. His sister came down with her cane on her side.

One of his men hands him his top hat, which he rolls down his arms before putting it on. He gives an evil laugh and begins to sing.

Ratigan: (Singing) "From the brains that brought you the Big Ben Caper The head that made headlines in every newspaper And wondrous things like the Tower Bridge Job That cunning display that made Londoners sob..."

Meanwhile, Ratigan twirls his cane around a rope.

Ratigan:"Now comes the real tour de force."

Ratigan: "Tricky and wicked, of course."

And yanks on it, causing wine to pour out onto a fountain.

Bartholomew's tail is wagging at the chance for more liquor, and he tosses his empty glass over his shoulder, and rushes over to the fountain, drinking from one of the spouts.

Ratigan: "Our earlier crimes were fine for their times. But now that we're at it again."

Ratigan kicks Bartholomew into the fountain.

Ratigan: "An even grimmer plot has been simmering In our great criminal brains."

Thugs: (Singing) "Even meaner? You mean it? Worse than the widows and orphans you two drowned?"

Bartholomew drunkenly sits up and hiccups as the rest of the thugs lift Ratigan up into their arms, spinning him around.

Thugs: "You're the best of the worst around Oh, Ratigan & Rachel Oh, Ratigan & Rachel The rest fall behind" Bartholomew durkenly climbs out of the fountain and faints.

Thugs: "To Ratigan & Rachel To Ratigan & Rachel The world's greatest criminal minds."

His men pull back as Ratigan was seated at a harp with his sister sitting on Ratigans throne. The lighting becomes blue as he plays.

Ratigan: "Thank you, Thank you. But it hasn't all been champagne and caviar. We've had our share of adversity. Thanks to those miserable second-rate detectives..."

Ratigan directs his gaze to a small mouse toy dressed in a detective suit, needles poking at it.

Ratigan: "Brittney & Basil of Baker Street."

The Thugs boo heavily.

Ratigan: (Mock crying) "For years, those insufferable pipsqueaks have interfered with our plans. We haven't had a moment's peace of mind."

Thugs: "Aww!"

Bartholomew sniffles and begins to cry! The lighting turns red as the illusion is shattered.

Ratigan: "But, all that's in the past! This time, nothing, not even Basil or Brittney, can stand in our way!

The lighting becomes normal.

Ratigan: "All will bow before us!"

The Thugs bow.

Thugs: "Oh, Ratigan & Rachel Oh, Ratigan & Rachel You're tops and that's that To Ratigan & Rachel To Ratigan & Rachel..."

Bartholomew drunkenly finishes the verse...

Bartholomew: To Ratigan & Rachel, the world's greatest rats! (hiccups)

Ratigan spits out his wine in shock while his sister looked at the intoxicated mouse in shock. Thr thugs gasp in terror.

Ratigan spins while Rachel was getting out of the chair heading towards her brother,while RATIGAN was towering over Bartholomew.

Ratigan: "What...was...that?!"

Innocently, Bartholomew hiccups again.

Ratigan: "What did you call us?"

Thug 1: "Oh, oh, he didn't mean it, Professors."

Bill the Lizard: "I-it was just a slip of the tongue".

Ratigan ignores the thugs and lifts up Bartholomew by his sweater.

Ratigan: (to Bartholomew was break free) "We are NOT RATS!"

Thug 2: "Course you're not. You're both a mouse!"

Thug 1: "Yeah, that's right. Right! A mouse."

Bill the Lizard: "Yeah, but big mice !"

Ratigan & Rachel: "SILENCE!"

Ratigan & Rachel both throw Bartholomew to go outside. He rolls and shakes his head as he sits up.

Ratigan: "Oh, our dear Bartholomew... I'm afraid that you've gone and upset us."

Ratigan pulls out the bell from his vest pocket.

Rachel: (Dramatically) "You know what happens when someone upsets us..."

Ratigan rings the bell, and his men gasp in terror as they look to the alleyway, where a shadow was approaching. An enormously fat cat – Felicia - was approaching the oblivious Bartholomew.

Bartholomew: (Singing, drunkenly) "Oh, Ratigan & Rachel Oh, Ratigan & Rachel You're the tops and that's that. (hic) Oh dear. To Ratigan & Rachel To Ratigan & Rachel"

The cat has picked up Bartholomew and all we see was the shadow of the mouse hovering over the cat's open jaws.

Bartholomew: "To Ratigan & Rachel...the world's greatest-"

The Thugs are cowering in the doorway as Ratigan himself was enjoying a cigarette as Rachel was covering her eyes.

A gulping noise was heard along with the cat's content meow. Two of the Thugs remove their hats and the third sniffles as he wipes a tear from his eye. Ratigan was cooing over the cat, wiping her mouth with his handkerchief.

Ratigan: "Tsk, tsk, tsk. Oh, Felicia, my precious, my baby."

He hugs Felicia.

Ratigan: (Fatherly) "Did Daddy's little honey bun enjoy her tasty treat?"

Felicia burps in his face. Ratigan looks a little dismayed, but he recovers and struts back towards his terrified men and sister.

Ratigan: "I trust there will be no further interruptions".

He clears his throat and wraps his arms around his men.

Ratigan: "And now, as you were singing?"

Singing is clearly the last thing they have on their minds as they huddle close together. But as Ratigan pulls out the bell again, they get their inspiration back.

Thugs: "Even louder We'll shout it!"

Several of the thugs are now rushing towards him, handing him a robe, a crown, and a diamond topped scepter. Thugs: "No one can doubt what we know you 2 can do."

Thugs: "You're more evil than even you Oh, Ratigan & Rachel Oh, Ratigan & Rachel You're one of a kind To Ratigan & Rachel To Ratigan & Rachel"

The Thugs begin using Ratigan's many jewels to form a pyramid. The mouse on the bottom can't keep his balance on the pearl, and they all tumble.

Above, others have been swinging from chandeliers, and one mouse begins to fall. Ratigan holds out his robe to catch him, but at the last moment, pulls back, letting the mouse hit the floor. The Thugs dramatically sing the final line of the song.

Thugs: "The world's greatest criminal..."

Ratigan holds out his robe to catch him, but at the last moment, pulls back, letting the mouse hit the floor. The Thugs dramatically sing the final line of the song.

Thugs: "...minds!"

As the song ends, they offer one last toast, while Ratigan finishes the rest of his wine. He smiles, and the image cuts back to Basil's flat, first showing Ratigan's picture.