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Naruto was working hard. He thought he had the Hiraishin ready to use the second step. The steps were complex but still important. He added a tick next to the first step, then read the remaining steps:
Step 1: Learn to sense seals. This was a technique use mainly to sense explosive tags but not many people knew it
Step 2: Teleport by looking at the seal.
Step 3: Short range teleport without looking
step 4: Teleport more than once within 5 seconds at close range. This was a hard one. The control needed was unnatural.
step 5: Long range teleport
Step 6: Teleport more than once within 5 seconds at long range. This step was the full Hiraishin.
The only problem with doing the next step was his father warning in his notes that this could be fatal. He needed a medic ninja there in case he did something like leaving a limp behind, leaving part of his bones behind, cracks, leaving organs. Naruto read about one person that tried to copy the Hiraishin, teleported, messed up completely by leaving his skin behind. This was the final straw in 3rd Shinobi war and after, it was forbidden to try to copy it, unless Minato tried to teach it to you. How could he ask a medic that hated him to help him learn the greatest justu the Yondaime made? If he tried it by himself then he could risk some serious damage. The only reason he was paying attention to the warning label was the death ratio for this justu. Realising it was late; he decided to visit the monument to his father. This was built after his heroic defeat of the Kyubi. It heroically had the Yondaime using a Rasengan on the fox.
The reason Naruto visited late was because the villagers hated him to go near. The reason Naruto visited it was at first because the Yondaime was his hero. More recently he visited it to talk to his father. He knew were Minato was buried but there was no way to enter the Hokage grave. Naruto began to recount his week.
"Hey Dad, I'm fine-ish. Compared with what I normally go through this had been quite a good week, but it could have been better. Good news I've past the genin exam. It was a piece of cake but I couldn't show off my real skills. If I moved too much like you then I'm sure someone will burn my house done again. I came dead last; then again that isn't really a bad thing. Everyone will underestimate me and some powerful ninjas were dead last. I lost my first fight in the taijutsu test; I did the justu test perfectly. The Kunai test was easy, I got 90%. I think I got a harder written exam, when everyone was talking about it afterwards they mentioned questions I never got.
Turns out I've spent too much time learning seals and not enough history or different justus. I found a better taijutsu form than your one. It's my great-great-great-granddad's style. It's the same basics as you one but more suited for me.
I think I'm ready for the second step of the Hiraishin, but I can't really try it. I need to gain experience but I can't risk hurting myself. What if I got shadow clones to try it? A sort of trial and error mode, that could work" he froze hearing a trig snap. "Got to go Dad, see you next week, Love ya"
With this, Naruto started to move towards the noise. Suddenly he was kicked, sent flying back.
"You know if been waiting for this, a chance to kill the demon, I've waited for so long" a voice said.
"Mizuki-sensei, what are you doing?" Naruto tried to reason as he dodged a kunai.
Without responding Mizuki threw multiple shuriken at him. Naruto waited for the pain, until he noticed that someone else had jumped in the way. Iruka
"Naruto, run, get help, Mizuki has stolen a forbidden scroll" Iruka commanded. Out of the 10 shurikens Mizuki threw, 7 hit Iruka, the worse was a deep cut in his right leg.
"Iruka-sensei" Naruto started to panic
"Demon, do you know why everyone hates you and no one tells you? It's because a law made when 12 years ago." Mizuki said trying to distract Naruto.
"NO THAS FORBIDEN, NARUTO RUN" Iruka screamed, trying to get it his feet.
Smiling Mizuki continued. "The point of this law was to prevent anyone from telling you" he paused for dramatic effect, laughing.
"That the Yondaime sealed the Kyubi into me?" Naruto responded calmly.
"How the hell did you find that out brat?"
Naruto spat out, "Everyone has secrets Mizuki-sensei."
This puzzled Mizuki, whilst he knew he could kill Naruto, he didn't have time for a game of hide and seek. He had to break his spirit then move in for the kill. Naruto was famous for being able to hide when he wanted. Suddenly an idea came to mind, smiling he continued.
"Then you know that no one will ever love you. You killed their loved ones. Even Iruka hates you, after all you killed his parents."
"STOP IT" Iruka screamed, near tears.
"If I don't kill him now then what happens when he tries to destroy the village again, he's a cold blooded killer. What do you think Iruka?"
During this time Naruto remanded silent. He knew all of this was true, slowing he was building a wall of despair around him.
"Wrong Kit" a deep booming voice came out of nowhere. "There are some people who care"
"Your right, the demon would destroy the village the first chance he got. But Naruto isn't the Kyubi. I acknowledge him as my student, a leaf village genin and future Hokage. I'm proud I got the chance to teach him."
Naruto had tears falling down his face; no one had ever acknowledged him before. Someone didn't believe he was the fox.
"you know I was gonna kill you demon lover after I killed the brat, but I think I'll do it now." Mizuki taunted as he threw a kunai at Iruka's head. Naruto broke out of his trance, activated his seal and drew his sword, deflecting the kunai into the ground.
"If you touch Iruka-sensei, I'll kill you." Naruto growled, returning his sword into his holster.
"HA HA, like the dead last could even touch me, I'll demolish you in one touch"
Naruto started the hand signs for his shadow clones. "Try it trash. I'll return it a thousand times over"
"Bring it demon fox"
"KAGE BUSHIN NO JUSTU"
A thousand clones surrounded Mizuki. Mizuki froze, "how could the demon brat do this"
Half of the clones charged him. Mizuki took a good number out. Whilst he was distracted, Iruka noticed that the real Naruto and a clone started to perform a technique that didn't require hand signs. A blue spinning glow appeared in his hand.
"What the, that's impossible" Iruka said in complete shock when he figured out what Naruto was doing.
"RESENGAN" Naruto cried as he slammed his attack in Mizuki's gut. This attack sent him flying into a tree, knocking him out cold.
The shear amount of charka used, knocked Naruto out. The last things he did before the blackness took him was to use his seal to hid his sword, and ask Iruka not to tell anyone about the Rasengan.
Still need a name for naruto sword.
Thanks for the advice on Hinata's stuttering
I'll try to get the next chapter out in a week time. After this one i'll try to make sure every Saturday or Sunday a new chapter will be out unless i get problems.
Any questions about it so far or ways to improve the story or writing style I'll be happy to receive. This is my first non-one off fan fiction.
Thanks for reading Please review. Reviews help me to improve the story
