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Chapter Three
ThunderVolt
Two Perspectives
Everyone stared at ThunderVolt and Rainbow, Applejack then spoke, "Now wait just a god darn minute, he's yer brother? "Rainbow nodded as she stared at ThunderVolt, "I bet you just wanted to come here, and go away again, huh?"
Thunder felt his tongue numb again, he just let his mouth agape. "What do you even want from me Thunder, you left me alone with our parents, do you just want to become a thief or you just want to come here to see me? "Rainbow questioned, still having a face with contempt. "I came here to see-"
"If you just wanted to see me, why didn't you just come back twenty years ago!?"Thunder frowned, he couldn't explain what happened to him, because Twilight is an Alicorn, that means she knows the princess, I can't go back now,he thought.
He just stared at his white blankets as the mane six stared at him. He heard Rainbow Dash say, "Yeah, I thought so. Twilight, I'm out a' here." He heard her hoof steps, and it faded.
He lifted his head to see that there are only five mares in the room, the rest of the mares stared at him. Twilight looked at him, "What is going on with Rainbow, what happened with Rainbow and you?" Thunder croaked, "I don't want to talk about it."
Before Twilight could reply, the nurse came in, "Alright my little ponies, Thunder needs some rest." The mane six went out from the room, and left Thunder alone. He whispered to himself, "Only you knew Rainbow, only you knew."
Twilight Sparkle
After they exit the hospital, everyone started to talk. "Something isn't right girls, Rainbow and ThunderVolt aren't tellin' the truth," Applejack explained. The others agreed. "I don't know what is going on, but we have to make Rainbow tell the truth," Twilight ordered. Everybody agreed. "Ok, let's split up, Pinkie, AJ, and Rarity, I want you to see ThunderVolt. Fluttershy and I will see Rainbow Dash. Is that clear to everypony?"Twilight asked. Everbody nodded. "Alright everypony , let's go, "Twilight ordered.
Twilight and Fluttershy lift off to the path of Rainbow Dash's house, as the rest walk back to the hospital. Twilight could feel the air drifting through her mane, thinking that this is what Rainbow Dash felt like through flying, feeling free, no stress,and the wind in her mane. As she felt the same way, they arrived at the patio of Rainbow's cloud house.
Twilight rang the doorbell, after a few seconds, the door opened. Behind it was an angry Rainbow, who must have cried as her eyes were wet.
"Hi Twilight, why are you here, are you saying I was too harsh to Thunder? "She questioned. "That's why we are here for, we want to question you, "Twilight said. Rainbow scowled,"Look, I don't even like him, he abandoned me."
Rainbow's voice croaked when she said the last word, she turned around, releasing a tear. "Rainbow, what about your parents,"Twilight asked. Rainbow spoke in a firm voice, "I do love my parents, but Thunder is like a dad to me. A second dad."
Rainbow sighed, "He gave me his stuff, he was very generous, he gave me his shades, his music player, and he gave me a Wonderbolt stuff toy."Rainbow sighed again, "I forgot to let you in, didn't I?"
As they were still outside, and it began to rain. "Let's just get you in here, "Rainbow spoke, opened the door wide for them to enter. Inside was a living room, there was a blue cotton couch, glass table, two plants in the corners, and a window, through it was a view of the plains, and half of Ponyville.
Rainbow motioned them to sit on the couch, as she gets marmalade for them. After a minute and a half, Rainbow came back, holding two glasses of marmalade, and set it on the glass table.
Twilight and Fluttershy drank, while Twilight started to give Rainbow Dash questions. "I want to know, why do you hate ThunderVolt?"Rainbow sighed, "I told you, he abandoned me when I was a filly."
Twilight heard her voice crack, she must have took it hard when he was gone. "I don't know why or how he disappeared, or abandoned me, the fact is, I hate him for being such a jerk." Twilight felt sorry for her, losing a brother ,that felt like losing Shining Armor, and not seeing him again. She put a hoof on Rainbow's back, signaling her that she smiled then sighed, "I'm sorry Twilight, but I missed him after so many years."
Twilight knew that Rainbow wanted to shed a tear, Twilight knew she didn't want to do it, Rainbow didn't want to show signs that she is hovered out of Twilight's grasp," Why don't you stay here until the storm goes down?"Fluttershy and Twilight nodded.
AppleJack
As Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie went into the hospital, they talked to a nurse who is behind a counter, writing something on a clipboard from her pen that was held in her mouth. "Excuse me? "Rarity got her attention, as she looked at them with the pen still in her mouth.
"Yefp, waff doof foo neef?"she asked, her voice muffled by the pen in her mouth. "Sorry, we can' hear yeh,"Applejack spoke. The nurse noticed the pen was still in her mouth and set it on the table, "Yes, what do you need? "Rarity answered, "We want to visit the pegasus stallion, ThunderVolt, in room B3."The nurse took her pen and wrote on a piece of paper, and put it aside.
"Only twenty minutes, he needs his rest, "As they followed the path to the room, they found him laying on his bed, looking at the ceiling. He looked at them with a frown, and looked back at the ceiling.
"Why are you frowning, you're suppose to be smiling?" Pinkie Pie protested. Applejack silenced her as Thunder needed time to think as he looked dull.
He finally spoke, but it sounded like a frog croaking, "Why are you here? "Rarity told him that they are going to question him. Thunder sighed, "What is your first question, I have all day, as I'm stuck here."
Before Applejack could answer, Pinkie asked, "Why aren't you smiling?" Applejack smacked her hoof on her face. Thunder grimaced, "Look, Pinkie was it? I didn't have a smile since I lost her. "Pinkie spoke, "Who?" Applejack felt his voice whisper, "Rainbow Dash,when they took me away." Applejack asked, "Who took yah away?"
Thunder looked away, "I don't want to talk about it. I bet you are going to tell this to Twilight, I just don't want her to just turn me in! "Applejack heard his words, "What do yah mean turn you in?" Thunder sighed, "Just don't tell Twilight."Applejack spoke, "We'll promise."
Pinkie did her Pinkie Promise, and said, "Losing a friend's trust will make me lose a friend forever. "Rarity said, "I will promise."
Thunder sighed, "I was a great brother, caring for her, giving her things that she wanted. She loved me and told me she wouldn't be here without me. I wanted to be a teacher, scientist, and researcher, I actually made a new species called Fizzers,they form into an object or pony if you think at it. I made it because of my curiosity, they're quite harmless. I forgot the no making new breeds law, and Celestia locked me up in the dungeons right on the spot.
The three ponies looked at him in surprise. "Wait, the law said no dangerous breeds created, not cute little thing amajigs,"Applejack reminded him."Yeah ,I know that, but something was wrong, she felt like the breeds could make chaos, but I tested them,and they were fine. She didn't want to make a big mistake, so she locked me up for twenty years.
" But before that, I actually realized what was happening, I was playing outside with Rainbow Dash. She was practicing her flying skills, she didn't have her cutie mark that time. When I looked through the window ,I saw my parents, arguing with two pegasi guards of Celestia. They were talking about me, they're here because I was arrested for doing something illegal, but they weren't agreeing with them that I was guilty."
"So the guards hit my father to threaten us, I couldn't hold it anymore. At that day, I went out of my house, and turned me in. My parents don't know where I was, thinking I was lost or kidnapped. I did it to make sure my family was safe, so they don't get hurt. No prisoner could stay sane in the dungeon, but when one day when I was in there, I sneaked my saddle bags in. One thing kept me sane, it was my scrap book, could you get that book beside my bed, the nurse say I must rest in bed."
Applejack took the book beside his bed, the cover was a picture of Rainbow Dash as a filly, hugging ThunderVolt, the title wrote:Dashie and Me. She gave it to Thunder, he opened the first page, revealing pictures of Thunder and Rainbow Dash when she was a filly. Thunder smiled and shed a tear when he saw the memories flooding back into his mind.
"This book made my heart warm, praying to anypony who could hear me, "Thunder put the book back into his saddlebags.
Applejack looked at him, "So you just protected them the whole time?" Thunder nodded. Applejack said, "We should talk ta Rainbow,she must know." For her to stop as Rarity stopped her path, "Remember what Thunder said, we shouldn't tell Rainbow Dash."Applejack looked at her with confusion, "But he said only Twi, so there wasn't any rule to not tell Rainbow, come on."
Rarity spoke, "Because he said, 'Don't tell Twilight'. Doesn't mean we tell Rainbow Dash. "Applejack looked at her," What do ya mean Rarity?" Rarity answered, "Even if we can tell Rainbow Dash, we can't, Rainbow Dash will not understand. We need her to trust him until the time is right."
AppleJack nodded. "Let's just get out, we must have been here for too long, "Rarity reminded. They exited the room, and out the hospital. As I'm the most dependable pony, I will keep my promise, until the time has come, Applejack thought as they went outside, the storm went down. They saw Twilight and Fluttershy waiting for them," Come on everypony, we have news."
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