I'm FINALLY working on the next chapter after three months. I'm so sorry to all the people who have been waiting for me to update this story. And I want to finish it for you.
But I don't really have faith in it anymore. I've been reading a lot lately and I've realized that my writing isn't that good. I didn't even enjoy reading my own story after forgetting it for 3 months. I would really like some advice on how to make this story better before I continue. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! I'll be waiting!
Anyway here's the next chapter FINALLY!
"Gggrrrrrr…hmmp…," there's a –plop- like a brick hitting open water. "Aahhh," then a relaxed sigh. The toilet flushes and the door opens. A giant egg shaped man steps out.
"Now," he says closing the door behind him, "it's time to take care of business." He sits down in his swivel chair and prepares to press keys on his keyboard.
"DR. EGGMAN! YOU FORGOT TO WASH YOUR HANDS!" Bocoon screams flying towards him with a bottle of hand sanitizer.
"Oh shut up!" Eggman screams back trying to swat him away.
"DON'T TOUCH ME WHILE YOUR HANDS ARE FULL OF GERMS!"
Dr. Eggman growls. 'What the hell is with robots and germs?' he thought. The only time he ever feared his own robots was when they were having tantrums about germs. 'I swear they'd kill me for picking my nose!'
Dr. Eggman reluctantly began to sanitize his hands and was relieved to his the little robot calm down.
"So when are we ganna get that chaos emerald back Dr. Eggman?"
The evil genius looks at his array of screens. One in particular has a beeping, blinking, red dot in its center. The doctor chuckled to himself. Being the genius that he was, he had been clever enough to put a tracking device on the chaos emerald just before that hedgehog had stolen it from him.
"When I find out which of those miserable hedgehogs stole it from me," The mustachioed man spat. He knew Sonic and Shadow had both been in his secret lab at the same time. He also remembered seeing a certain bat. If she had stolen it surly Shadow would have taken it from her. But if Sonic got his hands on it … it is possible the two hedgehogs are fighting over it … or … could they be working together? There were too many variables to consider. He couldn't simply go to the emeralds location and hope to snatch the emerald.
"But Dr. Eggman. Look," Bocoon flies in front of his creator and presses play on his television/recording device. He hadn't told the doctor that he had already flew to the location in search of the emerald. Waiting for hi m to make a move had gotten boring and he wanted speed things up. He didn't understand why was so afraid to go after the emerald.
On the screen appeared Rouge. She seemed be having a seizure. Dr. Eggman furrowed his brows in confusion at the sight, but continued to watch. After a while the bat finally lay still and a red, bulky robot walked cautiously toward the door near Rouge. The robot pushes the door open as slowly and carefully as human being would stick their arm in a crocodiles mouth. As soon as the robot looks into the room … he is also succumbed to a seizure!
"Well, well, well," starts stroking his mustache, "I wonder what our little friends have gotten their hands onto."
The camera shifts so that the person watching the screen can see into the room. Eggman almost didn't want to look … almost.
Bocoon watches his creators reaction, too afraid to look at the screen himself … and his eyes widen in shock as Eggman breaks into a seizure identical to Rouge and Omega's!
THIS IS NOT THE WHOLE CHAPTER BY THE WAY! But I hope you can see where I'm going with this. Like I said , please give me some critique on my story. I should have the chapter finished soon.