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Jay- Thanks for reading and for the suggestion. I appreciate it.
Please stick around for more updates. Thanks again.
The Inspiration- Wow, What a wonderful review (I guess that's why you call yourself the Inspiration!). I am still working on the length, and hopefully this chapter is going to be a bit longer. Thanks again and I hope you like this chapter.
Also, I just wanted to remind everyone that this is A/U. Meaning the ages are different, I decided to make Bra 17 turning 18 and Goten 22. Also all of the Saiya-Jins have tails.
Anyway with out further ado, here is the fourth chapter of Golden.
Please Read, Review and Enjoy :)
Foreignkid1
Golden
Last time:
Goten looked towards Vegeta first. He nodded his head and started towards the door his two other family members and Bra had walked out of.
Unbeknownst to Bra, Vegeta had been watching the entire exchange.
He growled suddenly to himself.
Yes, he would have to watch his princess and that third class spawn's brat.
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Bra closed her eyes as she walked outside.
She could feel the warmth on her skin.
She smiled to herself and tucked a few strands of blue hair behind her ears. As she opened her eyes, her pupils constricted due to the brightness. It had become considerably warmer since this morning. The sun was out and warming up the earth's surface. Kami had given them a beautiful day. She slowed her pace as she came to her mother's garden. She glanced around at the many different species of trees and flowers her mother had planted. The colours and openness of the land her mother had created always made her think of an oasis. It was truly beautiful. Bra headed over to her spot as she called it. It was a beautiful tree that blossomed into an orange-gold colour, one of her favourite colours. The buds were showing but had not opened yet. After a good training session the demi Saiya-Jin loved to come outside and sit in her spot and allow her muscles to relax.
Walking under her tree Bra gazed up to the blue sky and began to ponder. She consciously loosened her tail around her waist and gracefully sat down and stretched her legs out in front of herself. She sighed and closed her eyes again and leaned back into the tree.
"I can't believe my birthday is coming up so soon" she stated out loud.
"It's hard to believe I am going to be turning 18. I wonder if Mom's going to throw a party?" Bra suddenly laughed to herself. Her mother makes excuses to have party's just to make her father mad and uncomfortable. She suddenly sighed out loud and blew her bangs off her forehead. For some reason or another she just didn't feel right lately. She couldn't describe her thoughts or feelings as of late. She just felt different. Bringing her right leg up Bra propped her elbow up on it and rested her head on her chin.
She could hear a bird singing near by.
She looked over to the house and saw her mother and Chi Chi. They were currently serving Goku and Gohan lemonade. They were all sitting at the Brief's picnic style table laughing about something.
Suddenly she thought about Goten.
Why had he looked at her like that? It was strange. It felt like, well she didn't know what it felt like. Bra sighed again. She just couldn't explain it. Bra Briefs the daughter of the famous Bulma Briefs and Prince Vegeta was at loss for words.
"Whatever" she breathed.
Picking herself up off the green grass and tightening her tail around her waist Bra started over to the table where her friends and family had gathered. Then she stopped. Where had her Father gone? She suddenly turned away and headed back into the complex. She knew her father.
He was waiting for her.
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He just couldn't explain it.
He had watched Bra fight with the energy blast with all her might and for some reason or another he was scared.
He had worried about her.
He was just about to leap to her aid when he had heard a laugh. He looked to Bra's father and saw him smirk. When he had looked back, Bra had taken the attack and defended herself against it. After that he just couldn't take his eyes off her. He noticed that she too could not turn from his gaze.
All he could see were her beautiful blue eyes.
Both demi Saiya-Jins wanted the other to break the stare first.
When the training simulation had ended it had broken the lock they had on each other. Goten had looked over at his Dad and brother, they were smiling and heading out of complex area. They seemed oblivious to what had taken place between the two. Then he saw her petite form leave shortly after.
Goten suddenly released the deep breath he had not realized he had been holding.
Then he felt it. Or rather Goten felt him. The power was immense.
Vegeta.
He squared his stance to him and was met with the most fierce and wild stare. Not wanting to back down Goten stared right back. After feeling as though he had been there long enough, he nodded to Vegeta and headed out the way the other three Saiya-Jins had left.
He could feel Vegeta's anger.
After leaving the complex, Goten had slipped his orange training shirt back on and headed towards the Brief's house. His mother and Bulma usually brought out something to drink after a morning training session. As he walked towards the home he wiped his hand over his forehead. The sun was out and the temperature was definitely higher.
Goten suddenly stopped dead in his tracks. He had smelt something faint in the air.
Turning to the area where it was coming from, he headed that way. Goten thought it smelt very sweet, like when his mother would take hot, fresh chocolate chip cookies out of the oven. Or something like that he smiled to himself. He was a Son after all. Quickening his pace Goten did not want to lose it. Soon the youngest Son realized that he was heading towards Bulma's garden. There he found himself standing amongst the beautiful trees and budding flowers.
But the smell was not of the blooming flowers.
As Goten scanned the utopian area he saw her.
She was sitting under a large tree with her back resting on it. She had her eyes closed and it looked as thought she was concentrating on something. Little strands of blue hair that had escaped her ponytail now framed her face. Goten quickly lowered his ki so that she could not sense him. He then quietly and stealthy crouched behind a near by tree and watched her. His tail tightened around his waist suddenly.
"Why am I here?" He thought to himself.
Spying on Bra Briefs his mind answered.
Goten angrily growled out loud.
At that exact time Bra opened her eyes and stood up. She said something so softly even his ears couldn't detect. Did she hear me he thought? Goten could suddenly feel the perspiration on his forehead and neck. What if she caught him? Maybe I should use Dad's Instant Transmission technique he thought to himself.
But Goten could not turn away from the angelic sight before him.
He watched her; Bra Briefs stand amongst the luscious garden.
He watched as she scrunched her nose with a thoughtful expression on her face.
He watched as she left in the direction of her home.
Goten sucked in some air and thanked Kami that she didn't see him. That would have been very uncomfortable. What would he have said? Yeah, sorry Bra I smelt something, followed my nose and have been staring at you ever since. That would go over well he thought. Goten stood up from his position behind the tree thinking that he would head over to house behind her.
Abruptly Bra stopped. Goten's eyes widen and he stayed completely still.
He was caught.
He watched as she turned towards the fighting complex area and coincidentally towards him and head that way.
Goten's breathing began to accelerate.
Too deeply in her thoughts Bra Briefs ran past him and didn't turn back.
She had never seen him.
Not wanting to go through that again, Goten headed towards the Briefs home. Leaving behind the colours and bunches of beautiful flowers and trees. He mentally praised himself for not getting caught. He grinned to ear to ear as he approached the Briefs house. There he could see Bulma and the rest of his family there. He waved and greeted them all. After acknowledging everyone at the table Goten swallowed. He had forgotten how thirsty he really was. Suddenly there was his mother, Chi Chi with a glass of cool lemonade. Goten took the glass of lemonade from his mother's hand that was offered to him.
He downed it quickly. Not hearing all the chatter going on around him.
His mother not noticing her son's vacant stare started talking about the upcoming birthday party.
He wasn't listening, however.
Son Goten was thinking about something else.
He was thinking about her.
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Taking her hair tie out of her hair Bra flipped the blue locks around and managed to re-tie the ponytail. She had been standing in front of the door for a minute or so now and she could feel her father's ki inside. He was training. She suddenly felt his ki spike and knew he was putting everything into it. "Like he always does" Bra stated. The girl's hand suddenly went back up to her hair. She smoothed it down. A nervous habit she seemed to have developed.
The girl was worried to enter the arena. She could always sense her father's moods and this was no exception.
She could feel him.
He was angry. Very angry.
An arena has no place for nerves she thought.
Taking a deep breath, Bra entered.
The demi Saiya-Jin kept her stance confident.
Standing in the middle of the arena with Blue ki swirling and rippling around his muscular body was Vegeta, Prince of Vegeta-sei. His black hair was swept like a flame a top his head, his black, loose training gi was ripped in many places. Scattered around him, littering the ground were pieces of her mother's fighting bot's. Vegeta lowered his ki and steady his breathing. He saw his daughter stand confidently in front of him. Her back was straight and her head held high.
He smirked.
He crossed his arms and with long strides made his way over to her.
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Sorry guys but I wanted to end it with a cliffy. Stay tuned for next time to see what happens with the Vegeta and Bra. Plus much, much more!!!!!
Anyway........PHEW!!!!!!
There you have it everyone, Chapter 4 of Golden is complete.
If I must say so myself this is my favourite of all chapters.
But, hey let me know what you think!!!
Thanks for reading.
Foreignkid1
Foreignkid1 here. Smiles brightly. I got 2 more reviews
----Foreignkid1 does a HAPPY DANCE----
Thanks everyone. Not only is it nice to feel appreciated but what excellent reviews.
Jay- Thanks for reading and for the suggestion. I appreciate it.
Please stick around for more updates. Thanks again.
The Inspiration- Wow, What a wonderful review (I guess that's why you call yourself the Inspiration!). I am still working on the length, and hopefully this chapter is going to be a bit longer. Thanks again and I hope you like this chapter.
Also, I just wanted to remind everyone that this is A/U. Meaning the ages are different, I decided to make Bra 17 turning 18 and Goten 22. Also all of the Saiya-Jins have tails.
Anyway with out further ado, here is the fourth chapter of Golden.
Please Read, Review and Enjoy :)
Foreignkid1
Golden
Last time:
Goten looked towards Vegeta first. He nodded his head and started towards the door his two other family members and Bra had walked out of.
Unbeknownst to Bra, Vegeta had been watching the entire exchange.
He growled suddenly to himself.
Yes, he would have to watch his princess and that third class spawn's brat.
==============
Bra closed her eyes as she walked outside.
She could feel the warmth on her skin.
She smiled to herself and tucked a few strands of blue hair behind her ears. As she opened her eyes, her pupils constricted due to the brightness. It had become considerably warmer since this morning. The sun was out and warming up the earth's surface. Kami had given them a beautiful day. She slowed her pace as she came to her mother's garden. She glanced around at the many different species of trees and flowers her mother had planted. The colours and openness of the land her mother had created always made her think of an oasis. It was truly beautiful. Bra headed over to her spot as she called it. It was a beautiful tree that blossomed into an orange-gold colour, one of her favourite colours. The buds were showing but had not opened yet. After a good training session the demi Saiya-Jin loved to come outside and sit in her spot and allow her muscles to relax.
Walking under her tree Bra gazed up to the blue sky and began to ponder. She consciously loosened her tail around her waist and gracefully sat down and stretched her legs out in front of herself. She sighed and closed her eyes again and leaned back into the tree.
"I can't believe my birthday is coming up so soon" she stated out loud.
"It's hard to believe I am going to be turning 18. I wonder if Mom's going to throw a party?" Bra suddenly laughed to herself. Her mother makes excuses to have party's just to make her father mad and uncomfortable. She suddenly sighed out loud and blew her bangs off her forehead. For some reason or another she just didn't feel right lately. She couldn't describe her thoughts or feelings as of late. She just felt different. Bringing her right leg up Bra propped her elbow up on it and rested her head on her chin.
She could hear a bird singing near by.
She looked over to the house and saw her mother and Chi Chi. They were currently serving Goku and Gohan lemonade. They were all sitting at the Brief's picnic style table laughing about something.
Suddenly she thought about Goten.
Why had he looked at her like that? It was strange. It felt like, well she didn't know what it felt like. Bra sighed again. She just couldn't explain it. Bra Briefs the daughter of the famous Bulma Briefs and Prince Vegeta was at loss for words.
"Whatever" she breathed.
Picking herself up off the green grass and tightening her tail around her waist Bra started over to the table where her friends and family had gathered. Then she stopped. Where had her Father gone? She suddenly turned away and headed back into the complex. She knew her father.
He was waiting for her.
=================
He just couldn't explain it.
He had watched Bra fight with the energy blast with all her might and for some reason or another he was scared.
He had worried about her.
He was just about to leap to her aid when he had heard a laugh. He looked to Bra's father and saw him smirk. When he had looked back, Bra had taken the attack and defended herself against it. After that he just couldn't take his eyes off her. He noticed that she too could not turn from his gaze.
All he could see were her beautiful blue eyes.
Both demi Saiya-Jins wanted the other to break the stare first.
When the training simulation had ended it had broken the lock they had on each other. Goten had looked over at his Dad and brother, they were smiling and heading out of complex area. They seemed oblivious to what had taken place between the two. Then he saw her petite form leave shortly after.
Goten suddenly released the deep breath he had not realized he had been holding.
Then he felt it. Or rather Goten felt him. The power was immense.
Vegeta.
He squared his stance to him and was met with the most fierce and wild stare. Not wanting to back down Goten stared right back. After feeling as though he had been there long enough, he nodded to Vegeta and headed out the way the other three Saiya-Jins had left.
He could feel Vegeta's anger.
After leaving the complex, Goten had slipped his orange training shirt back on and headed towards the Brief's house. His mother and Bulma usually brought out something to drink after a morning training session. As he walked towards the home he wiped his hand over his forehead. The sun was out and the temperature was definitely higher.
Goten suddenly stopped dead in his tracks. He had smelt something faint in the air.
Turning to the area where it was coming from, he headed that way. Goten thought it smelt very sweet, like when his mother would take hot, fresh chocolate chip cookies out of the oven. Or something like that he smiled to himself. He was a Son after all. Quickening his pace Goten did not want to lose it. Soon the youngest Son realized that he was heading towards Bulma's garden. There he found himself standing amongst the beautiful trees and budding flowers.
But the smell was not of the blooming flowers.
As Goten scanned the utopian area he saw her.
She was sitting under a large tree with her back resting on it. She had her eyes closed and it looked as thought she was concentrating on something. Little strands of blue hair that had escaped her ponytail now framed her face. Goten quickly lowered his ki so that she could not sense him. He then quietly and stealthy crouched behind a near by tree and watched her. His tail tightened around his waist suddenly.
"Why am I here?" He thought to himself.
Spying on Bra Briefs his mind answered.
Goten angrily growled out loud.
At that exact time Bra opened her eyes and stood up. She said something so softly even his ears couldn't detect. Did she hear me he thought? Goten could suddenly feel the perspiration on his forehead and neck. What if she caught him? Maybe I should use Dad's Instant Transmission technique he thought to himself.
But Goten could not turn away from the angelic sight before him.
He watched her; Bra Briefs stand amongst the luscious garden.
He watched as she scrunched her nose with a thoughtful expression on her face.
He watched as she left in the direction of her home.
Goten sucked in some air and thanked Kami that she didn't see him. That would have been very uncomfortable. What would he have said? Yeah, sorry Bra I smelt something, followed my nose and have been staring at you ever since. That would go over well he thought. Goten stood up from his position behind the tree thinking that he would head over to house behind her.
Abruptly Bra stopped. Goten's eyes widen and he stayed completely still.
He was caught.
He watched as she turned towards the fighting complex area and coincidentally towards him and head that way.
Goten's breathing began to accelerate.
Too deeply in her thoughts Bra Briefs ran past him and didn't turn back.
She had never seen him.
Not wanting to go through that again, Goten headed towards the Briefs home. Leaving behind the colours and bunches of beautiful flowers and trees. He mentally praised himself for not getting caught. He grinned to ear to ear as he approached the Briefs house. There he could see Bulma and the rest of his family there. He waved and greeted them all. After acknowledging everyone at the table Goten swallowed. He had forgotten how thirsty he really was. Suddenly there was his mother, Chi Chi with a glass of cool lemonade. Goten took the glass of lemonade from his mother's hand that was offered to him.
He downed it quickly. Not hearing all the chatter going on around him.
His mother not noticing her son's vacant stare started talking about the upcoming birthday party.
He wasn't listening, however.
Son Goten was thinking about something else.
He was thinking about her.
==================
Taking her hair tie out of her hair Bra flipped the blue locks around and managed to re-tie the ponytail. She had been standing in front of the door for a minute or so now and she could feel her father's ki inside. He was training. She suddenly felt his ki spike and knew he was putting everything into it. "Like he always does" Bra stated. The girl's hand suddenly went back up to her hair. She smoothed it down. A nervous habit she seemed to have developed.
The girl was worried to enter the arena. She could always sense her father's moods and this was no exception.
She could feel him.
He was angry. Very angry.
An arena has no place for nerves she thought.
Taking a deep breath, Bra entered.
The demi Saiya-Jin kept her stance confident.
Standing in the middle of the arena with Blue ki swirling and rippling around his muscular body was Vegeta, Prince of Vegeta-sei. His black hair was swept like a flame a top his head, his black, loose training gi was ripped in many places. Scattered around him, littering the ground were pieces of her mother's fighting bot's. Vegeta lowered his ki and steady his breathing. He saw his daughter stand confidently in front of him. Her back was straight and her head held high.
He smirked.
He crossed his arms and with long strides made his way over to her.
==================
Sorry guys but I wanted to end it with a cliffy. Stay tuned for next time to see what happens with the Vegeta and Bra. Plus much, much more!!!!!
Anyway........PHEW!!!!!!
There you have it everyone, Chapter 4 of Golden is complete.
If I must say so myself this is my favourite of all chapters.
But, hey let me know what you think!!!
Thanks for reading.
Foreignkid1